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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 11, 2004
    Oh, splendid new pair of chapters! (have you tried Allegra for the allergies? Works like a charm on mine. Or in a pinch, drinking very hot strong black coffee--it opens the tubes a bit. The time I had bronchitis the medicine they gave me was basically glorified caffeine. I am not a physician nor do I play one on TV, but it's something to look at).

    Anyway, it was lovely to see Harry smacked flat. More--but only when you are feeling better. Even if you are dreaming the story (I do that with mine all the time. It's really fun. Who needs a holodeck?)


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  • From ANON - Kristine on February 11, 2004
    ::LALALALA:: I can't believe I'm saying this ::LALALALA:: BUT I LOVE RON!!!! LALALALALA...
    ::giggle-snort::
    I thank you for making Ron a decently good person in this story...Lord knows how so many ot lov love villainizing him...:) Me included. But anyway...
    I had no idea you were sick!! I'm so sorry that my mind was cursing you off this past week!! Truly, I am!!! ::hands out chocolate:: Chocolate cures all.
    :) What I find strange, is twhenwhen I'ck, ck, I ALWAYS have a bajillion plot ideas...But there's never any paper to write it down on...::grumble grumble:: I lose everything that way...Metinks I should start putting a writing pad next to my bed...
    And I'm rambling. Sorry. :) I'll just finish with a 'GOD I LOVE YOUR FICS!!!' and leave it at that.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 11, 2004
    Harsh, Hermione, harsh. Poor Harry's fragile teen-age ego might never recover. (Oddly, I don't care.) It's funny how easily he takes over the traditional fanfic!Ron role ... but of course here it comes with the twist that he's inextricably tangled in Hermione's love life, as it was his body Snape was inhabiting at the time -- so I can see how he might rather pretend it just didn't happen.

    Somehow it seems like a major step that Snape wrote the most recent poem in his own handwriting. Much more personal, almost like an embrace.

    I can't believe you're going back and reworking this story! But I'm interested to see what you change.
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  • From ANON - otherside on February 11, 2004
    " It was good to be the King. " oh my god, just when i was thinking, wow look at how great Ron is now, lol.
    I have waited to read this story, and now i wished i hadn't because i had to read all 27 some chapters straight through! beautiful, well written story, the poetry makes me want to go out and buy a copy (and i'm not big on poetry at all), and to look at my own significant other and wish for deep passionate letters from him, poor man :) (i love him anyway) but your snape is so very, well, snapey. (drools and begs for next chapter along with the masses. And sends get well soon wishes :)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 11, 2004
    Poor Harry, but he deserved it. Ron - lol not prat Ron's are so refreshing. Thanks again for continuing to write while you are ill it is appreciated.
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  • From ANON - child of a fallen god on February 11, 2004
    Wow, I just read this thing through. I absolutely ADORE it! absitively posolutely! It's amazing, so utterly intricate in it's details, and submersively addictive. I want you to know I missed a college class for this thing. it's all your fault! LOL anyway, update, soon. Do something. Don't let it end there. . . please. It would be unbearable. Though quite a good ending. And dropping the megaton bomb on harry. That was hilarious!
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  • From ANON - Ringbearer on February 11, 2004
    I wish JKR wrote Ron the way you do... I like him in your story much better than in canon. This is so wonderful. Loved Hermione taking Harry down a few pegs, that was brilliant. Personally, I think that, given the size of your chapters, you'll need at least ten to resolve the story to satisfaction, but you've gotta go wherever your muses take you. As always, I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on February 11, 2004
    Again, another wonderful chapter. Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - CMW on February 11, 2004
    When you do your rewrite, might want take a look at chapter 16. In it you have McGonagall as "Silver Fur". In Convocation, she introduces herself as "Grey Fur". "He's talking about Dumbledore," was irstirst thought. Just a little thing but potentially confusing. Also, Snape seems to have three names to the cats, "Soot" (which I think is adorable, "Cat-Nip-Man", and "Stalker" which is his title, but Crooks addresses him by it. Well done on this one. Glad you're back to writing and I hope you feel better.
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  • From ANON - Brian on February 11, 2004
    "It was good to be the king!" I must have bad short term memory, cause i don't rememberendeender ever showing any interest in Ron. But I like the fact that Ron has someone now too.
    Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to find someone-besides cho (cause that's almost too obvious)- for Harry. (Hint it's a Weasley...possibly the youngest) I know that's rather obvious too, but it's a good kind of obvious. BTW-GET WELL SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2004
    Oh girl I find this and MUST share with you, please, pretty please, let your muse quoted one of this.

    http://members.tripod.com/DailyTelegiraffe/rickmanpoems.html

    Sonnet 17
    Pablo Neruda


    I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz,
    or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off.
    I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
    in secret, between the shadow and the soul.

    I love you as the plant that never blooms
    but carries in itself the light of hidden flowers;
    thanks to your love a certain solid fragrance,
    risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body.

    I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
    I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
    so I love you because I know no other way

    than this: where Idnot not exist, nor you,
    so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
    so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.

    And this is from Paul Elouard:
    Naked Truth

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  • From ANON - Severessa on February 11, 2004
    Oh Barrie! This chapter is absolutely priceless! I love Hermione's way of getting her own back on Harry - that was so totally Slytherin! She has a great deal of potential...
    I think that she needs to slip down to the dungeon for a massive snogfest before she graduates. I know that I wouldn't be able to resist.....
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  • From ANON - nocturnus on February 11, 2004
    Like it as always, but....the escene start in the common room, with Hermione eyesdroping on the boys, and it finish with Ron leaving Hermione's room. When did they move there?
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  • From ANON - Abra_Appelby on February 11, 2004
    I'm glad you're feeling better. And this isn't just because the chapters are getting sweeter and sweeter. Though they are and I'm loving them!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 11, 2004
    Another chapter? Thank you thank you thank you. I'm glad Snape is keeping up with the letters. But I have to say I'm hoping Hermione writes him at least one or two just to let him know her feelings as well. Or then she may do that in some other way. Well I have to say I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm addicted to this story.
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