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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - dryade on February 02, 2004
    i love the story. been checking for updates daily. and i love the way how you managed to make ron and snape friends. that's truly unique, seeing as they all but stop from bite each other in most of the other fics. great work.
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  • From ANON - Helen on February 02, 2004
    I remember taking a test somewhere about what's my age, it was 44 years older than me...
    And I have to say again and again how much I love that Ron of yours!
    It's such a wonderful change from all the prats. And how he actually is friends with the Evil!Greasy!Bat is amazing.
    He actually has brains, go you for writing him! And he's sneaky!
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  • From ANON - Amy on February 02, 2004
    I LUV SNEAKY!RON...lol....Please let Hermi get her man soon!!! STOP THE ANGST!!!
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  • From ANON - tarysande on February 02, 2004
    I have been reading this story from the beginning, and I know I really ought to have reviewed sooner, but... better late than never, right? This story has become such a welcome addition to my morning tea-and-yogurt-email-checking-LJ-reading routine. In other words, I am simply LOVING it. Most of all I am thrilled with your characterization of Ron. It is such a pity that Ron always has to take the fall in most S/H fics. You've handled the development of the story extremely well, and I love all of your takes on the characters. So thank you! Well done!
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  • From ANON - Thing1 on February 02, 2004
    THANK YOU!! For what? For not making Ron a total dipshit of course!! lol I am so tired of endless 'Ron sucks' fics. I am enjoying this particulic oic on so many levels, I don't even know where to begin! I actually have to confess something, though. I was a little afraid to read this, hehe. I am a HUGE fan of SR and EPU and the attending ficlets, so when you wrote a SS/HG story I felt that Kathryn was being...well, betrayed, LOL. But the more I read the more I love it, and oddly enough I can still read EPU and feel perfectly fine, hee hee. So I'm odd...my hubby tells me that all the time. Anyway, this is yet another wonderful fic from one of my three fave authors. I love ya girl!!

    Thing1
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  • From ANON - Skjeve on February 02, 2004
    Finally! A fic without Idiot!Ron or EvilJealous!Ron! I'm thrilled. A friendship between those two is unlikely, but plausible in this setting, and quite well illustrated-- and the fact that Ron is actually quite a good strategist has finally been siezed upon in the world of fanfiction. I'm glad to see him getting a bit of glory, for once. I've always liked Ron in the novels, and I think he gets shafted far too often in fics. It's easy to relegate him to the role of plot device and jealous ex-boyfriend or idiot sidekick. There's a lot there to work with, however, a lot that gets overlooked. I'm really enjoying reading about him actually scheming to get SS/HG -together- for once, rather than tear them apart.
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  • From ANON - Tarrin on February 02, 2004
    alls i gotta say is awwwww. snape and ron getting along is sooo cute! i'm so glad you decided to keep them friends. can't wait for more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Adriana on February 02, 2004
    I have only two words to say: "GO RON!"

    Hehehe. Great story.
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  • From ANON - Eboni on February 02, 2004
    I *love* how you've written both Ron and Snape, and look forward to an update every time I check this site. Keep 'em coming!
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  • From ANON - mele on February 02, 2004
    oh gentle quark, fine sweet dear quark! to give severus a friend in ron made me cry! even if nothing changes in his life i'm sure he'd die a happy man with just that little piece of knowledge - that someone knows who he really is inside. can't wait to see how hermione finds out! wonderful story, update soon. aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - kerin on February 02, 2004
    I love the way Ron isn't the retard most people portray him as, perhaps it comes with his ageing, but then again, 17 year old boys aren't renown for their maturity. anyhow, i'm totally digging this story. keep it coming!!! no pun intended
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  • From ANON - jessicat1982 on February 02, 2004
    I can't tell you how much I you your story. most authors of the ss/hg genre tend to make ron out as the stereotypical hot tempered red head. I like the fact that you've given him a dynamic personality and a role in getting the two of them together. I can't wait for another chapter. any chance things might start to heat up now?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 02, 2004
    YAY!!! Ron to the rescue. I loved this chapter. So often I read fics where Ron is either not very intelligent or not very willing to befriend Snape, but this is very refreshing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on February 02, 2004
    Truly charming! I've rely fly found your fic and finally caught up. I love the way you've developed all of the characters, especially Ron. He's matured quite as I would expect he would in canon. Your last line describes him perfectly (about him being a strategist). So many writers overlook that and make him out to be a big, dumb jock. I think he'd be an excellent friend for Snape and bring out that side in Severus' personality!!

    Great job. I look forward to more!

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 02, 2004
    God Bless Ron! What a sweetheart! Great chapter. As an aside, had I known you take bribes, champagne and truffles would have been showered upon you. Sadly, they are pretend as well. Get another chapter up and I give you permission to indulge! ;-)

    hugs
    Susan
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