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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Carrie on February 03, 2004
    Ah Ron and Sev are just so cute-hope Herm. is told the truth or finally figures it out-poor girl
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  • From ANON - zenia on February 02, 2004
    i really enjoy this story and how you made ron and severus friends :D
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  • From ANON - Kim on February 02, 2004
    Go Ron! I like how you didn't make Ron the bad guy. He's very intelligent and perceptive. I like how he figured out that Severus was inhabiting Harry's body when no one else besides some staff members knew. I really like the friendship between the two of them. I can't wait to see his strategy on how he is going to get Severus and Hermione together.

    Kim
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on February 02, 2004
    Oh Ron the couple maker. funny, and efective.
    I always feel that "yerk" Ron was an unfair characterization in fanon. The boy could be cluelees at age thirteen but you cant expect to remain the same four years later. good for you.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 02, 2004
    I'm so glad you had Ron make the first overture, since Snape wouldn't have. ("Obviously.") It's continually refreshing how you've taken the best parts of the redhead in canon -- the fact that he's stubborn, loyal, funny and clearly not a complete idiot if he can beat everyone at chess -- and shown him in his best light. He's already looking better in Order of the Phoenix, so I could easily see him filling these more mature shoes as a seventh year. And anyway, if we're determined to see more in Snape than JKR's shown us yet, why not give Ron the benefit of the doubt?

    Such a sad but realistic interaction between Snape and Hermione. She noticed he was upset -- OK, upset in an unusual way -- so that has to count for something. It seems fitting that she saw him before she saw Harry.

    Only Snape could make neutral tones sound painful. He's never neutral, is he?

    More! More!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on February 02, 2004
    Wow, this chapter was just fantastic. Ron being not a prat, and advising Severus to go for Hermione. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on February 02, 2004
    I absolutely love the you you wrote Ron! He has a maturity about him that is befitting a 17 year old, whilst still the Quidditch-loving, go with the flow, friendly boy. I like the way Ron doesn't freak out with the idea of Severus liking Hermione - they are older; and Ron has come to understand the man Severus is, after all.

    I like how Hermione's subconscious recognise her kindred spirit, even if her physical eyes do not. I hope that Hermione doesn't suffer unduly - she has a brain after all, and that arithmatic code does have a purpose; also all that she'd gone through, even the dreams will percolate into something she'd understand.
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  • From ANON - Ann on February 02, 2004
    Thank you so much for making Ron be intelligent and caring. He's still a teenage boy, but he isn't a jerk, a halfwit, or a self-centered louse. I like how he has shown his caring for and protectiveness for Hermione, without being a screamer and tantruming all over Hogwarts.

    Hmm -- what about poor Ginny? Will Ron help her out too?
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  • From ANON - Ann on February 02, 2004
    Thank you so much for making Ron be intelligent and caring. He's still a teenage boy, but he isn't a jerk, a halfwit, or a self-centered louse. I like how he has shown his caring for and protectiveness for Hermione, without being a screamer and tantruming all over Hogwarts.

    Hmm -- what about poor Ginny? Will Ron help her out too?
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on February 02, 2004
    If you can be bribed, then I send you virtual flowers AND a virtual sex slave, all for your own amusement while you write me the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Alison of the Faeries on February 02, 2004
    Rock on, Ronnie m'boy!

    ...if I bribe you with chocolate will you give us two chapters a day?
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on February 02, 2004
    FINALLY! A decent Ron in fanfic! I get so tired of Ron being the meany, or the dumb one... I knew this was where you were headed a chapter or two ago but I am SOOO loving it that I need to reiterate. :)
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  • From ANON - Chloe on February 02, 2004
    Chloe again, i've been gone and to come back to four chapters just makes me so excited. This last chapeter though is the one that makes me want to review so much. Ron maturing ometomething I appreciate and is not done enough in more stories. I love how they have mantained their friendship through this and I loved watching the wheels turn in Ron's strategic mind at the very end. Cannot wait for more!
    ~Chloe
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  • From ArachneNonafel on February 02, 2004
    Excellent! Oh excellent!! Ron and Snape friends!! I love it!!! Yes!!
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  • From ANON - Alisee on February 02, 2004
    You know, I am seriously addicted to your story... It is absolutely fantastic! the idea is fresh and new, the style is wonderful! Great job!!!
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