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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on January 30, 2004
    So, when is "Harry" going to come looking for his Arithmancy homework? I hope it doesn't give up the game. Hehe. The scene between Ron and Severus was quite touching...as much as a scene between a Slytherin and a Griffindor can be. Hope your fingers are still attached!!!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 30, 2004
    Eeeee! There are so many things I liked about this chapter that I don't even know where to begin. LOL The overall interaction between SEverus and Ron was fantastic, as well as Ron's internal monologue before their conversation. Very believeable (and funny)

    And what can i say, but *go* Hermione!!!!!! LOL


    Kiri (who's on the edge of her seat)
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  • From ANON - mele on January 30, 2004
    OOOOOO!!! and now the plot thickens! hurry and update, please. aloha, mele
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  • From on January 30, 2004
    First of all, I adore you. Your writing is simply ingenius and it shows each and every chapter.
    Second, you are the absolute best. You're doing away with the SS/HG cliches. (Stupid Ron, self-absorbed petty Lavendar and Parvati). That's smething that deserves to much credit it it's unbelieveable.
    I like how, despite the fact that this is a challenge and has limitations, you've been able to develop the story in your own way. It keeps branching out in different directions.
    Oh, and Dumbedore being strangled with his own beard. That's comedy.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 30, 2004
    "Dumbledore she mentally strangled with his own beard" AWE-SOME!!!! lol I loved it!!!! I can't wait to see what Hermione makes of the equasions when she is done.

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  • From ANON - hope on January 30, 2004
    I'd already thought of the Cyrano parallel but please please plseas don't give us such a tragic ending! And thanks again for making Ron something besides Gryffindor Git or comic relief!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on January 30, 2004
    Oh goody, Hermione is going to solve the problem for Harry/Snape. I like that Ron and H/S are getting to be friends. Wonder how this will all turn out. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 30, 2004
    Another spectacular chapter! Are you sure you don't want to post the next one up now? It would save us all a bit of sanity because right now I am sure most of us are banging our heads on our computers because the chapter is over and there are no more until tomorrowH! IH! I don't know if I can waiting 24 hours to see what happens next!!

    SHE'S GOING TO SOVE THE EQUATIONS THAT HELP GET HIS BODY BACK!!!!! Oh, HURRY HURRY HURRY!!!!

    I love the dialog between Ron and Snape. Each of them got a nice chance to speak their mind to the other and they are still "friends".
    I think Sevvie is going to have a hard time being mean when he goes back to his body. Will he apologise to Hermione for the teeth thing? I just read that part of GOF. I had forgotten just how rottenlyn hen he was then. I guess she respects him anyway, though, if she had tears in her eyes just thinking about him "never waking up".

    I will now cease my ramblings and let you get on with posting the next chapter!

    hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 30, 2004
    Chapter 19... This was a WONDERFUL look into the relatiop/frp/friendship that has formed between Ron & Severus!!! I really like how they are both being as open with eatherther as they are!!!

    This newly found bit of information that Hermione is working on may change things a lot sooner than Severus expects!!!

    I'm sure you have already figured out by my other reviews that I really want Severus to be with Hermione, even if he waits until after her graduation!!! I think he needs to lay the ground work before then though!!! I also feel that if it's something that he really wants he would find a way to make it work & keep her safe in the process!!! Look what he has been doing for years, he has to know a thing or two about keeping things secret;-) I believe that he has a fantastic ally in Ron, not to exclude Minerva being in his corner!!!

    Enough of that, I know that this is your story & you will write it as you see it & I do 100% respect that!!! I am very much enjoying it & will be reading it to the end!!! I guess I get sad at the thought that they are so sad & want them both to be happy!!! ook ook forward to your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Louise on January 30, 2004
    I love the teenage angst, I love the dilemma of the older man in the younger body and the crush and Hermione's mixed emotions. I love everything about this story and I want to read it all start to finish as soon as you are finished!!!

    Could you finish it today please!!!!??????!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Skjeve on January 30, 2004
    Have I mentioned how much I'm in love with this story? I adore it. I have rarely come across a fic in which I pounce on every update like a cat with catnip-laced tuna; this is one of those few. I can't wait for another update! Every time I come to the end of a chapter, a little part of me sighs in disappointment; I want to keep reading until I come to the end of the tale!
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 30, 2004
    So did Hermione get the equations by mistake, or where they 'slipped' to her on purpose?

    Lov as as always, the stuff between Ron and Severus is great. Severus is of course still snarky! but more open.

    Tifany
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  • From ANON - kate on January 30, 2004
    Personally, I've had more than a few of those "torture all men men in my life" fantasies!

    As usual, your gift with pathos gets right to the heart: "First you
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 30, 2004
    Aha! I knew it. She's going to figure out how to put Harry and Snape in each others bodies. Oh I sooooo can't wait for your next chapter. And I loved the
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 30, 2004
    lightening is gonig to strike me now any minute. i just know it.
    man poor ron. having all this knowledge about the situation and yet not knowing what to do with it. we get to see sape and ron next, right? cool.
    write more soon. thanks.
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