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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 25, 2004
    Ahhh, you're killing me, but in a good way. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 25, 2004
    Running out of creativity? Oh no -- does that mean you'll only update every other day? ;-)

    I'm glad you're writing some chapters from Snape's point of view and some from Hermione's, giving us insight into both characters. Hermione's discovery that Snape might actually be -- gasp -- the caring sort is amusing, not to mention critical to her ability to later see him as the one she's been falling for rather than Harry. And the Hedwig angle is interesting ... is she hanging out with Snape's body? (If so, she must not be there constantly.) Or perhaps she was injured too?

    Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it may be posted.
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  • From ANON - Alisha on January 25, 2004
    This story is beautiful...just beautiful. I love it so much! Please continue....:)
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  • From ANON - Rumours on January 25, 2004
    I'm loving it. I rarely ever review - I've done it maybe once or twice before - but I just had to write and say: DON'T STOP!!!!! It's going so brilliantly! I love it; the way you're capturing their changing, as-yet-unvocalized relationship, and also the way you're drawing Severus' relationship with both himself and how his new understanding of Harry is affecting him...

    LOVE it. Don't stop until you've written the last lines and also your author notes thanking everyone for the last ti and and telling us what you're moving on to next. :)

    ~ Rumours
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on January 25, 2004
    Damn! I know I'm not the only one who's frustrated by Dumbledore's perfect timing. Another amazing chapter!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 25, 2004
    I am double posting a review...aren't I sweet. I just need to say something more.

    I am going to restate that I think most people who read this story UNDERESTIMATE how difficult and complex the polylove challenge really is.

    There are very few writers who can pull off the difficult multiple characterizations required. Adding to that difficulty is Snape, one of the most difficult characters to "control". I know because I beta an SS/HG romance and keeping Snape snarky is hard work. I relate to Kate in this, because I find myself trying to get my writer though her fits of "how am I going to resolve this mess". The beta provides this objective view.

    Now, that said, understand that your writing strength is your ability to handle adult and child point of view, this is what is going to allow you to see the polylove challenge through to the end. A credit to you is I have no idea how you are going to resolve the romance. I am still guessing.

    Yes people- the polylove challenge is a very hard challenge.
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 25, 2004
    I hope you get through that wall of yours. If you want I could maybe somehow get a team of handy handymen to give you a hand.
    And I definetely need my sleep...
    Also I made up my mind and am not torn in two anymore. As much as I love reading this story every day I want it to end... I never could handle suspense and am really not patient. Waiting for Hermione to find out is killing me! I ,,,need,,, the reactions! But then again I love how their relationship is ,,,slowly,,,(=realistically) moving along... But I still can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 25, 2004
    Dumbedore ruins everything!

    Good chapter, and thanks to Kate the beta for providing insperation.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 25, 2004
    I just realized that i have been forgetting to review this awesome story!!!! I'm so sorry.. I am loving it and i check for an update every day!!!!
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  • From ANON - kate on January 25, 2004
    Thank you (wink).

    I love how complicated this is -- just like life, only better since I don't have to unravel this!

    Let's see -- isolated, lonely grown man in an adolescent boy's body + preternaturally wise and similarly lonely adolescent girl.... Dumbledore's going to have his hands full!
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  • From ANON - FadingSlowly on January 25, 2004
    MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! IT'S ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE READ SO FAR!
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on January 25, 2004
    Terribly touching! I like that Hermione's reading potions journal articles to the Professor and Severus knowing about it. It's double the irony and double the heartache. lovely.
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  • From ANON - Tarrin on January 25, 2004
    it's soooo great. this has gotta be one of the best potter fics i've read on this site, bravo! please update soon, i can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 25, 2004
    I just want to cry, this is a wonderfully written story. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 24, 2004
    Arithmancer? Hmmm..wonder who they could get! ;) I'm really enjoying the way you write SS. Keep up the good work!
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