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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Kitty on March 21, 2004
    I absolutly love it. I couldn't stop reading it. I can't wait to read more of your writings. What a great story line and such great details. Great story.
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  • From ANON - zenia on March 21, 2004
    yaaay!!
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  • From ANON - Brian on March 21, 2004
    Now it's time for one collective cheezy.... AAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. We all feel pink and fuzzy inside. You already know that I love this story, so I'll end with a Top Notch Job Barrie.
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on March 20, 2004
    *sighs* It's really over'm s'm so sad that it is over. A job well done, from you and your beta. The last two chapters were sappy, so sweet, it's sickening.... NAH! It's cute. I think your characters have suffered enough to have a well deserved, albeit sickeningly sweet ending *grins* Just kidding. I love your fic so much, I save it on my drive so I can read it again and again... In fact, when my friends come over, I'm going to let them read it... they don't read fics, you know.. perhaps this will convince them otherwise.

    I hope that you and your companions are feeling better. Take good care of yourself. Again a job well done... and you say it's supposed to be only 10+ chapters... LOL... it's 44 in all..... Thank you for sharing with us your writing, ideas, and my, you successfully tied up all of your fic's loose ends... I'm impressed. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Alex on March 20, 2004
    Amazing, thats all i can say, amazing......! Well done, xxx
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  • From ArachneNonafel on March 20, 2004
    What a truly lovely story! I can only hope that my own life's story ends so well! You write so very well.....and I know what hard work it is too. Finding the time and inspiration is 2/3 of it! The other 1/3 is getting actually getting it written and done. Take care and I hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - Kat Delacour on March 20, 2004
    awww ... that was beautful, man! i think i've got something in my eye ...

    *wipes away a tear*
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on March 20, 2004
    Ahhhhh what a sweet ending. And what a lovely story overall.
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  • From ANON - Katharine on March 20, 2004
    Hello friendlyquark,
    I've been following your fic from the beginning. Always waiting for updates because from the start i fell in love with yoic. ic. It started great, continued on and never went dry. I find it really hard to get ideas and write even when prompted by a challenge which more often makes it harder so i really love what you have done. I could not imagine a better response to the Polylove challenge. And because it was the end of your fic i though you really by now deserved a review so sorry i haven't reviewed every chapter which you really deserved! Also like to say a bit for Kate, I don't know how much you've had to beta but you sound really supportive and absolutely everything a beta should be and more. Beta's dont get the recognition they deserve and i was really pleased to read the thanks to you at the beginning of every chapter! Congrats to you both. You're probably both sad and yet relieved that it's over but i'm sure i'll see more from you two in the future.
    Lots of love and best wishes
    Katharine
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  • From ANON - Droxy on March 20, 2004
    Clapping- great job. Very enjoyable story.

    kate is gonna give you are hard time for using "the end". Thanks for a happy ending.

    your creation is 148 pages on A4 paper.


    I am so missing Sev in K from EPU.....(sniffs). While this Sev was more canon, I really love your sub rosa Snape.
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on March 20, 2004
    A too too beautiful ending to a wonderful story! I love how you managed to squeeze familial difficulties and growth even in this short chapter. And the tone of this last chapter was so dient ent to that of the war that in a sense, made the fight worth it. Congrats on completion! I look forward to reading your other stories.
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  • From ANON - Helen on March 20, 2004
    *wipes tears*
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  • From ANON - Kristine on March 20, 2004
    ::sniff sniff:: Domestic bliss...God that's so sickeningly cute...:) I LOVE IT!!!
    Well, I've stuck by this fic 'til the end, and I must say that it is just bloody brilliant! One of the best H/S fics I've ever read, just because I thought it was so completely new and original!! ...It also helps that it's one of the few fics that I've read completely...
    I LOVE IT!!!!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 20, 2004
    very nice. thanks. *sigh* its over.
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  • From ANON - awwwww on March 20, 2004
    The ending was warm and fuzzy. :D
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