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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 24, 2004
    Once again, you have left me speechless. All I can say is "More please!!!" over and over again. Is Hermione going to be the one that does the Arithmancy? We all know it's her favourite subject and she probably understands it more than her teacher. Maybe Dumbledore will tell her it's to help 'Snape' (which would be true of course, but Hermione will think of the one in the hospital). Then she wouldn't find out about who 'Harry' really is. At least, not yet. It's too fun having her not know and saying things to 'Harry' that she would never say to Snape. Well, I'm ramibling, so I'll stop now. Keep up the good work!

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 24, 2004
    Heartbreaking. You are getting really good at this.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 24, 2004
    I love the apt turn of phrase about how differently Harry and Snape wear the body. (A full-force Snape scowl on Harry's face would be something to see.) The image of Hermione reading to what she assumes is the comatose Snape is so sweet and so very -- well -- Hermione, and it's revealing that one of the first things the actual Snape notices is the angelic effect of the light falling on her hair.

    Speaking of which, isn't a certain bushy-haired student good at Arithmancy? (I suppose it'd be a bit much to expect to to be better at it than Vector already, although it wouldn't be the first time that a Hogswarts student could best a Hogswarts teacher. coughLOCKHARTcough.)

    I concede the point that we've never seen Snape in canon except through Harry's eyes. Sometimes the Harry filter leaves a lot to be desired.
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 24, 2004
    Quit making me cry already, he just wants to go home! I loved him finding Hermione reading to his body, what a wonderful way for Severus to see that someone does actually care for him, as much as she can given their lack of a relationship. I just keep wanting more and more of this story, please keep the updates coming, than Lau
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on January 24, 2004
    The more this fic goes on, the worse I feel for Snape - and for Hermione. And yet, I'm addicted. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Reha on January 24, 2004
    I'm weeping. Really I am. You've done such a beautiful job of detailing Severus's emotions (and so believably, too!) that I can't help but be teary-eyed. It's heart-wrenching, and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 24, 2004
    Every chapter makes me even sadder. I wonder how Severus and Harry will finally be able to get their own bodies back. I'm glad Severus found Hermoine in the hospital ward reading to his body. Its nice he knows that there are a few people in the world who care for him.
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  • From ANON - Adriana on January 24, 2004
    I'm so impressed with your writing! You've managed to make Snape both sympathetic and his usual snarky self, all at the same time . . . I also love how you're not rushing romance, which is very realistic. I've always thought that Hermione was very, very understanding and compassionate and you've managed to bring that out admirably! Great work.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 24, 2004
    Chapter 13.... This story is just getting better & better!!! This chapter is so very heart wrenching!!! I am glad that Severus found Hermione reading to him!!! Letting him know how concerned she was for him was something good for him to hear!!! The conversation that followed, as well as Severus' inner thoughts, was so very thoughtful & touching!!! I do so hope that things will right themselves soon & that Hermione will make Severus realize that some things, like caring for one another, are more important than the fear of what MAY happen!!! cha chapter 14, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 24, 2004
    Poor Snape ( sniff)


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  • From ANON - Eboni on January 24, 2004
    Aww, this story is so sweet and so sad!! I hope everything works out okay. more soon?


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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 24, 2004
    Wow! Wonderfully intense chapter.

    When I started this I expected fluff. lol I'm glad to see the depth and detail that you've intointo this story. It's very well done and a joy to read.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on January 24, 2004
    This story just keeps getting better and better. This last chapter had me sniffling in sorrow. For all three players. Hermione, Severus and inadvertently, Harry. Simply a wonderful tale.

    Red
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  • From ANON - Cmdr. Gabe E on February 02, 0000
    WHOA O.O!!! that was an interesting chapter O.O! it was rather intriguing seeing Harry act like Snape. and the conversation between snape and hermione was well-done too ;). heheh...looks like ron and mione will have to be used to harry acting like that from this point on ;)!
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