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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 26, 2004
    Chapters 14 & 15... I know that Albus means well, but he really needs to learn to mind his own business once in a while!!! I am so glad that Minerva is on Severus' side!!! I really wish that Severus would have told her about finding Hermione reading to his body!!! I think she would have been able to help him see that Hermione has some feelings for him, even if only caring at this point!!! I do like what she said about allowing her to make up her own mind & I hope he will remember that!!!

    The whole situation utterly hopeless, I think NOT!!! This whole thing reminds me of that saying: It is better to have loved & lost tha nev never have loved at all!!! I think that both Severus & Hermione deserve the right to love & be loved, even if it may only be for a short time!!! He is basing everything on "what if's & maybe's" instead of taking the chance of things working out!!! If you want something badly enough it is worth the risk & Severus has never been one that does not take risks!!

    I can't wait to see how things go & have to admit that I hope Severus throws caution to the wind & risks his heart!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Kirsteen on January 26, 2004
    eeeee! The tensions all building! : )~ I'm enjoying thory ory thoroughly, and starting to feel that frustrated "grrrrrr". LOL I'm sure you know what I'm talking about. I hope so, anyway, cuz at the moment, I don't know any other way to describe the feeling of anticipation. Anyhoo, Eager for more, as always.

    Cheers,
    Kiri
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  • From ANON - angelina on January 26, 2004
    What a lovely chapter! Everyone's emotions and motivations seem heartfelt and thoughtful, none arbitrary. Thank you for the lovely frequent updates--I've really enjoyed following the story and I desparately want to know how it will all work out.
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  • From ANON - kate on January 26, 2004
    I love that Dumbledore'scerncern for a relationship between Severus and Hermione isn't that he's wrong for her but that she's not yet experienced the world. I love even more the wisdom that Minerva had -- "Never make up another person's mind for them." Unless, of course, it's your kids and they're deciding on shaving the cat.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 26, 2004
    Thanks, yet another great chapter. At least he can talk to Minerva about his feelings instead of bottling everything up.
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  • From buttercup on January 26, 2004
    I love your story and I never miss reading it. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 26, 2004
    Okay first of all let me tell you that I am enjoying this fic so much I can't even express the words to be able to tell you how much. But I have to ask if something good is going to happen anytime soon. I mean how much more is Severus going to suffer? I'm not flaming you, I just want to see something nice happen. This will end well won't it? It has too, please give me a crumb.
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 26, 2004
    No. Not hopeless. Just difficult. :o) You're still doing a fabulous job. Keep it up! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on January 26, 2004
    Sniff. I love this story. It's getting more and more better with every chapter. And I love how quickly you are able to add chapters. I wish I had the time to do the same, how do you manage it? LOL...anyway...more please?

    Red

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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on January 26, 2004
    The tension! The tension! Ah! The tension is killing me! An almost kiss, and the underlying *passion*! You are so totally skilled in drawing out this tension. I'm so waiting for the fireworks to happen.
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  • From ANON - Cherrie on January 26, 2004
    Hello! This is my first visit to AdultFF and I wanted to tell you that your story has made this visit an excellent one indeed. I like the pace this story is going at and I cannot wait until the next few chapters are up. I've been sitting here for the past few hours and reading your story in full. :-) Please keep up the awesome writing!
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  • From ANON - Tarrin on January 26, 2004
    oooo, excellent! I was on the edge of my seat at the end of the chapter. they are so close, yet so far, i can't wait to see what happens next! you've got me checking for updates daily. keep going! *cheers*
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on January 25, 2004
    I find a day isn't complete without checking for another update (which you are frequently able to do, thank you!). It is a really great story.
    Hmm....will Dumbledore have be having a 'friendly chat' to Severus about Hermione i.e. avoid romantic entanglements?
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  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on January 25, 2004
    This story is coming along marvelously, and I am enjoying it very, very much. (sends a shipment of virtual chocolate-dipped strawberries and champagne to create more inspiration, or at least make you feel better).

    We'll be patient. This is well worth waiting for.
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  • From ANON - NOCTURNUS on January 25, 2004
    ARGHHHH!
    I was waiting for Dumbleore to apear.
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