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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Droxy on January 18, 2004
    Snape confeses he his lonely and jealous of Potters life and friends. How sad really. I guess this confession sets things up for sympathy from Dumbledore.

    I would expect Snape to feel very old living with teenagers. Your grasp of adult POV I've seen in SubRosa still shines here. I remember feeling old looking at university freshman when I was a senior. So I can just imagine what Snape feels.


    Another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 18, 2004
    "There was an attempt at deeper thought being made here" -- classic Snape.

    I think you've hit on something with the Quidditch. If Snape can referee a game, he clearly knows it well. He probably was on the Slytherin House team, or at least tried out for it.
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  • From ANON - MsPixie on January 18, 2004
    Ahh, lovely chapter. As expected. Loved the way you describled Snapes thoughts on all the Gryffindors. Funny and well thought. I . I am enjoying your style very much and can't wait for next installment.
    Love&Respect
    MP
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 18, 2004
    Great chapter! You go wonderfully into Snape's psychology of being in Harry's body and having to live his life. In a way he has been granted a second childhood through this unfortuneate accident. Again wonderful!!! I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 18, 2004
    A definite pleasure to read. I love the insights of Severus. And the stuff about the other Professors was a riot. : )~

    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Temptation on January 18, 2004
    I really like this fic so far. I do,however, feel bad for Snape in a way. Every persons dream - "to know what I know now and be 20 years younger" and he does have his ethics that make it hard for him to approach Hermione in this time. I almost feel jealous of Hermione - she gets Snape's experience (if he ever does) and Harry's stamina. What a combination!!

    Keep the updates coming - can't wait to see if Snape not Snape/Harry winds up with the girl and will she be able to separate the two in her mind when he changes back? The possibilities....
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  • From ANON - Piper S. on January 18, 2004
    Oooh, another fast update! You're going to spoil me rotten with these, you know. Every new chapter is more exciting than the last. I'm excited to see what you have in store for ust! Pt!
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 17, 2004
    Too short! But hey, you're updating so frequently I really can't complain. It's entertaining to watch what's essentially a melding of Snape and Harry -- Hermione's appropriately noticing little things about her friend that aren't quite right (intensity, for one) and the potions master, meanwhile, can't help but realize that thisdentdent he's impersonating isn't nearly as bad as he thought.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on January 17, 2004
    Mmmm, coffeeee....

    You have me intrigued. I am quite interested as to what will happen next. Pleasn'tn't make us wait too long.
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 17, 2004
    Only one complaint about your story: THE CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT!!! I want more! She isn't going to find out it's Ses uns until...after....right? Hehe. I can't wait until the next installment!

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 17, 2004
    Grr.
    It's so frustrating waiting for Hermione to figure it out...
    She's a smart and a very clever girl, why is it taking her so long?!
    My aplogizes, I'm just waiting for the reactions.

    Helen
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  • From on January 17, 2004
    I *really* like the way you're handling this. Hermione isn't just falling for Harry, she's falling for the bits of Snape she sees in Harry and she actually realizes it. You've covered all the bases with that. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 17, 2004
    Okay this is getting really good. So Hermoine is noticing all these wonderful qualities in Harry that really belong to Snape. I really can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm also wondering what will happen once the body switch gets resolved. This is a very exciting story.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 17, 2004
    Things are starting to heat up, right, right??
    I really like Snape as Harry. Young, sexy, confident, intellegent. Totally yummy!

    More soon please.
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  • From ANON - MsPixie on January 17, 2004
    I see you are stacking up on the reviews! Keep going and you might just break the record!
    Wonder what Hermione cried out. Could it have been NOT Harry
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