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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 02, 2004
    Chapter 22... HOLY MY!!! This chapter has so much in it & I have to admit that a lot of it is what I had been hoping for!!! I hoped that Hermione would feel something for Severus, that Harry would not do for her what Severus did & that Ron would make an effort to get them together!!!

    I am so very taken by all of this & am still hoping for a few more things to happen;-) I LOVE your story, your writing of the characters, JUST EVERYTHING!!! Can't wait for more!!! Til chapter 23, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Brian on February 02, 2004
    I like the slightly Slytherin side of Ron. Being good at wizard chess just might finally pay off in the real world (aside from Sorcerer's Stone). And if you can be bribed by virtual chocolate, how bout a virtual space heater for your cold house? ~hands one over to her~
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  • From libco on February 02, 2004
    Great great great! I love a smart Ron for a change. I am really enjoying this story.
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  • From ANON - genrou on February 02, 2004
    ^_________________________^
    i actually did start to applaud when i had finished this chapter, and got 1.5 claps in when i remebered and then swore because my sister and nephew where napping next door. whoops. ^____________^
    man i love ron. i absolutely love what you do with him and i adore his relationship with snape. im sooooooo incredibly happy with the outcome of this chapter. i grinned at so many moments from the "mr. weasley" to the "but Harry was the only one who was completely happy." line.
    oh man its just so bllody brilliant. and how they chatted till the tea was still cold and everything. i know im rambling but it was sooooooo good. and the last line and just everything. man, i could kiss you. but i dont know where you are so i cant.
    man, im just so blissful right now. thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 02, 2004
    What are you doing? I'm all in a tizzy. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - LittleBird on February 02, 2004
    I really enjoy your version of Ron. I love the fact that he and Severus have formed a friendship that looks like it will hold past the switch. Hope he has some matchmaking skills up his sleave!!
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on February 02, 2004
    You've just made me love Ron in this fic. Okay - I always love Ron, but you've made him especially likeable. I adore that you're showing his conniving side and I can't wait to see how it plays out.
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  • From ANON - Lorena Snape on February 02, 2004
    I've only recently gotten into this and must say it is a damn fine fic! Very interesting, and a pleasant read. I admit Ron and Snape accepting each other and even becoming friends seemed unlikely, but you've made it believable. Now, I must comment on one thing, from way back in chapter 2:

    **The adults discussed some new laws the Ministry was proposing -- something mind-numbingly dull about property rights...**

    Could it be possible that that line is forshadowing the fact that this might turn into a Marriage Law fic as well?? Maybe it could've been referring to marital property? Or maybe you could do a Marriage Law fic as a sequel to this?? (hint, hint)

    I look forward to more. Great job!


    ~ Lorena
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  • From ANON - Miss Teigne on February 02, 2004
    I know you'll find a way to make it all work out, but still my heart is breaking for poor Severus. You've got to feel kind of sorry for poor old regular boring Harry, though. He's g to to be pretty hurt when he finds out how vastly superior the "other" Harry was! Oh, yes...and what, exactly is "WITKK"?...You said you send updates to it, so I'm interested. Great job again!
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  • From ANON - CMW on February 02, 2004
    I love that you're building Ron as an intelligent, humane, NICE young man. I stop work every single day at about 11:30 - 12:00 to read your latest chapter, thanks so much for keeping up with this.
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  • From ANON - e on February 02, 2004
    le gasp!

    oh i love you oh i love turning on my computer to find an update notice from you on wiktt and oh how i beg you to stick with the every day updates, cuz if you stop, i might not bother getting out of bed!

    hearts and a finger massage to you, friendlyquark!!

    xoxo
    ...me...
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on February 02, 2004
    Ooo, two updates I haven't yet seen! It'ke Cke Christmas!!! Only...different. I'm glad that Ron and Snape are still friends, despite the fact Snape is wearing his black clothes again. :)
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  • From ANON - crissy on February 02, 2004
    love this! are you writing every chance you get or something. like everytime i urn n my pc there is a new chapter or two. which i'm not complaining about. i love it. i want more. its great. wopuuld you tell me how it ends? i am so impatient!
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on February 02, 2004
    Ooooh, I just want to give Ron a big wet noisy kiss on the cheek !!

    Can't wait for more,

    Glinda
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  • From ANON - hope on February 02, 2004
    I'm sure everyone else has already said this but kudos to you for a real Ron, not some pathetic stereotypI caI came away from canon thinking I'd like Ron better than Harry and your characterisations continue that. Congratulations for creating my favorite Ron in all of HG/SS! :)
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