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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Skjeve on January 20, 2004
    "A shadow over his shoulder caused him to look up. Albus Dumbledore stood be him him. He was a glorious vision -- hiviorvior, with a pot of Jamaican Blue Mountain java steaming in one hand."

    Severus, of course, has marvellous taste in coffee. Commendable! Are we sure he's going to be taken by the end of the fic? If not, I hereby volunteer, if only for his taste in coffee :D

    -Crooked, barista and proud
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 20, 2004
    Chapter 9.... Severus is so very lonely & I do hope that he will eventually accept Hermione's friendship as himself!!! I don't think she feels pity for Severus, I think she just has a very caring nature about her!!! I am wondering if he will be willing to go beyond friendship with her, as Harry, since he has no clue as to how longwillwill remain in Harry's body? Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - droxy on January 20, 2004
    Well, if this isn't going to be dark then I hope it is a nice romance.

    Great chapter as always.
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 20, 2004
    I wonder what wou would think of Mrs. Longbottom. She seems to like wearing animals on her head too...
    I also wonder what they would think of me. I have a whole closet full of the weirdest hats imaginable and right now I go around with a huge fuzzy thing htat is much bigger than my head and very heavy. Practically owning a company that makes hats has nothing to do with it, nothing at all.


    Helen
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  • From ANON - LittleBird on January 20, 2004
    Severus wanting to gouge his eyes out with a spoon... That was funny. I love the way that he's coming to realize what he has and and what he doesn't. I feel for him and his sadness -- I hope he does let Hermione in, they will both be the better for it!!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 20, 2004
    This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. I feel so sad for Snape here (well I do anyways, he is after all a sad character and I believe very misunderstood). You are doing such a wonderful job building up the friendship between him and Hermoine. I can't wait for another chapter. Do I see smoochies in the future?
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 20, 2004
    Really sweet.
    Boo, makes me spit coffe in the screan with laugh.
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 20, 2004
    That chapter was brilliant! Malfoy fainting was just the icing on a cake that I've enjoyed far too much so far. And the Dursleys made it into the paper! Oh my... Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 20, 2004
    Wow!! I think I'm falling even more in love with Snape as Harry, if that's even possible. You are doing such a great job on this story, it has quickly become one of my favs, and I'm so happy that you update it so oftenanksanks!!
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  • From ANON - Alison of the Faeries on January 20, 2004
    Heh. Harry's insulting monologue to Draco reminded me of Wesely to Prince Humperdink in the Princess Bride.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on January 20, 2004
    Oooh! I was so happy to see more of this! I LOVE how you describe all of Harry's quirky little facial expressions. It really adds to the story, and I can picture the scenes so much better. I hope you're writing more! Like, right now! Please?!
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  • From ANON - SnapeLover on January 19, 2004
    DUHHH! I just re-read the chapter beginning again and realized that, yes, it IS Hermione's POV... got it now! (big dumb smile)
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  • From ANON - SnapeLover on January 19, 2004
    Funny chapter!! I LOVE your portrayal of Draco the Drama n! Bn! But I'm a little confused... In this chapter, Severus is now referre sol solely as 'Harry'. I'm curious as to the change; it's harder to picture him as Severus with the name change. Is this because this chapter is supposed to be more from Hermione's POV? Or is Severus becoming more Harry-like?
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  • From ANON - Fury on January 19, 2004
    Woohooo! I can't wait until she finds out that it's been Snape all along... Write more! write more!
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  • From ANON - Carrie on January 19, 2004
    one word,..... "Boo!" that was priceless!
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