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Reviews for No Words

By : Tenebra
  • From ANON - ruleroftravels on September 25, 2006
    Oh, no! That was rather sad...
    But it was really good... I hope you continue if you were planning to; it seems to me like you wanted to make it final here, but I think it would be awesome if you went on!
    Great work...
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  • From ANON - Chloe the Grey on October 26, 2005
    I liked it. I had a pretty good idea of who it was and I read the entire thing as it being Harry. For me, I think it was better thinking it was Harry and knowing what Sirius was unintentionally doing to him. I probably would have been a bit dissapointed if it had really been James. I'm curious about what was going on with Sirius. Was it madness? Was it some sort of spell or potion? Or was it like you said in the summary, just some really strong wishful thinking? Maybe he was really really drunk and started hallucinating? If you ever doing feel like continuing with this plot, it might be interesting to see things from Harry's point of view. I was reading some of your other reviews and I got a bit confused. I know that you say that it's a one shot, but did you used to have more chapters? Just curious. Anyways, good work!
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  • From ANON - TicTac on July 04, 2004
    Very well done, I hope you plan to keep going with this. You have to give Sirius a chance to make it up to poor Harry.
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  • From ANON - Quila on January 23, 2004
    It made the perfect one-shot, but I am still very glad that you decided to continue! Very good.
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  • From ANON - Sun-chsn on January 16, 2004
    Whoa... I loved thos. You really had me convinced it was James/Sirus until well, it was Harry. Please continue this is stunning.
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  • From ANON - Aruraya on January 16, 2004
    I really liked this. I think it was well written, and that you captured a sense of urgenc the the first chapter that is usually hard to convey. My only criticism is that the chapters are too short. You should draw out your wonderful writing to give the story an added emotional touch and some more depth. Other than that, well done! Please update soon!
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  • From Shelob on January 14, 2004
    Your writing is very fluid, I was wondering about this sentence. "his footsteps echoing louder than usual in the silence of the night." Sorry if it seems like a duommeomment. It just stuck out at me. Maybe leave out the "louder than usual" part??

    I am not a big fan of the pairing but I didn't want that to affect my opinion of your writing which is quite nice in my opinion. I would like to see you write more. Not that I feel you should have to continue this fic just to satisfy interest in your writing. I think it works nicely as a short story. But it would be nice to see more of your work.

    Thanks

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  • From ANON - Lady Sirius on January 14, 2004
    This was really good! I didn't see it coming at all, didn't expect it. Please keep it up and write more!
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  • From ANON - LizardLady on January 14, 2004
    Wow!
    Just...wow!!!
    Now I don`t have any words!
    I`m speechless...
    That was great!
    Please write more!!! I want more!!!
    You`re great!!!!!!!
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