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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Helen on January 22, 2004
    Wonderful chapter as always.
    I think I 've said it before, but this just needs repeating. Don't EVER stop writing!
    Even if your hands are immobile have someone write your ideas for you. And even if you can't speak let other people know of your talent and share it...
    And gosh do I need sleep...
    Zzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 22, 2004
    How my heart aches for him.... Wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 22, 2004
    Ahhhhhhh! (Sigh).
    Poor Sev.
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  • From ANON - Brian on January 22, 2004
    I know you were teasing, i was just playing along. By the way, I'm beginning to think that you've gone anti-social, your never online anymore. I know that you're posting a chapter a day for two or more stories, but even the "Amazing Barrie and her Beta" need a break now and again. Other than that, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Ann on January 22, 2004
    Stilloyinoying! Glad Snape is seeing some of Harry's difficulties with people's expectations of him.

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  • From ANON - Serenbel on January 22, 2004
    I LOVE this story. It makes me laugh and go *awwww* at the same time. I keep checking my email just to see if you've posted a new chapter on WIKTT.

    More chapters! More chapters now!

    Serenbel xxx
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  • From ANON - Ehlaana on January 22, 2004
    This just keeps getting better, so much so that I finished reading this chapter before loafing off to the next Dirty Deeds. I am so looking forward to seeing how you resolve this.

    :)
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  • From ANON - LittleBird on January 22, 2004
    Ohh Severus is in trouble if even thoughts of Madame Pince doesn't dull the desire for Hermione!! Wonder how he would react if he found out that she was dreaming of him!!
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on January 22, 2004
    Nice insight into Snape's emotions. I can definitely see why he would appear so uptight when he has to deal with all of that.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 22, 2004
    Love it!!! I am so enjoying the daily updates I wish I could write like that. *smile*
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  • From ANON - MsPixie on January 22, 2004
    Seem to be slower in checking for updates than you are with posting (not that I'm complaining :) )
    Great writing and I really enjoyed the fact that for once, Snape actually cares for his house and your reasoning makes it believable. I'm really feeling sorry for the poor sod, he seems so desperate for some love and friendship. Think I'll cuddle him a bit *LOL*. Can't wait to see how'll'll make Hermione & Snape get together. (We all know that's how it'll end, but it's the journey that counts, right?)
    Love&Respect
    MP
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 22, 2004
    Most excellent chapter on peeling the onion layers of Snape. The characterization is so good, you are adding to canon Snape very nicely and in a logical way.

    Snape is no dummy seeing though the distractions thrown at HP's friends to throw them off the trail.

    I always liked the idea that Snape really does care for the kids in his House, otherwise, why take on the job before Voldemorts second rise?

    I was wondering what he would do if he had to play Slytherin in Quidditch. I amlooking forward to that game if you decide to do it.

    The part covering Hagrid and *kate* the Hufflepuff shows the deeper feelings of Snape.

    Poor guy, seems to always be on the ouside looking in.

    Given all of this it seems this Snape will also have a sense of proprietry, despite thrly rly chapters. I have no idea how you are going to rve tve the romance that is forming, but I will enjoy the journey.

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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 22, 2004
    I just wanted to cry at the end. Very intriguing idea to portray two sides to Severus, I don't usually think of him as sensitive or caring. I liked that he would care so much about his house. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 22, 2004
    You had my eyes burning with tears at the end of that chapter. You are such a wonderful writer!! I like the thought of Hagrid waiting for Severus after "meetings" and the way Severus sees him.
    I can't wait until Hermione starts her Animagi training. I wonder what animal she will become?? As always, you have me anxious for more.

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 22, 2004
    Chapter 11.... The more of your story I read, the more I am pulled into it!!! The way you bring life to them makes it all the more believable!!!

    I have come to the conclusion that this mind transfer is probably one of the best things that could have ever happened to Severus Snape!!! He is being allowed the gift of seeing Harry's world (which is much different than he ever imagined) while keeping sight of his own & seeing just how much he is missing as well as learning to appreciate just how hard being Harry really is!!! The end of this chapter just tugged at my heart!!! I think that what Severus is feeling is probably quite close to what Harry feels himself, two very sad souls:( I also think he is starting to see just how much he & Harry have in common!!!

    I can only assume that the time will come when Severus & Harry become themselve's again. When that time comes, I hope that Severus will not only want to be with Hermione, but will also want to take on a larger presence in Harry's life!!! He will have so much newfound information about Harry that I just can't see him shutting him out!!! This part just adds to my thoughts that Harry will be included in this: He found himself taking his paternal concerns out on the Gryffindors, Hermione and Ron especially. Ron had declared him worse than Molly Weasley yesterday.

    I am very happy that you have been updating this story as muc you you have & I truly look forward to seeing what happens next!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^
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