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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 21, 2004
    Nice tension. Revealing dream, is her subconcious trying to tell her something? ;)
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  • From ANON - LittleBird on January 21, 2004
    Hermione feels like she's cheating on Snape -- nice twist!! This ought to give her something to think about. I like the way this is moving!!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 21, 2004
    The subconscious mind is an amazing thing. : ) Wonderful chapter.

    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 21, 2004
    Eee! I just won a free dvd and a pass for 14 to a place where we can shoot eachother... Yay, I get to pretend I'm killing my friends. Good way to get rid of unwanted tension and anger at some of said friends... Woohoo.

    Yep, the heart does know. Interesting what Severus!Harry would do if Ginny tried something.
    And what Dumbledore would make of that...
    Too bad Hermione has to go through all of the guilty feelings about Harry and can't know who he really is before he really isn't anymore.
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 21, 2004
    Poor Neville. But sometimes, when I'm reading tooksooks, I feel exactly the same way Snape did in this chapter. I just want to gouge my eyes out with a spoon! It's true! I nearly fell out of my chair laug whe when I read that line because I've thought that so many times while reading the books! Like minds... Anyway, this chapter was just as good as the others. I love the growing feelings of friendship and goodwill on Snape's part as he spends more and more time with Ron and Hermione. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 21, 2004
    brilliant. nice development. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on January 21, 2004
    I am really enjoying this - it's sweet, poignant, and a gradual shift in Snape's attitude that is believable. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 20, 2004
    Hmm -- how many temptations can one boy, er, man, take? At what point will he figure he's nochnichnically taking advantage of a student if he kisses her while in another student's body? (The fact that he's determined not to do it is completely in character.) And I love the visual image of Neville's "cow eyes," by the way!
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on January 20, 2004
    After hearing about this story on WIKTT I managed to find it and promptly read it all! It's brilliant and I hope to read more. I'm reminded of 'The Fire and the Rose' but I'm enjoying this particular body-switching tale more.

    Anything else to say? Oh yes, write more soon.

    Cheers
    - Imhilien :-)
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  • From ANON - Ann on January 20, 2004
    I like this! You are doing a good job of showing an adult (teacher) watching the way 17 year olds behave. One thing that annoys me in stories in which Hermione is still a student, is that so many writers have Professor Snape falling for her if she shows the slightest interest. I teach at a hugh school, and the male teachers there are quite used to nubile young women, even smart and nubile. You are showing the maturity Snape has, being affected by the teenage hormones. Nice job!

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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 20, 2004
    Yet another wonderful chapter. : ) I had to laugh aloud at Severus' opinion of being scarier than Neville's Gran. lololol That was hilarious.

    As always, the interaction between Snarry and Hermione was beautiful.


    Kiri
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  • From Lizski on January 20, 2004
    Oh, wow! I have been off ski racing too much, and clearly missing out on the brilliant development of this story. I am a big fan of Snape-in-someone-else's-body stories, and there are far too few of them. This is great - you've done an excellent job blending Snape's attitudes and peoples' reactions to Harry. (And, of course, I like the attacks on Draco - absolutely perfect - and way better than anything the real Harry could have come up with.) Simply wonderful!
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on January 20, 2004
    Have finally found the time to sit down and read this fic I have been hearing so much about. I must say I am glad that I have, am enjoying it so much! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Skjeveagain on January 20, 2004
    And I've finished the latest chapter, and I'm really impressed. It's been an enjoyable read so far: an interesting plot tangle without an overabundance of angst; a good dash of humor ("Boo!") and very little fluff. A marvelous recipe for a good time spent reading :) Thank you for sharing it, and I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 20, 2004
    Another excellant chapter that has left me hungering for more! Snape scarier than Neville's Grandmother? Poor Neville. Snape is starting to feel the first little signs of pity him,him, though. Oh, I can't wait 'til the next chapter to see how Hermione's friendish with 'Harry' grows!

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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