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Reviews for Punishment

By : chcgdss
  • From ANON - JW on October 23, 2004
    Ch 24 - I think the title "Punishment" now refers to what Severus is doing to himself! Enough punishment - get these two togther and quit wasting her time on the boy!
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  • From ANON - sarah on September 19, 2004
    short but good, Severus needs to open his fucking eyes and realise what he's got before it's too late
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  • From lckarlsson on September 19, 2004
    Hi there!

    I've just read al the the new chapters you've published since I read your story last time, and I truly loved them! I think your story is fantastic! Sorry for my dela rev reviewing your story, but like you, I've just moved and started a new school, and I've been very busy..

    I really enjoyed the way Alex was toying with Severus, finally making him give in.. mmmhh. some very nice scenes!

    And so it wasn't a haluscination afterall!

    I'll be looking forward to reading more of your story later on, and now good luck with school and your new place.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - June on September 16, 2004
    Ch 23 - you better write some ROMANCE here! Even if she goes away to school and just visits him every single weekend, you're not gonna just leave him with a broken heart? Right? Right??? Please?????
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  • From ANON - - on August 28, 2004
    This is so good! Nice mixture of sex and romance. Keep up the good work!
    Btw, this is the first story I've reviewed in the aff.net, so your story must be really good.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on August 25, 2004
    Bittersweet. Planning suicide or just more self inflicted pain? Just morbid speculation on my part. You are doing a wonderful job!! Keep writing!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on August 23, 2004
    I have always reviewed. This story is coming along nicely!! I can't wait to see what else you jave in mind!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2004
    Great chapter,
    next chapter please please please.
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  • From ANON - Talene on August 23, 2004
    Ah man...there's a way to make me cry. Bad girl! Good writer...bad girl.

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  • From lckarlsson on August 19, 2004
    Hi there! Great chapter! So Severus is starting to smoke weed now, what will be next? I think the chapter was really funny, but I would like to see some more action between Alex and Severus soon though!

    And how could she just disappear? Is Severus starting to halucinate?

    As always I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!

    Leonora.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on August 18, 2004
    I still think this is a wonderful tale!! I will look forward to more soon!
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  • From lckarlsson on August 17, 2004
    Ahh! So now Dumbledore knows and he doesn't mind.. a good chapter, thought a bit short.. I'm really looking forward to see what Alex does now!

    Keep posting!

    Leonora.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2004
    great chapter can't wait for the next one
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  • From ArachneNonafel on August 11, 2004
    hehe...More? I have been eagerly awaiting this new chappie and its so short. *pouts* More?? ;-)
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  • From lckarlsson on August 07, 2004
    This was a really great chapter! Love the tension, love the intensity! Please update again soon!
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