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Reviews for Punishment

By : chcgdss
  • From ANON - Spaci on August 06, 2004
    I really like the story. This last chapter was awe! Ke! Keep up the great work!
    Spaci
    P.S. Hehe! I know were you got the line "You drained my heart and made a spade, but there
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2004
    I have just finished reading all the chapters and its all good, this is a great fic cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on August 06, 2004
    How well I understand that feanowinowing that the person will one day leave....praying they won't, resigning yourself to inevitablility. I hope you decide to end your tale happily. I eagerly await the next chapter. :-)
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  • From ArachneNonafel on July 31, 2004
    Please continue with your tale. I am enjoying it immencely.
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  • From lckarlsson on July 25, 2004
    Wow! I've think your story is REALLY great! I think it's really sexy, and I like the way you portray Snape, I think it's very realistic. I especially enjoyed your story up to chapter 12.

    I enjoyed the rest of the chapters too.. but.. I was kinda expecting something else: "After allose ose where the consequences after just one kiss. What if she was actually willing and went further next time? What would he do then? It made her shudder to even guess." - Remember that? That made me shudder too, and I was kinda waiting for that to happen..

    But your chapters about the masquerade and about Severus releasing Alex from the spell were very good though, you had me totally fooled about which guy was which.. I'm glad that Severus came to save her from Crabbe!

    And I guess we're moving into some more soft chapters now? Well, then I guess it's too late to ask for the "Alex making out with Kevin and driving Severus crazy with jealousy and getting punished"?

    I will enjoy the softer chapters too, if that's were your taking the story.. whatever you choose.. keep up the truly great work you're doing on this story!

    I'll be patiently waiting for your next chapter!

    Leonora.
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  • From ANON - June on July 23, 2004
    My only suggestion is that you FINISH THE STORY -- with them HAPPILY TOGETHER! Hey, it's not that often you find a guy with as much experience as Snapey, she should go for it!
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  • From ANON - erika on June 27, 2004
    its really good so far. you are great at leaving cliffhangers i am dying to know ... is she pregnant, what whatwhat... i have to know what is goingto happen next. : ) anyway great story
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  • From ANON - Jess on May 24, 2004
    Crabbe eww!, so glad you updated, I am interested to see how long severus can go without her, and what will happen with her and kevin?. Jess.
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  • From ANON - Derr on May 17, 2004
    Please continue...
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  • From ANON - Silvana on March 22, 2004
    I think Sev is the phantom as well. He could have overheard the part about the garden. *shrugs* Update soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Jess. on March 22, 2004
    I'd say severus is the phantom, his voice is too recognizable , but then again kevin did mention the garden to her, update soon ....Jess.
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  • From ANON - Jess. on March 05, 2004
    Update Please!! am waiting to see sev's reaction to what she about to do!. Jess.
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  • From ANON - Jess. on February 18, 2004
    Exactly, lets see what sevi would do, excellent!. ...Jess
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  • From ANON - your roomie on February 16, 2004
    hun..... you know how you always bitch when people dont update their stories?? well you are being one of those people and now im going to harrass you every chance i get to update........ and you cant escape me cuz we live in the same room!! HA HA HA HA!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2004
    Ugh. People like you make everyone else hate the fandom.
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