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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 29, 2004
    *groan* And just when Ron got a clue he proves he still doesn't get women! I love imaging the horrified look on his face however! ;)

    Screw the challenge! It gave you the idea for this wonderful fic, but I think you have us all suffiecently hooked that you can disregard the rules and do whatever you want!

    Of course that could just me wanting Hermioneknowknow whats going on talking! *grin*

    Tifany
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  • From ANON - miko on January 29, 2004
    another great chapter!

    I so wish Snape could have heard all of that!! *giggles* But I suppose Ron will tell him in time? Please keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 29, 2004
    Poor Hermione she is so clueless right now. You are evil to string her along like this.. smile... but that is the fun of it Right?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 29, 2004
    I have only one complaint about this chapter. It was way too short. I'm sorry I just can't get enough of this. I like that Hermione likes the Harry now which hopefully means she will still want him when he gets back into his own body.
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 29, 2004
    Uh-oh. I see trouble on the horizon. I wonder how long it will be before Hermione loses her temper with Harry/Snape? Should be some very interesting fireworks. :o) I look forward to the next update and more anguish!
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  • From ANON - AureliaFlint on January 29, 2004
    Great story! Seeing as I am not a HG/SS fan, it's quite high praise. I decided to try a chapter and I loved it. The premise is well developed. I find that HG/ss 's biggest obstacle is the age difference and the teacher angle. I like that you bringing up the fact that Dumbledore would never let Severus seduce a student. I can't wait to see how the story developes. Once agin, brillant job!
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 29, 2004
    hell must have frozen over because i actually saw the next chapter on time. ^__^ go me. anyway so i say what you said in response to me and i kept trying to figure out either to forge ahead or go back and see what i said. after much debate i went back- saw the ron thing and got excited and hoped that what you ment. there was the cat thing, was a bit weirded out, and then thought than man its gonig to be in the next chapter and almost damned my luck this time. luckily that wasnt the casede. however we did get tio him masturbating and i was like oh..no.. and i pulled my hat lower and my scarf higher (hey its cold) trying to shiled my eyes somehow in fear that ron would like recognizeharry's masturbating stlye. ewww. he'd all be like no, you cant be harry cause harry would never jack off in his bed... yeah, eww. then of course i thought i might have been safe but you entered shower territory...
    any way, yay ron for being uber cool. yay.
    thanks.
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on January 29, 2004
    I see Ron has found out about the body switch - it's good that he's being understanding and not waving crosses in Sev/Harry's face, so to speak.

    But, Severus as 'Cat Nip Man? Mwahaha! ^_^.

    I look forward to more.

    Cheers
    - Imhilien :-)
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on January 29, 2004
    Now THAT is a surprise, Ron figuring out before Hermione. My hat is off to you, it is so rare fics are surprising anymore :)
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 29, 2004
    I love it!

    *feints*

    Ron with a clue! Who would have guessed? It's a nice change to see him written this way, to often he gets thrown to the side as an idiot or asshole to make way for my favorite couple. It's nice to see him mature for a change. Plus now Severus has sort of a friend.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on January 29, 2004
    ***SQUEAL!!*** Ron knows!! This is *such* a good story! I can't even begin to write a proper review. I'm way too "squealy" right now, lol. Thanks for allll the uber-quick updates. It makes this story even better somehow. :) Keep writing! Sacrifice sleep and food if you have to! Your fans need you!!
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  • From ANON - heartnut on January 29, 2004
    Wow, this is a good chapter. I always thought Ron was pretty smart. Thanks for getting him in on this- I was starting to worry. He seems to be accepting the SS/HG thing a little willingly, which I think is a good thing. Too many authors decide that Ron's going to be overprotective and git-like when it comes to SS/HG stuff, but you've got it to a t, I think. Who says Ron wouldn't be happy that HG's happy? Keep going, I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - CMW on January 28, 2004
    I adore the flirting cats - it's a joy to see less stuffy sides of both the professor and the cat. I'm also thrilled that you have a perceptive, intelligent Ron - much more true to "life".
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  • From ANON - Alison of theriesries on January 28, 2004
    Funfun. I like that Ron figured it out--he should rub it in Hermione's face at every opportunity when she's in labour with Sev's first kid.
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  • From ANON - Rumours on January 28, 2004
    WOW. That's all I can say. Okay - not. FREAKIN' BRILLIANT.

    I can't believe it. I ... I was totally with Severus there in the shower, man. Holy crap. *suddenly notices shower sentences, and wishes was indeed physically in shower with Severus.*

    I swear I can't wait every day to come home and read this....
    And now I'm even more ...enthralled.

    How many more chapters do you anticipate, roughly?
    DON'T TELL ME.
    Don't tell me.
    Please don't.

    But please, please, please, please keep updating.

    *is agonized by desire to read next chapter NOW NOW NOW*
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