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By : k8gsmith
  • From ANON - Krystina on February 25, 2004
    I don't really take the time to read Severus/Hermione stories that are not by authors that I recognize or that I have not read already because I hate to be disappointed by the characterizations of Hermione or Severus, or the situations that they find themselves in. I'm pleasantly surprised by your story; I absolutely love it. I love the fact that you made Dumbledore meddlesome and somewhat omniscient without it being completely ludicrous. I also appreciate the way you brought Snape into Hermione's world without his integration being rushed or halted by a compromising of their characters or unnecessary arguments. It is one of the best fluff pieces with SS/HG that I've read in a while, and I really cannot wait until you post again. Don't try to say that all I've been reading is spam, just take this for what it is: a compliment and a plea to continue, and soon. ;)
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  • From ANON - Droxy on February 24, 2004
    How do I begin here. I
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  • From ANON - Adriana on February 23, 2004
    *Sigh* Beautifully written! I love the physical descriptions, of course, but the emotions were just as wonderful. Kudos!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on February 23, 2004
    I apparently had lost track of this lovely tale at some point but, I am glad to have found it again! What a lovely tale and I know what you mean about shooing the kids away while trying to write. hehe I have been trying to hold a coherrant thought while on Vicodin and motrin. Seems I had a tubal pregnancy and had to have an operation to take care of the problem. The drugs make me sleep lots so there is even less time for writing. Bummer. Heh....Great fic!! I'll be keeping up with it.
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  • From ANON - OppieCat on February 23, 2004
    I stumbled across this story, am not even finished with what's been posted, and yet feel compelled to review (which I rarely do). I adore your tone -- you manage to keep Severus perfectly in snarky-chara and and yet make him human all at the same time. The story is light-hearted and funny without being silly. The grocery store trip was priceless. I'm going to have to read everything you've written. Reading this makes me feel as though I'm skipping....does that make sense? Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Gill on February 23, 2004
    Oh God I loved this! It's so witty and based in normality but with that rare quality that makes it wonderfully captivating!! I hope it's far too dangerous for him to leave for ages!! Please do some more! That slow build up was excruciating but all the better for it. Well done!!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on February 23, 2004
    OH! That was amazing! Damn you're good! I am still working on the short smut for my short PWP and you whip this out like nothing! I am so jealous! I have to say that was just beautiful and one of the best making love chapters I have read in a long long time! Bows before your superior and poetic smut!

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - Jenny on February 23, 2004
    Coo. Good stuff. Splendid lemons - although somehow, the subtlety of the "food" chapter is still unrivalled in its erotica, to my way of thinking. At any event, a nice chapter, with some good points made.
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  • From ANON - Ireth on February 23, 2004
    I haven't read such beautiful lemons in a long, long time. It was incredible. So well described but not in a lewd way. I'm in awe...
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  • From Padraigin on February 23, 2004
    Excellent! You're doing such a wonderful job with this fic.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on February 23, 2004
    Wow - I get back from vacation to find two great chapters waiting for me. :) And smut - finally - yay! Great job. Looking forward to more.
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  • From arcessita on February 23, 2004
    Appears I missed a few updates--I read through four chapters like there was no tomorrow! As always, your writing is ly. ly. You pay such attention to detail, whether it's the taste of a wine or how the words a character's chosen affect another, that the story is rich and vibrant. As my writing teacher has been known to say, this is *lush*. I'm glad to see your lemons are lush, too. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. There was a little grammatical problem--"Dipping his fingers deeper, her slickness welcomed him" gave me a twinge, as *he* should be the subject he she sentence--that you might want to fix. Still, it didn't take much to pull me back in; as I said, it's a wonderful story. You've written the little anxieties and the wonder with equal honesty, and it shows. Oh, and if you want the Azerbaijan, email me and I'll send you a copy.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 23, 2004
    Nice piece of lemon art you wrote there. wow and thanks.
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  • From ANON - jordy on February 23, 2004
    YEAY! They did it! (The sexual tension in the air was making it kind of hard to breathe.) I want to thank you. What a wonderful way to come home from a weekend away! (Just came back from Vegas. Had a great time, but it rained. And rained. And rained. The whole drive there, which should have been roughly 6 hours, turned into 8. The 15 mile drive to the Calif/Nev staine ine took us 45 minutes(!!!) It was frustrating as hell, but we were excited to have a weekend away from life and kids, which only seemed to make the drive that much longer.) The way back was not much better. People just don't know how to drive in SoCal! Not to mention that there are mudslides and floods everywhere, because of the horrible fires San Diego had back in October/November. Everybody is panicking. Ahh, so much for that relaxing weekend!! Lol! Well, at leat I got to catch up on my favorite stories! That just makes me happy. Can't wait for more! Hopefully, Hermione and Severus will be cooperative and let you update really soon! Do you think? Maybe you can talk them into it. Happy day!
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  • From ANON - e on February 23, 2004
    oh words. words words. im not a writer. and even if i thought i had a talent for putting things into words, the most beautiful and perfectly crafted phrasing i could come up with would pale in comparison with your writing.
    there is nothing to say. there is no review that could be left for this chapter (for any of your chapters, really) that could possibly express just how beautifully you write. any review or rec that i could give you, i couldnt do this story justice, in fact, trying to use my words to describe this story feels almost wrong. blasphemy.
    i cant review, cant write, cant type, any proper response to this. so... heres what you might have heard had you been sitting here watching me read:
    sigh.
    xoxo
    ...me...
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