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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Ann on January 29, 2004
    Poor babies! And poor Ron, having to keep a secret all by himself.
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 29, 2004
    Even if Hermione is very clever, it don
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 29, 2004
    Ron still manages to confuse me.
    Great! He's actually a complex person not just a thing that lives for quidditch!
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  • From ANON - Brian on January 29, 2004
    I don't care if EPU is starting an every other day posting schedule, but don't slow down with this one, it's starting to get interesting, cause now we get to see Ron lie and act like nothing is wrong with Harry. Instead of just snape and a few of the teachers. That and I could use some help on beating writer's block. Email me with any tips you might have.
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  • From ANON - e on January 29, 2004
    have absolutely nothing constructive or otherwise to say. not even praise-y, and obviously there is nothing to criticize *except length, i want more, but im glad that you update often. so im very torn.* . absolutely speechless *and if you knew me, youd understand how BIG a task that is*
    so instead of saying anything, i send you this

    ::SMOOCH::

    xoxo
    ...me...

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  • From ANON - XxphoenixX on January 29, 2004
    Another interesting chappie, m'dear. Love the frustration, so wonderfully irritating. Just a slight thing that had me confused, first you said the score was 120-100 with Slytherin in the lead, which would mean Slytherin had the 120 points. Then Harr/Snape caught the snitch, and you claimed Gryffindor won 270-100, so I think you've got it backwards. I think. If I'm wrong then gee, do I look stupid. Anyway, great job again. Update!
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  • From ANON - Tarrin on January 29, 2004
    great chapter, as always! *bows* what more can i say?
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  • From ANON - Miss Teigne on January 29, 2004
    I just dicovered your fic, and it's absolutely beautifully written!! You write with such depth and detail...I'm in awe. I especially like the little touches like the chess piece wiping his brow. The Crookshanks angle is great as well; I haven't seen that before. Thank you also for giving Ron a well-developed personality, something a lot of people seem to forget about. It was great of you to throw him a bone-I'm not trying to be nasty-with the Lavender thing. Anyways, I'm really, really impressed! Please update soon, and if you have some sort of mailing-list you could add me to to inform your readers of when you've updated, please do so. Once again, it's wonderful!!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 29, 2004
    Oh dear, Hermione's going to have a nervous break down isn't she? If I start to chant 'give into the hormones Severus' will it work? Great story, love the build up. I almost started to cry with Hermione, you are writing her frustration well. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - crissy on January 29, 2004
    poor abused hermione! those boys are playing with her head. mean boys!
    this fic is great! i love reading it. its funny and a little emotional. and just really fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Susan on January 29, 2004
    You updated! Yay! Happy dance :-) Please tell me they are going to start figuring things out soon...they meaning mainly Hermione. Really loving this...was a highlight to an otherwise shit day.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on January 29, 2004
    I sit here with my mouth agape. How could I have possibly missed so many updates?? *shakes head* My sincerest apologies. That said, how much do I love the fact that Ron is the one who figured it out? Soo much. And I could completely picture the look on his face when Hermione was running on about how she *liked* the way Harry had become. Brilliant. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 29, 2004
    Haha! Hermione jusld Rld Ron she likes Severus Snape! I am laughing so hard right now. You'd better hurry and get Severus back in his body if Hermione isn't supposed to find out. She's getting close to figuring ut. ut. Please updte SOON!!!

    Hugs,

    Gwen

    p.s. My ferret, Frieda, would like to add her two cents (she has been trying to get on the keyboard for quite some time now): ,'/bv ttttVVVVF s =nmkkkde xc dkkkkkkt5RSA MMXss try gfr wq k ;\]
    6+ ;

    I think it means "Write more now!" :-D
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  • From ANON - Piper S. on January 29, 2004
    Just when I think this story couldn't get any better...

    The pacing is maddening! It's *perfect*, but maddening. I love a good tease and it looks like these two are going to take their sweet time getting to the point. Perfect. Definitely one of my top favorite WIP's to date. I just wonder if they'll get together while Severus is in Harry's body. Hmm...
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  • From ANON - Clare on January 29, 2004
    Just a little email to say it's so sweet to have all the chapters so quickly !
    I admire you for this.

    And, I was very happy about the Silver cat, wondered if it was Minerva or Albus.
    We don't know if he is an Animagus but it would have been fun to imagine him spying Harry or Hermione as a cat or something else.

    Anyway, keep going !

    Clare
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