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Reviews for I\'m Going Down

By : BrinaNicole
  • From ANON - LeeDragon on January 19, 2004
    Yay! Manga and Strawberry pocky and Sake and Anime, that would make any teen's life better.
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  • From ANON - abby on January 19, 2004
    You badly need to get a beta reader, take this down until you can the the spelling, grammar, syntax and other errors fixed. The story has a little promise, but, your characterizations need some serious work.
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  • From ANON - limited sanity on January 15, 2004
    I agree with you. JPSS slash is very interesting, and I can't wait to find out what happens next! I lveo this story to the bones, so *PLEASE* update soon. Pretty Please!?!
    A lot of hugs from limited sanity
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  • From ANON - LadySirius on January 15, 2004
    This story has potential, even though as you say Snape is out of character, but this is the way you see him, so be it. My biggest complaint is that it needs to be betaed - spelling, syntax errors abound, and the use of the question mark for the apostrophe is very annoying. Appearance does count for a lot, as does ease of reading.

    If you would like any help, feel free to email me.
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