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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - genrou on March 17, 2004
    i know its not your work but i really like the line "A rose-dot on the 'i' of 'adoration".
    as for the letters- the best one in my opinion is ron's. and i couldnt help but notice all the "I's" in harry's.
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  • From ANON - genrou on March 17, 2004
    ah man...i never really like it when it seems all the main chacters find love in a short amount of time...
    and hey whatever happened to the no touching til graduation rule?
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  • From ANON - genrou on March 17, 2004
    ah man...i never really like it when it seems all the main chacters find love in a short amount of time...
    and hey whatever happened to the no touching til graduation rule?
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  • From ANON - genrou on March 17, 2004
    oh man, i love hermione. the way she shot harry down. and then ron, he rocks. and man when they were talking about the ss/hg relationship in front of harry and making hm disguisted ^__^
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  • From ANON - genrou on March 17, 2004
    ah and the poetry is another thing. i can be fond of poetry depending. but i could never see snape as the type to write it. this fic though is an exception given the source he cites it from and the circmstances of this fic and of course most importantly that he didnt write it himself.
    but ewww albus and minerva. that will always get me, esp since yo have thier true age differnce...ewww 80yrs.
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  • From ANON - genrou on March 17, 2004
    as mch as i love this fic, i must admit these cat things wig me out. maybe its because i really dislike cats and my older keeps saying i act like one but its still there. bt i admit its making sen sence as it goes on. and i really like the name soot.and i of course like how ron is frustrated over harry's unwillingness to look past his block of what he deems truth.

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  • From ANON - genrou on March 17, 2004
    hi, im back to this fic. i backtracked to where ron tells "harry" he knows he is snape. but this chapter definately made me fall in love with it once again. i wish i could express how happy and how much i love how ron still has his chats (over tea and bisciuts no less) with snape commiserating on harry's faiults. ^__________^ my god i adore those moments.
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  • From ANON - cindel on March 16, 2004
    I enjoyed your story VERY much, youre a ly wry writer. There are, however two tiny factual errors that need fixing.
    1)Hermione's patronus is an otter, not a tiger and
    2)Draco is "the ferret" not "The weasel"
    Other than that, fabulous!
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on March 13, 2004
    Words escape me! A lovely chapter.

    Cheers
    - Imhilien :-)
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 13, 2004
    I am probably very late to the party, but this is absolutely wonderful. It's witty, well written, deeply involving (I have read the whole thing in one go - it's now 7am), and very touching. The-tim-time element is particularly good - although it is short, given the goal of the story, it gives enough that the reader is lost in the overwhealming 'survival instinct', then the despair that comes later is something that I could feel, plus it gave it realism.

    What else can I tell you ... Well, yourself and other talented fan-fic-ers have made HG/SS something I once despised something I'm now fond of. I'm glad that it wasn't free, as too many authors overlook the price ove ive in these kinds of situations. And as for the original 'rules' of the fic, I think you managed to smash them all and fit them in wonderfully (with the exception of the "freudian" line, but that was bound to be a deal-breaker ;) )

    I have bookmarked you and look forward to reading more of your fics ... but not right now, cos I think I need to get some sleep and have lemon-flavoured dreams of Snape.
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  • From ANON - trulymad on March 12, 2004
    Good GOD!!!!!!!!! *whispers* Thank you! *cries*
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  • From ANON - Droxy on March 11, 2004
    So many reviews I feel I will get lost in the accolades.

    Very mutli-layered lemons here, nicely done.




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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on March 11, 2004
    Nhathat's what I call sex!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on March 11, 2004
    Oh dear writer, that was so beautiful! That was so romantic and yet steamy at the same time! Well done!
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  • From ANON - Evanescence on March 11, 2004
    I have no words to describe this. I have goosebumps all along my arms, it was that good. Not just the consummation/act of finally getting to it, because s fas far more than that. You infused this with so much "true" emotion and feeling that it makes the reader reel.

    Absolutely bloody fantastic,

    - Eva
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