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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - aprilgrey on February 02, 2004
    Another terrific chapter. I'm so glad to see how this is going and I'm eagerly awaiting the next update.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 02, 2004
    Did I miss something? Didn't Severus share his memories of being Harry with Harry? Doesn't Harry know about Severus's feelings toward Hermione?
    She must be very confused. Poor thing. But she is such a smart girl, with the dreams she has been having, she should figure it out soon.
    I loved how Ron said Hermione was born 40 years old and had to pretend to be a teenaged girl.
    Keep writing FQ. I know it will be great.
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  • From ANON - nocturnus on February 02, 2004
    I had difficult understanding the escene of Hermione, was she dreaming?, remebering?. at first i thought that a lot of time has past since the last chapter and that escene and then, when Severus talk to Harry, I realized it wasn
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  • From ANON - Brian on February 02, 2004
    "He hated Gryffindors for very good reasons: the boys were idiots and the girls invariably broke your heart." But isnt' that true of any house, or any race of people? I know for a fact that ALL guys are idiots for the most part, especially when it comes to the opposite sex (or sex at all for that matter). And every woman has broken at least a dozen hearts before she even leaves for college, I assure you of that. Anyway, i like how you closed that chapter out, as well as the way that you dealt with the Dinner Party From Hell (psycho music in the background).
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 02, 2004
    Great Chapter! Please make poor Severus happy soon! Or if not happy, can he have some hope?? Thanks for updating:-)
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on February 02, 2004
    Aw, poor Severus. I can foresee he will be grimly miserable for a while as he tries to put Hermione out of his mind.

    I do like the line 'He was quietly brave and silently dangerous' - that really sums him up.

    Looking forward to more as always...

    Cheers
    - Imhilien :-)
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on February 02, 2004
    Ahhh!!! Two chapters that I haven't read til now?

    *punches damn people who would not stay off comp*

    Sorry about that, I feel better now!

    Yeah! He's in his own body!

    *wipes away drool from thoughts of said body*WherWher was I? Oh yes, love it as always. Your challenge response seems to have taken on a life of it's own here!

    ;)

    Tifany
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  • From ANON - genrou on February 02, 2004
    awwww, the last line was so sad. when is ron going to come in and save the day? he's got to talk to harry notice he is no longer snape, and help him with the hermione situation. and then of course he has to go and have a chat (if at least to say to bring closure) with snape. oh and oooh he now will have the responsiblity to cover harry's tracks. oooh go ron. oh and oh- harry gets to be all offended that everyone misses the new-old harry. ha. oa. okay please do write more soon. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Helen on February 02, 2004
    Eeee!
    I'm so exited about furhter developmnets!
    *bounces around the room thinking of what'll happen next*
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  • From ANON - genrou on February 02, 2004
    ^___^ i guess my luck ran out on being on timw with this fic. i believe three new chapters came up. but hat hat luck was what transfered to me winnihe she superbowl pool than so be it. i like that money. anywho. i really reallly reallly really reallly reallly reallly reallly reallly liked this chapter. yes there was no commas there cause i didnt want to break the repeated typing. okay okay off topic. so yeah this chapter really rocked. *sigh* if only, eh? man, ron is just so bloody awesome. i especially liked his speech of insulting snape and giving him props in the same way. and im so happy that he DOES like being frienith ith snape and really is trying to honor everything accordingly. ahhh, ron, you really are great. well i want to get to the next chapter so, uh, thanks.
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on February 02, 2004
    //He hated Gryffindors for very good reasons: the boys were idiots and the girls invariably broke your heart. //

    This is a lovely (but sad) way to end the chapter. It's filled with so many backstories and tells of the 'flaws' of Gryffindors seen from the eyes of a young Slytherin.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 01, 2004
    Chapter 21... It was interesting to see a bit of Hermione's past where Severus is concerned!!! I still hope that she realizes that the Harry she had been around lately was only making her want to get to know Severus better!!!

    I know that it is common to see Severus' character feeling a lot of self loathing & I think that shows here. He never took advantage of his situation while in Harry's body (he wanted to, but didn't) so I don't see him as a pedophile, pervert or monster at all!!! I can see him feeling that way about himself though!!!

    I really did like that last line, sad but so very fitting!!! Til chapter 22, Deb >^..^<
    Who is still hoping that one of them will at least make some sort of effort to set the ball in motion!!!
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  • From ANON - Mel on February 01, 2004
    DAMN YOU GIRL!! I'm crying!! Poor Severus!! Poor, Poor, Severus....
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on February 01, 2004
    You make me feel worse and worse for Snape, but the first part of the chapter gave me some hope that Hermione might start to return his feelings for him and not for Harry. More soon please.
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  • From TPril on February 01, 2004
    oh please, please finish this delightful tale!
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