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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From Lizski on January 22, 2004
    Damn, damn, damn! Anotehr excellent set of chapters. You've really got a gift for this, and I really like Severus being able to do some of the things as Harry that he couldn't do as Severus (like comfort the Hufflepuff girl). This is a very cool character exploration of him - I love it!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 22, 2004
    Beautifully bittersweet chapter, as well as a great insght into Severus' mind. The Library scene was great. Made me laugh. The stuff with Hagmademade me want to pout and sniffle. Good job.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 22, 2004
    The Hufflepuff was Kate Smith!! How cute! I am sure that Myrtle just loved that one!

    Severus's pain and longing is just tugging at my heart. Throw the poor shlub a bone, will you?

    Love the work! (As usual)
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  • From ANON - Piper S. on January 22, 2004
    I love the history that yve gve given Severus here. You've created an entire past in nothing more than a paragragh or two, and it's not only plausible, but rich with possibilities for more exploration. If I didn't know better, I'd think this was canon. Absolutely.

    It just gets better and better...
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  • From ANON - Rilla on January 22, 2004
    Oh! The end of this chapter was just heartbreaking. Such a lovely job of eliciting sympathy from the reader for Severus by showing his overprotectiveness of the students, then reminding us how broken and lonely he really is. His interaction with Hooch was great, knowing all those details offhand like that. I also liked the way he wasn't so sure he wanted to beat Slytherin at Quidditch.
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 22, 2004
    Ahh, so her subconscious knows. Very good. :o) I'm sure this dream will be coming up again later, won't it? Thispterpter was excellent. And thank you for the very frequent updates! What a wonderful thing to do for all of your faithful readers.
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 22, 2004
    Don't you just love it when dreams give you those hard to discern messages? Poor Hermione, torn between loyalty to Ginny, her body's attraction to "Harry", and her minds obvious attraction to Snape. What's a to to do? Can't wait to find out!! Thanks for the quick updates, keep up the work!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 22, 2004
    Intense, wow. Great story. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 21, 2004
    What I like about this chapter was Hermione
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  • From ANON - Aprilgrey on January 21, 2004
    What a terrific story. I'm so glad that I findlly found the time to read and review. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. Nice lemon! You are just doing a great job on all of it.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on January 21, 2004
    I know the others are anxious for the romance to begin, but I'm actually glad you're doing the setup first. So often you see fics where the couple will just already have been thinking of each other and fall into each other's arms, but this one has plot and substance and isn't rushing things. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 21, 2004
    Nice dream sequence -- great way to show that Hermione's subconscious has figured out that it's the snatche Sna Snape she's attracted to in "Harry." Bringing Ginny into the equation adds another dimension to the problem, another reason why neither Hermione nor Snape is likely to act while he's having this in-someone-else's-body experience. (Of course we're all eagerly waiting for them to do SOMETHING. But a good long lead-in just makes the inevitable that much better.)
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 21, 2004
    Poor Hermione. =
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 21, 2004
    I feel for Hermione and trust me....I know exactly how Prof. Snape feels most of the time. All too well.....It's a beautiful story and I am hoping that you'll see it to completion.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 21, 2004
    Chapter 10.... This was something else, that dream, WOW!!! Her heart & subconcious know that she belongs with Severus!!! If Ginny would have been in the dream I would say that she was feeling a lot of guilt about being with Harry!!! It seems that she is feeling badly for not being with Severus!!!

    I have a feeling that he feels the same about her, though not yet 100% on a waking level!!! If he didn't have any underlying feelings for her he wouldn't have raised such a fuss about her receiving Animagus training!!! With her mind & the way he sees that she gives freely of herself, not to mention how he feels about her pure acceptance of him/Harry I think he would find her quite acceptable to hi I I'm sure that a case of teenage male hormones would help his feelings along even if he really didn't want them to!!! Getting to know her on a more equal plane is allowing him to see how much of an equal she is to him on all levels except age & position!!!

    I do hope that things get righted for Severus so that Ginny can have Harry & Severus can have Hermione (even if he waits til after her graduation).

    Can't wait fhapthapter 11, Deb >^..^
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