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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 15, 2004
    Wow! Ron figured it out. Well, most of it.

    Your insight on his character was bang on (is that an actual expression or did I just come up with it). Ron does sell himself far too short IMHO.

    More please Barrie!
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  • From ANON - angelina on January 15, 2004
    I'm enjoying this very much. I like that Ron and Hermione call rll right off that something's wrong with Harry, and are coming up with their own hypotheses about it. I also like that Snape seems to be pretty rotten at pretending to be Harry. It seems very plausible that his "Harry's-eye-view" permits him to see Hermione differently--much more intely,ely, in her common room and on her own time rather than in class. I wonder what other perceptions will be different.

    Thanks for the story, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 15, 2004
    You seem to have something about writing very interesting Rons...
    Good chapter.

    Helen(didn't get any better. Almost got taken to a hospital but the temperature went down luckily)
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  • From ANON - JenniMalfoy on January 15, 2004
    Very good! This story is proving to be very interesting. You have done an outstanding job in putting Snape's personality in Harry and having him struggle to hide it. Very excited to see this progress!
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 15, 2004
    Woo hoo! He cursed the Dursleys! I wish I knew what exactly he did to them, but I'm just glad they finally got a little bit back. Snape and Harry switched bodies? Yikes. Reminds me of 'The Fire and the Rose.' I'm looking forward to reading about Snape's adventures as Harry. There's potential for some VERY hilarious situations there. Thanks for updating so quickly and for posting to WIKTT. njoynjoyed reading the chapter immensely and look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 14, 2004
    Wow, you really update soon!

    Teen age hormone, I have forgoten about that little problem, it would be fun.
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  • From EVegvary on January 14, 2004
    Oh my goodness - you have just hit your stride with this third chapter! YES! Very, very nicely done.

    You HAVE hooked me and I will eagerly await your updates!
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 14, 2004
    This is very entertaining -- I loved the Fire & the Rose too, but don't sell yourself short: You've taken an interesting challenge and set it up nicely,h loh lots of possibilities to explore. I wonder when Hermione will notice Snape tendencies in "Harry."
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  • From Avrild on January 14, 2004
    Terrific story! I'm looking forward to more of it! Lot's of fun!!!
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  • From ANON - JennyLynn on January 14, 2004
    Ya, the wacky body exchange has finally happened! Brilliant idea by the way, and so far very nicely written. You have Snape nicely in character, different body regardless, hehe.

    Update soon! Or ill sent you an owl and make you have to switch into Pansy's body....oh the horror....
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 14, 2004
    Hmm I love the set up in this chapter. Can't wait until the next one.
    SS getting hugged- too funny.
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  • From ANON - Katty on January 14, 2004
    I really love your story and I hope you keep updating
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  • From ANON - Brian on January 14, 2004
    No I will never learn patience. SO HURRY UP!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dame Niamh on January 14, 2004
    Great story! The pacing is perfect; you're drawing us along into the tale, just waiting to see what's going to happen next! More, please!
    Blessed be,
    Dame Niamh
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 14, 2004
    Great chapter! : ) I loved the switch over, and Severus thoughts were perfect -terlterly believable in that situation. The part I enjoyed the best, however, was the laugh I got at the end.

    "It could get worse." : )~ ::snickers::


    Kiri -- eagerly awaiting more.
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