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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Shinigami on March 11, 2004
    Ah.. the lemons... *speechless*

    I ended up laughing with the 'lessons'... that part I like very much, wonder what the other lessons are. I feel pity to Ron's and Victor's future wives too... Hermione was very frustrated... and here I thought she's the virgin.. LOL, Griffyndor's courage indeed.

    Anyway, I wonder why Dumbledore didn't do anything... don't other people in that place botherir air attention elsewhere? I was wondering if you're going to end it here though.

    I tip my hat to you and your beta, a job well done these two later chapters. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on March 11, 2004
    An absolutely wonderful pair of chapters. The climax was very well written. (pun intended). Thank you so much for posting them together.
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  • From ANON - Susan on March 11, 2004
    Well...wasn't that just worth the wait. So very glad my husband is home today. LOL. Well done. Not even going to bug you for an update. :-)
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on March 11, 2004
    :D

    I would leave you a long, glowing review, but I think you've rendered me speechless as well. Fantastic job. :)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 11, 2004
    Chapter 41 and 42 - It must be nice to have such an open minded mother. Very nice build up for the pay-off in the next chapter. The visuals of the rooms breath-taking. I never thought of Severus' time with his parents to be pleasant, that was a nice change of pace. The lemon was beautifully written, very few first times are that wonderful - its nice to imagine in fantasy world that such experiences can be so positive. Thanks for the very long and slow build up with the most amazing lemon delivery.
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  • From michelline on March 11, 2004
    Are you nuts?? You were worried about how your "lemons" would turn out? Honey, you can make me lemonade, lemon meringue pie, hell - anything with lemons on it as long as they taste (look) as good as these do in this chapter. Thanks for the update - you make my day! Now hurry - update the other fic as well. Pretty please?? ;)
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  • From ANON - Deeble on March 11, 2004
    I love Snape's small, shy smile -- it's a great visual reminder of his insecurity and how he's essentially being taken by surprise every time he's appreciated. It's a tricky thing making the man snarky AND sweet and make it seem completely in character. His desire to go slow shows his care for Hermione and his famous control over himself, and Hermione's response -- hurry up already! -- is a great humorous touch.

    Though there was one bit of nonsense in here: "you would think they were part of a bad novel written by an unimaginative writer." Never!

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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on March 11, 2004
    Your 12 hours of struggle for these last 2 chapters was definitely worth it. Such passion. Really, really great story!
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  • From ANON - Ghaeth on March 11, 2004
    Ahhhhhhhhh.
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  • From ANON - DisenchantedGlow on March 11, 2004
    This is such a fabulous story...I love it. I have been holding off reading it because I usually don't read WIP...I hate waiting for the next chapter, I'm so impatient, but your e-mail to LnLS about lemons made me read tonight. And I loved it. I read the whole thing in one sitting, and now I have to get up for class in 3 hours. Fabulously done, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - e on March 11, 2004
    your lemons were loverly, dear. your entire story is amazing and you keep outdoing yourself every chapter
    xoxo
    ...me...
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  • From ANON - influenza1918 on March 11, 2004
    You probably don't want to hear criticism...I'm sure you don't. Let me say that I think this is a wonderful story and that you are a very gifted writer. Please, please don't get upset with me.

    I don't like the cat animagus thing. To me, it feels like a secondary plot in an otherwise beautiful story - like something tacked on. Isn't everything complex and wonderfulugh ugh without having to introduce a new contrivance? It just feels *wrong* to me, and I think the story would be better off without.

    Love the lemons, love your writing, love your depiction of the characters. I *especially* love the Ron/Severus friendship...how rare in fanfic. Just don't like the cats.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 11, 2004
    Chapters 41 & 42... AMAZING, BEAUTIFUL, SENSUAL, DEMANDING, FANTASTIC, INCREDIBLE.... there are so many more words that could be used to describe this which was WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!! HOLY MY,se 2se 2 chapters were PERFECTLY FABULOUS!!! I so love the way that they meld together!!! There is so much caring & love, not to mention the introduction of Hermione, call me Miss Demanding, Granger!!!

    I LOVE this story & if you haven't figured that out by now, my reviews must really suck;-) THANK YOU for putting up these 2 chapters tonight!!! Til chpater 43, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Bambu on March 11, 2004
    When you write lemons, you write LEMONS. Wow!
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  • From ANON - Adriana on March 11, 2004
    I had to read both chapters twice, they were so good! This was certainly worth the long wait . . . I love emotionally uplifting sex scenes, LOL. By the way, I howled at this:


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