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Reviews for Punishment

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  • From ANON - Seva on February 07, 2004
    ooooooh this is so good! i just adore dominant severus *whimpers* more please!


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  • From abra on February 06, 2004
    Very hot! I hope you'll write a lot more. I can't believe you considered stopping after only two chapters! It is a very entertaining story. Damn, Snape's good!
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  • From ANON - t on February 06, 2004
    Have you even read the books? Doesn't look like it. Tkae your MS trash elsewhere.
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  • From ANON - Ellen on February 06, 2004
    Write more soon! It's a great story--wonderful balance of pleasure and pain. I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jess on February 05, 2004
    You write a really interesting story, I'm wondering what exactly he would do if she actually gave herself to someone else willingly? would he realise he loved her? keep up the great work..ess.ess.
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  • From ANON - Yabo on January 31, 2004
    Oh wow. The blood thing /shiver. I know I'm a freak but damn that's a turn on. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 31, 2004
    No flames dear...not from me. Wonderful writing! More perhaps? I realise it's not much but...i would like to take this opprotunity to encourage you to continue and write more soon.
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  • From ANON - kat on January 31, 2004
    i cant believe i live with you. lol.
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  • From ANON - jadephoenix on January 30, 2004
    dude or dudette, I am so loving this so far! very descriptive, axcellent command of langlanguage, yaddayadda, so on and so forth. I know you don't want suggestions really, but one word for you: chains. *evil sadistic grin*

    ps: 'orange-y'
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  • From SweetMel016 on January 27, 2004
    Wow, thats a wicked awesome story. Definatley doing well on it. Anyway yeah just keep up what you're doing and you will make me a very happy person! - Violet
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 26, 2004
    As typical as it sounds...I would like to see a love story. Sev fal in love with her. There are plent SS/ SS/HG or (insert cannon character) but very few with him and a character that has been created. If I am missing something here, I am sure someone will inform me. You write a wonderful tale and I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Frances on January 24, 2004
    Severus is so nasty!! Hmmm - very nice...!! Keep going!!
    I think my only complaint is the chapters are not long enough!!

    :-)
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 23, 2004
    Still a wonderful piece! I enjoy every chapter and look forward to more, my dear! ;)
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 22, 2004
    I think this is a very intense story and very nicely done. I am no expert but I know what I enjoy and I very much enjoy this. Please continue?
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  • From ANON - MissHighSchool on January 21, 2004
    MORE MORE MORE *bes aes around the room* MUST...HAVE...MORE :D kisses
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