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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 10, 2004
    I do so hope that you feel better soon!!!

    Chapter 16... What a WONDERFUL chapter!!! I really LOVE how you are writing Minerva in your story!!! She is a bit sneeky, but a true romantic at heart!!! I am so glad that she finally decided to talk to Hermione about Severus!!! Hermione is young, but very mature & knows her limits as well as her feelings!!! She does love him & is willing to see how things go...YES!!! I can't wait to see how Severus reacts to this news!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<
    P.S., That note from Severus was BEAUTIFUL!!!
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  • From on February 10, 2004
    be healthy! I'm enjoying the story enormously, and I look forward to your future offerin

    S

    Snape, Minerva, and Hermione are each fairly cat-like, in their own ways, aren't they?


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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 10, 2004
    Yay! Oh happy day! (pause for a little dance of joy)

    I hope you feel better, but in any case you needn't feel obligated to update daily. The weight of all our expectations shouldn't bear you down, and you can remind anyone who bugs you that you're writing for free, nya-nya-nee-booboo. You're good. We'll wait.

    And this was worth the wait, too. I'm glad that Hermione figured it out herself -- and from the poetry no less (boy that line was apt). But it's iculicularly nice that she che che che conclusion in front of McGonagall, who's the only person in a position to talk about it. (Ron would, but I guess he really can't, right?) "Hermione decided that drinking any more tea today might be fatal" is my favorite zinger of the chapter.

    Stay well.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 10, 2004
    She knows, she knows (dancing around the room). Hallalujah, she knows!
    And he will know her feelings soon too.
    Hey FQ, could your credit the poems at the bottom of the chapters or in the following chapters. Or are they all from Cyrano?
    Going to e-mail you a get well... don't want to cluck at you in your review section.
    Cheers dearie!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 10, 2004
    *jumping up and down like a crazy woman* I loved loved loved this chapter! That poem was incredible. And I'm sooooo happy Hermione realized it was Severus the whole time! And of course the fact that Minerva is now on her side and willing to help her is even better. I can't wait for the next chapter when Severus finds out his feelings are going to be returned.
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  • From ANON - darnedchild on February 10, 2004
    I hope you start to feel better soon. Thanks you so much for taking the time to update while you were sick. The story is amazing. Poor Severus. I'm g tog to find out what happens now that Hermione knows. And what will Severus do when Minerva tells him Hermione knows? Will the letters stop? Will she write back? So many questions!
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  • From ANON - jeanette on February 10, 2004
    She guessed, she finally guessed.... Now what. In a fit of pique I hope that this story has MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER to go, but that it becuase I love that you are sharing your talent with us mere mortals (^_^).

    Stay well and write more.

    Lv Jeanette
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  • From ANON - Rumours on February 10, 2004
    Mmm. Yeah. Thank you. :) I got my fix. *sighs contentedly* (for Now!) *glares*

    I hope you're feeling better dear. You sure are writing brilliantly. :)

    ~ R :)
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  • From ANON - Keket Amunet on February 10, 2004
    I've been reading this story for a while, but I'm not sure if I've reviewed before. I'm trying to get back into the habit of leaving a review.

    I look forward to every update of this story. I've had a wonderful time reading it and am always saddened that I have to wait when I reach the end of the page. I think you've taken an interesting idea and done a good job of exploring it. The characters are not stereotypes of their in canon selves, and the story seems nicely thought out. I look forward to more.

    Keket
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on February 10, 2004
    Yes! Yes, yes, yes! *gets up a does happy dance*

    Can't wait to see Severus react!

    Get well soon!

    Tifany
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  • From ANON - Severessa on February 10, 2004
    Hello Barrie, and welcome back to the land of the living! I am glad that you are feeling better and I hope that you continue to do so.

    Your story is absolutely charming (as is all of your stuff). I especially enjoyed the fun Severus had as Harry -- the poor fellow has had so little of that. I hope that he is able to find a lifetime of pleasure in the coming chapters..... and with that, we will, too.
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on February 10, 2004
    That was sweet. Well worth waiting for. I look forward to more when you are feeling better.

    Get well soon, Hon

    Red

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  • From ANON - Laura on February 10, 2004
    Loved that chapter! So glad that Hermione finally figured it out and that Minerva gave her some insight and support. Can't wait for Severus to find out that she does indeed love him. I hope you are going to continue this story until the happy ending occurs
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 10, 2004
    Eeee! Things are finally coming to a head. : ) I love it. Of course, I'm as on the edge of my seat as ever for it to keep on. LOL


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Jenny on February 10, 2004
    Coo ... powerful stuff ... mind, I know when I get this carried away by a fic that I'm tired and it's time for bed! ;)

    Interesting chapter (hrm, review is for Chap 26. These continuous reviews are irritating). The garden analogy is really rather good. I hope Hermione gets to find out soon that Ron is also "on side".

    But I don't want to find out *too* soon, young lady, because you need to get yourself better! Bed! Now! On your own, or at most with a living hot-water-bottle! ;)
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