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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on March 20, 2004
    I dont think I have ever read a more beautiful ending than this story. It was simply...beautiful. I have enjoyed this story from start to unfortunately...to finish. Such a wonderful piece of work. Congratulations on a fatastic fic.

    Red

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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on March 19, 2004
    Yeah !! I think I'm the 1000th review !!

    I can't believe it's over. It has been sa fua fun ride. This is a story I hope I can find the time to read again. I have not even looked at any other stories in this challange because, let's face it, who could do better than this ?

    Thanks and I will be waiting for the next adventure,

    Glinda
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 19, 2004
    Excellent ending to a superb story. I fully enjoyed your take on the Polylove challenge. I'm looking forward to updates of your other stuff (the sequel to Sub Rosa and a Dish Served Cold) hint, hint.
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  • From ANON - exivelivelyperky on March 19, 2004
    You know, if millions of father have their way, Dr. Seuss is currently burning in hell for having written "Hop on Pop". Seriously, this has been a lovely, wonderful story. I'm so glad both of them came back home to the Garden. (I think you know which one I mean.)

    Sniff. You did it right.
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  • From ANON - Silvermoon on March 19, 2004
    I just have to say that this wa a truely amazing story. I loved how Hermione looked at the garden as Severus' happy ness. And it was such a fine ending.

    Silvermoon
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on March 19, 2004
    *sniffles* Happy endings make me so...happy (so happy that my vocabulary fails me). I've really enjoyed this story, and I think I'll go and read it over again. It's always a joy to read your stories, thanks for sharing!!!
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  • From ANON - Deeble on March 19, 2004
    That's just the perfect ending to an already wonderful story. Such complete happiness, tempered by the demands of the kids for a dash of everyday reality (though in end end that's clearly part of their happiness, despite their amusing banter to the contrary). The garden/beautiful day repetition supports the feeling of unalloyed joy so well.

    It's got to be tough to make a story starring Snape sweet without being sappy, to move him from bad-tempered snarkiness to good-tempered snarkiness and make it seem completely natural, and to keep everyone else in character too. Good thing you're up to the challenge.

    I'd be sad this is done except the finale feels so right ... and I suppose those several other stories you're working on should soften the blow. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Adriana on March 19, 2004
    I'm so sorry to see this story end, but you did such a wonderful job! I'm recommending this fic to my beta (she only reads completed stories, except for mine, LOL), but I know she'll love it as much as I do. Thank you so much for taking the time with this . . . you've got a gift for storytelling (and you're quick with the update, too!) I'll be looking for more stories from you, hopefully. This was sweet and tender and sand and snarky, all roled up into one. Just lovely! Plus I always want a happy ending for HG/SS, so that was an added bonus.
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  • From ANON - Lady Anne on March 19, 2004
    I've read this fthe the beginning when you started, and I just wanted to say what a great story this has been. I'm sorry it's complete! The ending made me cry- it was perfect! Congrats on a job well done!
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  • From ANON - dave gerecke on March 19, 2004
    What a great story
    I'll read what ever you write.
    I look for your stuff and have have read all that you've written so far and will continue to do so.
    dave
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  • From ANON - Susan on March 19, 2004
    *sniff* It really is over? I loved this story. The epilogue was a really nice touch. I am such a sucker for happy endings. Can I bug you now for a new story? LOL. Thank you for a fantastic gift. This was truly a pleasure to read. Hugs, Susan :-)
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on March 19, 2004
    Wow. I can't believe this fic is finally done. It was truly amazing. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 19, 2004
    Chapter 44... THANK YOU so much for sharing this WONDERFUL story!!! I have thoroughly enjoyed it, from beginning to end!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - dryade on March 19, 2004
    WOW! what a great story! what a happy ending! i loved it!!! i'm looking forward to see what you'll be doing next.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on March 19, 2004
    So Harry ended up with Luna and Ginny with Neville. Makes sense. Somewhat. Glad to see Lavender and Ron together.
    Oh how I love happy endings. Thanks so much for writing this Barrie. I am sorry to see it finished though. (I feel a letdown when I finish a good book too.)
    It was truly a wonderous story.
    Cheers!
    PS I hope you break the 1000 mark on reviews. Wouldn't that be something!
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