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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 28, 2004
    OMG, Snape and Ron bonding this was wonderful. And I loved the whole Minerva Crookshanks thing. This was such a fantastic chapter! You are the best! I guess Hermoine will not be figuring it out on her own since Severus is probably going to write her a letter, but its nice to see Ron isn't as daft as we think he is.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on January 28, 2004
    The Minerva and Cshanshanks conversation was great! And I love it that Ron figured it out. It's nice to see Ron have the upper hand for a change.
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  • From ANON - moonmint on January 28, 2004
    I'm really enjoying this. And Ron figured it out! That actually makes a lot of sense, they probably spend more time together (usually) just because of sharing a dorm room. And I definitely like the characterization of Ron, and how he reacts once he has got it figured out.
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  • From ANON - Adriana on January 28, 2004
    I don't know how many times I can tell you how much I love this story! The scene with Crookshanks and McGonagall was fabulous! I could clearly picture it in my head. And I'm very glad that at least Ron knows it's really Snape. This is just so well done! I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 28, 2004
    see,man. it happened again. maybe im just not observant enough to noticce the chapter changes. anyway, great stuff- full of angst. ^___^ i think my favorite part in the last few chapters was how dumbledore came up behind him and put his hand on his shoulder in the great hall scene. hmmmmm, i wonder how long till somene puts the ieces together- and would it be hermione? ginny? ron? personally id go for ron cause i think it would be the most interesting.
    okay then. please write more soon. thanks.
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 28, 2004
    Working in another challenge? I love this story! Not iblyibly insightful for a review, I know.

    *sigh*

    It's 3am and all I have to offer.
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on January 28, 2004
    I do feel spoiled with yet another wonderfully quick update! I happily await more.

    It certainly looks as if Hermione is starting to figure things out....

    Cheers
    - Imhilien :-)
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on January 28, 2004
    So delightful... life expectancy of a mayfly... *chortle*

    I'm still so impressed at your regular schedule, and I'm thinking she'll figure it out any day now.
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  • From ANON - heartnut again on January 27, 2004
    I hope that you give HG some credit and have her figure it out sometime soon- she's too smart for this, I think. What do you think?
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  • From ANON - heartnut on January 27, 2004
    YAY- this gets better with each chap! Keep going, seems like you didn't get much done in this chap. I think it's time for SS and A fig figure out what went wrong and fix it.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 27, 2004
    One more piece of the puzzle ought to do it -- now Hermione knows that Hedwig isn't responding properly to "Harry," that the spell that injured "Snape" was supposed to work a mind swap on Harry and that there's obviously a close connection between them or she wouldn't keep dreaming about her potions master. (Especially nice dream this time, by the way.) Plus, "you are the most annoyingly persistent creature" is such a Snapey thing to say ... and at some point her sharp mind will have to conclude that Harry's not simply channeling his most hated teacher.

    I can't wait to see (er, read) that moment.

    And I'm tickled that you enjoy my reviews! You certainly get plenty of very nice ones. Gee, now I have review-nervousness! Will this one live up to the previous installments? (This ridiculous moment is probably the closest I'll ever get to the feeling a fan fiction author has before posting -- I spend my days writing nonfiction and I don't think my brain can work any other way. But I sure do enjoy reading.)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 27, 2004
    Chapter 16... Another FABULOUS chapter!!! When Severus said, "It isn
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on January 27, 2004
    Ooo... A Crookshanks pov! I love it when authors incorporate Hermione's half-Knealze. Intriguing, the dream you had Hermione dreamt - apparently her subconscious already knew the truth.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 27, 2004
    I have not always left a review but I have been reading all along. Wonderful tale and sooooo suspenceful! Please don't stop!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 27, 2004
    Eeeee! She's *almost* there! LOL I find myself leaning forward in my chair while reading, urging Hermione to put the pieces together. : )~ It doesn't work to help her, but... LOL

    Kiri -- eagerly awaiting more.

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