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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Deeble on February 12, 2004
    Awww ... (sniff) ... Those last few paragraphs were so touching, particularly the final one. Poor guy deserves some happiness. It's good thinking to have Hermione respond to Snape's snarkiness with kisses, since it proves that he doesn't have to pretend he's not a sarcastic bastard to keep her. (Plus it momentarily shuts him up.)

    I love that she could recognize as his the gaze she saw when he was the controlling force behind Harry's eyes.

    Oh, and "Lavender-colored haze" is a delightful turn of phrase!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 12, 2004
    :;sighs:: Yay, progress! : )~ Love this story.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 12, 2004
    Yay! What a sweet chapter. Still nice and slow, but we get a happy Snape. Well done :-)
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  • From ANON - e on February 12, 2004
    hoping your deathbed-induced muse turns into a happy and healthy muse.
    in other words. hoorah new updates and yay your story, but first and foremost i hope you feel better.

    woohoo for slight lust - y goodness in this chapter.

    xoxo
    ...me...
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  • From ANON - Vicki on February 12, 2004
    A Pekingese scolding a greyhound, How CUUUUTE! After I watched the Westminster Kennel Club Dog Show earlier this week I've been nuts over that little Peek that won the toy group for the second year in a row. That short bushy-furred dog is such a great description of Hermione. Only in looks, though. If compared with intelligence, she would be a border collie or a standard poodle, both incredibly bright breeds. Tee, hee, I love dogs but cats are cool, too.
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  • From ANON - Helen on February 12, 2004
    :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
    I can't think of anything better to express my feelings in this. I hate smut, but this was good!
    And I hope you get better soon, and when you do don't you dare overwork yourself, once you can breathe again there are still other ways a cold can break out, like a very very itchy rash everywhere you can't reach...
    *runs to the nearest tree*
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  • From ANON - Alison of the Faeries on February 12, 2004
    "Some people go months without updating a story you know!" While this is true, you spoiled us rotten by giving us daily updates for so long that we--and by we, I mean ME--feared your a)death, b)death of your computer, c)writer's block. All would have been equally horrific. Well, maybe you dying would have been worse, the other two can be overcome. Regardless, this chapter was as excellent as usual, nice and sweet. And nearly smut. Yay!
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  • From ANON - Adriana on February 12, 2004
    Ahhh . . . Pablo Neruda! One of my favorites! (My HG/SS fic Shattered has a liberal sprinkling of Neruda, LOL). But for Snape's muse in this story, Cyrano DeBergerac was the perfect choice . . . what a great idea!

    I love this chapter: Just the right balance of uncertainty, awkwardness, passion and tenderness. You have a gift! I hope you don't get tired of hearing this, but I really love this story. As soon as you complete it, I'm sending it to my beta, who refuses to read any fics that aren't finished. I've been raving about this story for weeks, so she's waiting patiently, hehehe.

    Congratulations on a fine job!
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on February 12, 2004
    Awwww! That was just the fluffy goodness I needed today. Lovely chapter, my dear. And I'm glad to see that you are feeling better. Best of luck to you with your full recovery. :o)
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 12, 2004
    There is so much love in this chapter, that I think I may choke. The air is thick with pheromones. Ron is in love with Lavender and floating around the common room. Harry and Ginny are snogging in the library. And rus rus and Hermione are holding back (and finally moving forward) in the dungeons. Sigh. It is really lovely.
    Could you please have her graduate soon, FQ? They (SS/HG) still can't go public then, but at least they can be together.
    Have I mentioned lately that you are too damned talented? Well, you are.
    Cheers dear!
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  • From ANON - Laura on February 12, 2004
    WOW!! That chapter was better than sex, well almost;-)) After all of those chapters of anticipation, of saying to the computer screen, just kiss her already! What a beautiful, poetic pay off. It's nice to see that Harry and Ginny have finally found each other, they were both lonely. I can't wait to see what you have instore for us in the coming chapters, and as I hate it when a favorite story comes n enn end I think 20 more chapters sound like a great idea! Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent.
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  • From ANON - Brian on February 12, 2004
    AWWWWWW!!! Snape and Mione are so adorable ante ate and...sexy together. And how did Ginny end up kissing Harry? Not that it matters, what really matters is that you decided to accept your mission and so far it's going well.
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  • From ANON - Beatr on February 02, 2004
    Who knew Severus was into dog-sex ;-) On a more serious note, I enjoy your story so please keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - kate on February 12, 2004
    "This was home."

    SOB! How beautiful is that and how much do we long for that feeling in our own lives? As always, you write to the heart of the story -- and the reader. Happy sigh...
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  • From ANON - Sharon on February 12, 2004
    This is a fabulous story --- easily one of the best I've read!!! I've been meaning to send a review, but a 5 week bout of flu/bronchitis have made me lazy (I so know what you mean about coughing being exhausting!!!). Anyway, your Severus is the most romantic, yet still true to canon I've seen. Oh, that he has a real life counterpart! It's a nicangeange to see Ron portrayed as being something other than stupid and bumbling. I love your cat society!!! I'm a "feline caregiver/provider of love & affection" too so the idea of the convocation with the strict hierarchy and rules doesn't seem too far fetched to me. :) Love the story and look forward to updates (the longer version please { if you can be influenced} of 20 more chapters!), but take care of yourself first. We'll keep reminding ourselves that good things come to those that wait!!

    Sharon
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