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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Deeble on January 24, 2004
    "Coffee so strong it would wrestle him for the spoon"! It's a good thing I wasn't drinking coffee at that moment, or I would have had to pause to wipe off the computer screen. It's very entertaining to see Snape filtered through the Harry lens -- or is it vise versa? -- because it shows both the characters' differences and their often-overlooked similarities. Snape's speech about the unfairness of a teen-ager being expected to save the world was particularly touching. I've often wondered why canon Snape doesn't see that. (Maybe he wishes he were in that position?)

    I'm eager to see how Hermione acts on her new knowledge -- and what Ginny does.


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  • From ANON - Mel on January 24, 2004
    *groan* Oaaaaahhhhhhhh.... Ginny.... Girl.... Baaaaad timing..... Oh well. Maybe she'll get over her obsession for poor Harry. How soon before Lil' Mione realizes that tis not HARRY she's fallen in love with?....
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 23, 2004
    Looks like Ron is growing up a bit, too...not as thick as he once was. Please hurry with the next chapter as it would make me oh so very happy. I have to update my story on Sunday or Monday and I need at least one morechapter of your story for inspiration! :-D

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - Kristine on January 23, 2004
    Okay, I truly do feel schmucky for not reviewing this like I should have...Lord knows how much I enjoy this story, and how much it makes my day to see it updated...This is the first fantabulous body-swapping fic I've read, and believe me, I've read a LOT of them. This, however, has depth, and feeling, and allt got good stuff that separates the good authors from the bad ones...I'm friggin' jealous. :)
    Poor Ginny, though...Knowing the Weasley temper, I find myself curious as to how she'll react to this new development...That won't be pretty...
    I love this fic!! And all the subtle hints of romance? That only leaves me anxious for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on January 23, 2004
    Excellent, excellent chapter!

    I really enjoyed the tea at Hagrid's. It's fascinating to explore Severus' relationship with Hagrid. To think that he has a brotherly love for the half-giant is illuminating: despite his surly demeanor, an in-character Severus does have a capacity for love lov love the idea of Severus' innocent courtly kiss on Hermione's hands, which harkens to the days of old.

    Ooo - the plot thickens with Ginny's crush on Harry! I like how you compare the two girls' infatuation with 'Harry'. For Ginny, it is the outward Harry she likes, and have been liking since Harry was introduced to her. For Hermione, she only began considering Harry after Severus' consciousness took over Harry's body. The question is, will she be able to look beyond Severus' outward appearance to truly love him for who he is? Heh. We all know the answer to that one. *winks*
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  • From ANON - kath on January 23, 2004
    Hi there! :)
    I just came across this story tonight and have not been able to stop until now. Keep writing this it really is brilliant. Only one word of advice. Be careful not to change Snapes character too fast or much as his his dark side that makes him one of the Sexiest chacters in the book.
    I would really appreciate it if you would notify me when you next post a chapter. Can't wait for more.
    Kath x x
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 23, 2004
    Poor Ginny! Things are getting more and more twisted for everyone involved. This story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on January 23, 2004
    I'm just having the greatest time reading thiory.ory. Many thanks and keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 23, 2004
    ooooooh.it just keeps getting better and better. and yay ron. you dont know how many times happier it makes me to see how you portray ron. they way pep write ron (as well as lucius) always factor greatly on a fic for me. and i love how you dont have him as a raving mad jealous boy like is often seen. so yay and mad props to you.
    please do write more soon. hopefully ill see the next chaper..but getting 10 chapters again at next seeing point will be cool too.
    thanks.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 23, 2004
    oh!! Poor Ginny!

    It's way funny though, that the both of them are talking about *Snape* and don't even know it. : )~


    Definitely a delightfully twisted tale.
    iri iri
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 23, 2004
    i figured id get through the chapteers but then decided to comment here. first off- where the hell was i, not to see this fic get updated with fifty million chapters? that totally suprised me..but in a good happy way.
    i find it humourous the way snape is trying to be harry and covering his mistakes. and i love the fact that ron and hermione think pieces of snape whent into his brain. its just too funny and just so incredibliy useful as to why they are letting him get away with stuff. its just brilliant. and the smile ^___^ my god thats the best and so gilderoy. i can almost see the sparkle.
    so thanks so far, loving it alot and im so glad i have more chapters to go. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 23, 2004
    Love the interaction between charachters in Hagrid
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 23, 2004
    Uh oh, this is going to get complicated isn't it? I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see how you handle everything. I assume we might be in for a long ride here, looking forward to the trip!
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 23, 2004
    First I was terribly confused thinking what was wrong with this story as it made no sense at all.
    And then it hit me. I wasn't reading EPU after all, I was saving the best for last(because my neighbour has been playing that song for 3 hours already...) instead of getting right to it.
    Then I went back to the start with the knowledge that this is TT instead and read it all over.
    Now that was a really good Ron you had there. I'm so used to seeign the prat everyehere so this is really notable.

    Helen
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 23, 2004
    Hmm our PM is having an increasingly difficult time hiding his true self.

    So this was the first kiss, how sweet.

    Romance so obvious even Ron sees it, the tension is going to get thicker.

    Damn- too bad I am going to be offff line in a few days, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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