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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Deeble on January 31, 2004
    Harry's got to dislike Snape less now, between playing with him as a child and getting to see (remember?) the man reduce school enemy number one to jelly. (I'd add "saving his life by pretending to be him," but canon tells us that obviously means nothing to the Boy-Who-Lived-But-Never-Thanks-Snape-For-It.) I like the way you connected Hermione's dreams to Harry's dream-state ... I'd ask how that could happen but since the answer is clearly "magic," there's probably no point pondering the psychic possibilities of -- um, darn, ran out of p-words.

    We all know you're not going to keep Snape away from Hermionspecspecially as he's just admitted there's no one her equal (not even him?), but I can't wait to see how you manage it.

    The line "the next time he came to visit himself" just shows how much humorous potential there is in body-swapping. In case you can't tell, I really love this story.

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  • From ANON - e on January 31, 2004
    le gasp!!!!!


    errrrrrrr i loooooooooove yoooouuuu and thissss stoooorry

    oi. all fuzzled now.

    xoxo
    ...me...
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 31, 2004
    Well that was a fast turn around. Hermione solves the equation and BOOM they are back in their own bodies.
    Oh, write more soon FQ. I want to see Sus aus and Hermione meet each other again. How long will it take her to realize the old Harry is back. Not that long, I am sure.

    Hey, how are Ian and Tonks doing? Hint, hint.
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  • From ANON - An Onymous on January 31, 2004
    Please! No sighs! This is GREAT WRITING! and a WONDERFULLY tart-almost-sour lime angst. I loor uor updates every day, or when you post to WIKTT. Thank you for writing.
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  • From ANON - mele on January 31, 2004
    loved the chapter, quarky ol boy! i feel so sorry for severus. now he has to gok tok to everyone looking at him like a pariah. will hermione ever know? aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - ckat44 on January 31, 2004
    This is really really good. I do not usually read stories with such a high rating but this plot seemed so wonderful, I couldn't resist. I cannot wait for the update. I am anxious to see what happens when Harry is back and Severus is in his own body. You are a wonderful writer.
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 31, 2004
    Well it's about bloody time that Hermione got her hands on that puzzle, I was actually wondering why Severus hadn't asked for her help earlier. I'm sure she'll be able to figure out how to get them back into the proper bodies. The conversation between Ron and Severus was wonderful. I'm so glad that you've chosen to write Ron with more than half a br It It's nice for Severus that someone knows who he is and actually likes him for him. An interesting and unlikely friendship, especially in a SS/HG fic, but it works well and I love it. You continue to surprise me with each chapter, and I'm obviously not the only one loving it, judging by the number of hits it's received. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 31, 2004
    Chapter 19 - you Ron is great. Your killing me though let the Harry/Severus kiss Hermione already. I hate it when I'm impatient, sorry. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - influenza1918 on January 31, 2004
    I adore your Ron. Too often in fanfiction, he's just an oblivious little jerk. It's nice to see him with his insight, loyalty, and sense of humor intact.
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on January 30, 2004
    aww........
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 30, 2004
    Ah, Snape sure knows Hermione: Homework -- better than a love note. A nice puzzle for her to work out, and he can't even be accused of telling her the truth. But is this meant only to lead her to the conclusion that her friend and her potions teacher have swapped bodies, or is he hoping she'll figure out what happened and then continue on to figure out a solution?

    The scene with Ron and Snape was funny and sweet, though not at all in a maudlin way. The idea that he wants to get back into his own body so he can start hating everyone again made me laugh, but it's rather sad, really. Means he's more comfortable being nasty, having been required to act that way for so long, and he's clearly not used to having friends -- Minerva and Albus notwithstanding.

    Oh, and about that homework -- it's a nice touch that Hermione recognized Snape's handwriting, thatthat she felt a wave of unbidden grief at the thought of him incapacitated. The heart wants what it wants, no matter how much the brain grumbles.
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 30, 2004
    Come on, hurry a little bit the pace. You kil killing us!
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  • From ANON - Abra_Appelby on January 30, 2004
    Do I love this story or what? I love this story sooooooooo much!
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  • From ANON - Jeanette on January 30, 2004
    Hey, WIKTT as a mail list isn't to bad.... :)

    And make this 400 and some more.

    I was wondering how you were going to get Hermione in on the Arithmancy, neat.

    Given I watch AVIDELY for posts by Barrie keep letting us WIKTT's know.

    Jeanette

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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on January 30, 2004
    Of course, it could actually be one of Snape's parchements, nothing to do with any of the work he has to do as Harry....*blinks and shakes her head before walking off* It's been a long day.
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