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Reviews for Beware the Flamingo Pink Fog

By : caliko
  • From ANON - Joyous Trouble on January 24, 2004
    oooh smut, yeah!!!!

    If you want it as a one shot, it will stand alone.. but it would be rather interesting to see what if anything would become of it...

    Only one thing... It says Ginny fell asleep before the bomb went off... then it says she closed her eyes against the images she had seen... which was it.. did she see, or was she asleep?

    Joy
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  • From ANON - Kay on January 21, 2004
    oh my lord that was unbelievable!!! please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on January 20, 2004
    It really didn't need much in the way of beta work. It was quite good. The only issue I saw was the punctuation and sentence and paragraph structure. The story itself was good. Looking forward to more and remember what I said, write the story YOU want to write, tell the tale YOU want to tell!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 20, 2004
    I think you succeeded. Entertaining. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - drowner on January 20, 2004
    U must continue this it is too funny and good please please please!!!
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  • From ANON - buttercup on January 20, 2004
    Please re-write this story!!! There is just too much good stuff in this to be satisfied with the little teasers in this one-shot. I feel like I just watched a great trailer for a movie that I REALLY want to see.

    I am jumping on the bandwagon and demanding more! (would it help if I batted my eyelashes and said pretty please?)
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 20, 2004
    Great one-shot, but this story just begs for . Y. You have to at least let us know what happened with Hermoine and Snape. Perhaps a repeat performance without any pink fog clouding their brains?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 20, 2004
    PLEASE tell me that you will consider adding more to this!!! This was very good & I would LOVE te hoe how everyone respnds to each other after the fact, not to mention the payback that is owed to Fred & George!!! There are so many ways this story could go further, Hermione ending up pregnant (did they think about contraceptives in the fog?), Harry & Ron becoming a couple, so many things could happen!!! I do hope that you will add more!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 20, 2004
    That was great! Write something else soon.
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  • From ANON - Lady Sirius on January 20, 2004
    I enjoyed this very much. It was very imaginative and an interesting premise. However, I would like to see more of what happens between Hermione and Professor Snape, and the aftermath of the love fog. Please consider taking it further!
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  • From ANON - pinkchubbymonkey on January 20, 2004
    i think you should add more! i like it alot! so funny! lol! if you add more plz email me plz!
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on January 19, 2004
    That was hilarious.....I would like to read a continuation of this......the aftermath of what happens when they go back to school......you know Hermione and SNape fighting their attraction to each other......Harry and Ron also fighting an attraction or lack there off......The foursome of s, rs, remus,arthur and Molly was funny....never thought even thru a lust fog that they would be that wild......great story....I look forward to reading more of your work
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 19, 2004
    I for one would be intere to to see where you could go with this! It's an awesome one-shot which can certainly hold its own...but would make for an interesting story as well.

    Heather
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on January 19, 2004
    Well personally I absolutely loved it! I thought that was just great! It was amusing and hot and amusing! What more could a reading ask for! I know! If you have more time write that bigger plot! I would love to read it! I promise to review if you do!
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on January 19, 2004
    Interesting piece, however, I would sgly gly suggest that you re-format it so that it is easier to read. I had a very difficult time getting through it. With some formatting of the paragraphs and some work on the sentence structure and grammar, it should be very enjoyable to read. Have you thought about getting a beta? Good luck!
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