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By : k8gsmith
  • From ANON - Aurora on April 08, 2004
    Myrtle, I was teasing you over at the GB. :)I recognized your food oriented fanfic, of course. So puhleeze write chapter 16. Ch. 15 leaves us hanging with intriguing possibilities.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on April 01, 2004
    Well, after eating Indian food for three months your discussion of Italian has left me with severe cravingr tor tomato, organo, and rosemary. You are evil to do this, you know. What I wouldn't do for a good bottle of cab or merlot, it doesn't really exist here.

    I so loved the humor in your last chapter, "you speak fluent Dumbledore" is just indicative of the lines that had me cracking up.

    What makes your humor so good is it seems so natural.

    Interesting evaluation on the financial status, every author has their views of the wealth of SS. What is interesting is the evaluation of HG's status, good research on your part. I like "techical details", the things that make a story a story and not just PWP.

    Great response to the challenge, if the originator doesn't give you the prize (e.g. major advertising) then shame on them.

    Thanks for the happy open ending.

    Oh yeah, I'd "keep" this Severus any day. ;> LOL
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  • From on March 31, 2004
    Hey!
    Finally an update! Oh, I like it of course and I am soooo sad that there will be only one chapter left. This story is absolutely yummy, with both, food and "you-know-what". Should try to make some of these recipes by myself, though british breakfast isn't my thing :-)

    Thanks again,

    TinyDreamer
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  • From ANON - Kait on March 30, 2004
    So good I read it twice! (And got my shoutout too) Hope you've had a nice time with the kids on school vacation! Lurve, Kaitlovesthepotionboy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 30, 2004
    Chapter 15... I can't belive we are on the verge of the end of this story, I've really enjoyed the ride, or in this case, the menu!!! Another FABULOUS chapter, you deserve praise, no lashes from me!!!

    HOLY MY, I can't believe Neville!!! I know he thought his plan was good, but if he had any sense he should have had someone else brew for him;-) I am glad that it all worked out in the end, Severus never ceases to amaze!!!

    Hermione & Severus' venture sounds very promising!!! Can't wait to see how it goes!!! The only thing they didn't seem to answer was where Severus was going to be living!!!

    As always I will be looking forward to your next update!!! Til then, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Star Fire on March 29, 2004
    *Faints* That was just AWESOME!!!!! Need I say more??!!?? You are a wonderful writer full of great ideas. I can't wait for the next chapter, I have been checking every day for the next one. I think I just might be addicted to your story. LOL I keep rereading and rereading waiting for the next chap. Well, Keep up the great work... Happy Writing!!

    Star Fire
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  • From ANON - Aurora on March 18, 2004
    Please, more! I do really enjoy the balance between annoying Snape habits in spite of himself and his capacity for tenderness.
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  • From ANON - Brian on March 14, 2004
    I love the story. I see why Barrie is always raving about your skills in her own opening notes to each chapter. Oh and the puns are great. The only thing i ask is that you get on barrie about updating at least one of her stories per week. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on March 13, 2004
    I'm still really enjoying this story - but I have one little teensy bit of concrit to pass along - it was especially noticeable in this chapter that the POV kept switching from Hermione to Severus without any sort of indication that you were going to do it. This can make for confusing reading - it's generally best to stick with one POV at a time, and have a definite break when you switch. (Some fanfic authors use a *** or something similar to indicate that break, even a few carriage returns would help). Other than that, I am enjoying both your plot and characterization, and the lemons were very juicy and delicious :)
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  • From ANON - Seva on March 12, 2004
    *mumbles incoherantly, before sighing, and attempting to sort out thoughts...* That was....so...beautiful! I really am running out of adjectives to describe your writing, but allow me to assure you that this is utterly fantastic. I LOVE your description, wit, and creativity! (and i also love the pers tha thanks to reviewers...lol...i lead a sad life!) Please don't let Severus leave, ever!

    with, as ever, much admiration and anticipation of a new chapter,

    ***Seva***
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  • From ANON - Droxy on March 11, 2004
    Somehow I get the impression you are smiling like the cat that got the cream while writing these last two chapters.

    Very well written, as usual.

    You style strength is your ability to gently weave the humor into the story.


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  • From ANON - Brian on March 11, 2004
    I like the choice of Old Blue Eyes...very much so. He's always been a good one for wooing women.
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  • From ANON - TheGreyLady on March 11, 2004
    "Roses are red, violets are blue, I like conflakes, now let's go screw." Had to... you KNOW that I had to... MMMMMMMMMMMWA!
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  • From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 11, 2004
    ;-) steal away... lol. Bless ya! Kait xxxx
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  • From ANON - Tiny Dreamer on March 11, 2004
    Updateondeonderful!
    I still wonder what happened to Neville, and why Snape was forced to leave Hermione without waking her, but he stays with her - in the muggle world. This is great for our old Potion master :-)hopehope for more since I am not able to write so great for myself!

    Tiny Dreamer
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