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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - sakhara291@hotmailA on February 01, 2004
    Poor Mione.
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  • From ANON - shel on February 01, 2004
    Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on February 01, 2004
    This story is delicious! I think you have the characters nailed. THe plot twists make me giggle. Thanks for the pleasure.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 01, 2004
    I don't know about Snape, but I'd feel a bit irritated if I spent six weeks in a stressful, emotionally wrenching situation and -- as a reward -- ended up back in a body that could barely hold me up. Time for some dumbbells in the dungeons, and I don't mean Crabbe and Goyle
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    That Snape put himself in a difficult position with Harry because he didn't want to make Hermione unhappy is as good as a declaration of love from such an intensely private character. I wonder what Harry will make of it ... or if Ron will clue him in.

    I admit to being confused at the beginning of the chapter, thinking at first that you had moved forward some months and the fight Hermione was recalling happened at the end of seventh year. You may have mentioned the sixth-year battle earlier and I simply forgot ... but in any case it was clear once we got to Snape and Harry that you hadn't fast-forwarded (and I'm very glad, because I really want to see Hermione's first interaction with Harry).

    "Of course he was attractive while he was unconscious, his mouth was closed and he wasn
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  • From ArachneNonafel on February 01, 2004
    My heart weeps....
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 01, 2004
    What's Harry going to do now? What's Hermione going to do now? Oh my, what's Severus going to do now? Brilliant as usual, thanks.
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  • From ANON - jeanette on February 01, 2004
    Waaaaaa, I want more. I am so looking forward to the developments as HOPEFULLY Hermione gets her brain in gear... There is NO way Harry is going to be able to pull off being "Snape-Harry", just as Snape really couldn't pull off being Harry; the difference is that Snape could 'attempt to dumb down', Harry smarting up... not going to happen.

    As always I enjoyed the next installment, and an even better comment, I enjoy re-reading fronm the start.

    Jeanette
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  • From ANON - mele on February 01, 2004
    chapter twenty one - how poignant! bravo! quarky ol boy, so very good. a box of honeyduke's finest to you... but please update soon! aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - Beatrice on February 01, 2004
    Sweet and sad with a hint of reconciliation. Love it, love it, love it!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 01, 2004
    Aww, poor Severus, with a broken heart. Will it be alright? I can only wonder. That was acellcellent line, the last one.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 01, 2004
    Oh please give us more. I can't get enough of this. I feel so incredibly bad for Severus. Out of all the characters in the world of Harry Potter I feel the most for Snape. He is a very sad figure, and there is so muc him him we don't know. I love how you are writing him.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on February 01, 2004
    oh no!!! Why Why Why.. Oh Poor Hermione.. ...Please Update ..!!!

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  • From ANON - Abra_Appelby on February 01, 2004
    She's better not break his heart! Come on, the garden is almost dead already. She should do some planting, not breaking.
    In case there's any doubt, I love him, I lover her, I love you and I'd love a weeseveseved happy end.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on February 01, 2004
    Oh my, I feel so sympathetic for Severus right now, chastising himself over his feelings for Hermione. I wonder if she will put the pieces together all on her own.
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  • From ANON - Laura on February 01, 2004
    I knew Hermione would be the one to figure it out! Now to sort out those dreams and conflicting emotions. Wonder how Ron will react to Severus now that he's back in his own body? Will be no different in public I'm sure, but might they continue a friendship in private? Harry can be so self-absorbed, hope he outgrows that annoying habit. Can't wait to see where you take us next!!
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