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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - scifichick774 on February 13, 2004
    Oh my goodness. Okay, you did warn us about the mush factor, but I still wasn't expecting that much. LOL! Sometimes it's nice to have fluff inserted here and there though. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 13, 2004
    Okay now I'm hysterical. As always brilliant and thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - buttercup on February 13, 2004
    Aove ove letters. For some reason it felt like a spring day when I was reading this chapter. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on February 13, 2004
    OMG! That was such beautiful fluff! I loved every cottony, soft word! I don't know whose letter I loved most, though I have to say the letters between Lavender and Ron sure did make my heartttertter! You're a really talented writer! This whole story is just amazing!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 13, 2004
    Great chapter! Its wonderful how everyone is being paired off. I'm loving this. Thank you so much for updating so quickly.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 13, 2004
    Chapter 29... This is such a FABULOUS way to show how the love & lives of 6 people have changed & grown through their own words!!! Til chapter 30, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - jordy on February 13, 2004
    Wonderful, as always! Hope you are feeling better. My asthmatic 3 year old is sick now too. took her to the emergency room the other day, with blue lips. SCARY!! SHe also has been diagnosed with asthma induced ecsema. Had to get prescription soap, shampoo, and lotion. She's getting awfully expensive! Poor thing looks lie someone just slapped her cheeks-they are soo red!

    Anyways, I can't wait for the next update. Sitting on the edge of my seat with bated breath! You are so awesome for updating so frequently! Another story that I'm trying to follow hasn't been updated since before Christmas! Frustrating!

    I loved the part in the beginning of Harrys letter about being an idiot for 6 years--sounds exactly like my husband! It took me 2 years to get him to realize that I was a girl. Lol!
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  • From ANON - Jenny on February 13, 2004
    Re: Chap 29.

    I disagree with the post to WIKTT; for some reason, I feel that chap 28 was more mushy than this one.d, id, it's pretty mushy. ;) In a good way, however.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on February 13, 2004
    A truley lovely chapter! Well written and well done.
    Just to let you know, I watched Roxanne with Steve Martin for the first time last night because of you. I have always liked the story of Cyrano de Bergerac but your use of his sublime peotry convinced me to watch that modern version of the play.
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  • From ANON - kate on February 13, 2004
    I love this chapter -- seeing everyone working through their feelings, the different styles of the letters... wonderful. And I can't tell you enough how much I love the Severus you've given us. It rings so tha that he would consider his own words tainted and suspect, and the sentiments Cyrano expressed so beautifully fit eerily well in this story. Of course, the fact that I love that play probably taints my opinion but it's still a wonderful fit.

    I'm gushing but I'm not being ironic. We haven't had any irony here since about, uh, '83, when I was the only practitioner of it. And I stopped because I was getting tired of being stared at.... ;)
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  • From ANON - Droxy on February 13, 2004
    re-chapt 27, 26

    Besides all the accolades of great writing, this chapter told a great story. Great Minerva BTY.
    I am assuming this is not the end? They HAVE TO KISS after all.
    Alas, I am missing Sev and K
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 13, 2004
    Another lovely chapter! Yum, snogging--I like it! (just a quick note--"Weasley Is Our King" was actually sung derisively, and with malice aforethought, by the _Slytherins_ during the time when Ickle Ronnkins still sucked rocks as Keeper. The Gryffs only adopted it after Ron finally Got A Clue, and began doing his job correctly).

    But it's still a lovely chapter.
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  • From ANON - nocturnus on February 12, 2004
    What if Dumbledore catch them?
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  • From ANON - Ezmerelda on February 12, 2004
    What a wonderful story! You've gone to a great deal of trouble to bring them together in a totally realistic way, a stroke of genius, really, to remove the most obvious barriend tnd take it from there.

    I was squealing like a fan girl by the time I reached the end (or rather, the end of the last chapter you've posted, because there will be more, correct? Hm?).

    I'm still smiling, thanks for spending the time and effort on such an enjoyable tale! ~"~
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  • From ANON - ursLurs on February 12, 2004
    *sighs contentedly*

    And I'm glad you're healthy again :)

    I tell you, I am sooo grateful when I see you're back and up again! :)

    :)

    *is in bliss*
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