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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 23, 2004
    Great chapter as usual, but I'm starting to feel really bad for Severus. Even though Harry is the one in the coma I think he got the better end of the deal. We can see here how badly Snape has wanted friends and companionship. I also wonder how Hermoine will feel once she finds out the Harry she is falling for isn't Harry but Snape. Please update soon I'm on pins and needles.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on January 23, 2004
    I might feel worse for Ginny if I didn't know that it was Snape who Hermione's actually starting to fall for. Ginny likes Harry - the real Harry - and just hasn't been close enough to him to notice the changes in his personality. Either that or she's explaining them away. *rolls eyes* More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 23, 2004
    Chapter 12... The conversation in Hagrid's hut was .... WOW!!! It was touching, thoughtful & bits of it were quite sad!!! I hope that the revelations that Severus has shared with Hagrid, Ron & Hermione will stay with him when he returns to himself, so he keeps an open mind toward Harry, remembering just what he has to face at such a young age!!!

    I do like how you are writing Ron's character!!! He has become more thoughful, but is still quite stubornullhullheaded!!! I think you have aged him quite well!!!

    Damn those people that have to stand in the shadows & listen in on conversations that they shouldn't hear;-) I do feel badly for Ginny & I hope that she doesn't take her feelings out on Hermione!!!

    Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 23, 2004
    Ron's logic, gotta love it. Poor Ginny, don't really like her - hope she doesn't do something horrible. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Lucifera on January 23, 2004
    I just read the first chapter and thought that I'd leave a short review/note of appreciation before going on.

    This is written so well!
    I enjoy reading H/S-Stories.
    I appreciate it a lot if the choice of words, writing style and spelling are on a certain level; if not, it makes me cringe and sometimes leave - no danger of that here!
    And I just love stories that have humor, and in this resect your first chapter already has me hooked (with things like: "Severus wondered how many insults it would take to push the man into a coronary and decided that Dumbledore would not be amused to know the answer to that.") and wanting for more, so I'm off to reading it now.

    Keep up the good work!

    Lucie
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 23, 2004
    Awww! You certainly pulled my heartstrings with that ending. Some nice, fluffy goodness was exactly what the doctor ordered. I really like that you make Snape be really and truly concerned about the children in his house. It shows a side of him that we don't normally get to see. Keep up the fantastic job and thank you for updating so frequently. :o)
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on January 23, 2004
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  • From ANON - Littlelo on January 23, 2004
    A very pleasant read so far! I hope you'll keep updating, I don't often run across stories this well written! Your characterization is right on target, in my opinion. I also love your humor. Its well timed and subtle. I actually laughed out loud at one point. :) Thanks for keeping me entertained. I'm adding this story to my favorites list, hope you won't leave me hanging! :P
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  • From ANON - Alison of the Faeries on January 23, 2004
    *sniff* Poor Hermione is going to be in for one hell of a surprise. But, hey, more sexy-dreams with Snape have to be a clue of some sort...
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on January 22, 2004
    You're going to make me cry. Oh the pain in my heart! I want to hug him and love on him and make him feel better. So make Hermione do that for me.
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on January 22, 2004
    It must be so liberating for Severus to be able to openly care about people... I loved how he chewed out Hooch for not caring enough for Miss Mintage and how he comforted the little Hufflepuff... he'd never be able to do that as himself even if he wanted to ...
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 22, 2004
    I love the image of Snape as the more-or-less doting Head of House (so well done in your Sub Rosa world -- I'm glad you introduce it here, too). The way you're making him increasingly attracted to Hermione i gra gradual -- and therefore so realistic -- and I'm glad you're taking your time. (Plus the idea that his "think unsexy thoughts" image is Pince in a variety of lingerie is laugh out loud funny.)
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 22, 2004
    I love that he's so concerned about his students.
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  • From ANON - Rogue on January 22, 2004
    This is a wonderful story. I love it. I hope you update again soon.
    It's worthy of all the praise I can't think of at the moment.
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 22, 2004
    Severus is so sad, I think I'm going to cry:(( Won't he be surprised to finally see Hermione smile at him intead of "Harry"? You are doing such an incredible job of conveying emo emotions, as well as Hermiones when it's her pov, that is definitely one of the strengths of this fic. Glad to hear that you have lots more in store for us. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
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