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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - MsPixie on January 14, 2004
    Oh wow! This is bloody brilliant! I absolutely love it. The pace that you are setting is just right; neither dragging nor rushing. I think that you reasoning is very plausible and convincing ... well, it's all just great! Thank you for sharing!!
    Will need to read up on your on your other fics asap. :)
    Love&Respect
    MP
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 14, 2004
    Wow.
    I never expected it to happen like this...
    And now I am very very much looking forward tothe next installment.
    Provided that I cat out out of bed and stop coughing while I read... *sigh*


    Helen
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  • From zephyrs1desire on January 14, 2004
    oh wow!! i love it..!! What did Snape do to the Dursleys? I can not wait to see a confontation between "Snarry" and Draco. Draco will be a quivering mass by the time its over... This just gets better and better.. I love it when you update!!!
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  • From Deblovesdragon on January 14, 2004
    We all assume that Snape played quidditch while in school. Since he has be a referee. But did he really? Hummmm.
    This next chapter should be fun for you. And us too.
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  • From ANON - Piper S. on January 14, 2004
    This is incredible so far! Please, PLEASE update soon. I don't think I can bear to wait!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 14, 2004
    This is too funny. Snape having to live as Harry. I can't wait to see how he does as Seeker, not to mention just going through Harry's daily routine. I can't wait for your next update. Great story!
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  • From ANON - star on January 14, 2004
    oh god this is just toooo good please update again!
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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 14, 2004
    Wow! Thank you for updating so quickly! This chapter was very nice. I love how Hermione is really noticing things about Snape that nobody else is. That is definitely something that she would do. I look forward to the next chapter! Keep it up!
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  • From slygriff21 on January 14, 2004
    Good chapter! I can't wait to read more. Update soon.

    Till next chapter

    Tiff
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 13, 2004
    Great chapter 2 i can not wait for more..

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  • From ANON - star on January 13, 2004
    I like it so far so please update! :} soon
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  • From ANON - Rosmerta on January 13, 2004
    Great beginning! I like it that Hermione is giving Snape some thought. He seems very in character here, isolating himself even in the midst of the Order members. I could see him acting exactly that way. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 13, 2004
    Another good chapter, can't wait to see what interactions await Snape and Hermione once they get to school. At the beginning of the story it should probably be sixth year potions if Hermione is referring to the previous year. Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for writing, keep it coming!!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 13, 2004
    Shame on you for berating yourself. Everyone thinks Pawn to Queen is great, and it is well written but frankly SubRosa was more enjoyable and I agree with your version of Snape. Never underestimate the taste of your readers. Steven King laughs all the way to the bank. Romance encompasses a wide variety of story types, and I'm sure yours would be as good as those other stories you are in awe of, becausue my dear Quark- many writers are in awe of YOU.

    The Snape in this story is very canon so far, and very excellent. You could do an SS/HG, and I think it would be brilliant. I'd love to see your take on the marriage law challenge.( hint hint)

    However, I am really looking forrward to this story already. The first chapter is such a riot with Snapes view of the Dursleys.

    I always find your POVs to be outstanding and the dialog to be highly entertaining.

    I will be tracking this story.


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  • From ANON - Dawningskies on January 13, 2004
    Great beginning! I can't wai see see how things progress from here. As always, it's a delight to read fanfics that grammatically well written as well as keeping in canon with the characterization. Long live Snarky Snape!
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