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By : snapesgirl1981
  • From ANON - willow on October 25, 2004
    i loved it can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - vash_the_dork on September 01, 2004
    If we promise LARGE amounts of chocolate will you update?
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  • From ANON - Agnes on August 06, 2004
    Marvellous story!! I really like it!
    Will there be more soon? Pretty please?
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  • From Crystal56 on June 30, 2004
    Wow, this is some story...it's extremely interesting. I hope you plan on updating soon!
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  • From ANON - XMelodyGoddessx on June 28, 2004
    Oh come on and finish!! I am so into this story it is so cool and it needs to updated and SOON!

    Good story!

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  • From ANON - droxy on May 21, 2004
    Chapter 15-

    ...oh my gawd...

    I never ever want to hear that you can't write smut. It won't float anymore.

    You have raised the bar of expectations my dear snapesgirl1981, and I expect the samalitality of smut -elsewear-.

    I feel so humbled. I don't think I could ever write like this!
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 21, 2004
    chapter 10-

    Uhmmm, ok....

    Some spelling and word context errors like but instead of butt. Man instead of men... that type of thing that won't be found with a spell checker.

    Same stupid smart quotes formating stuff. (sorry)

    Now, if you are going to do explicit slash my dear, you need to learn the lingo. I can't help you with that though. =
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 21, 2004
    Chapter 9

    This line is utterly brilliant and very hot!!!

    Be careful what you start Potter or you might not survive the answers. Be very sure that this is what you want, that you are prepared to go through with it because I am no gentle lover and I am not going to stop just because you have second thoughts. Slytherins are demanding lovers who need to be tamed- or to suffer the consequences.
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 21, 2004
    I can just hear Rickman!Snape through the dialog. Very nicely done Snape here.

    And you had to go and mention buttons... damn Mentioned the pony tail...damn

    Logical motion and timing too.


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  • From ANON - droxy on May 21, 2004
    chapter 3-

    I want Snape to cook ME breakfast.

    Nice to see you are using onxy as the eye description now. Now about the chimney habit....
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 21, 2004
    Chapter 1-

    Ok my dear snapesgirl I have found your slash fic and you can't hid anymore. ;>

    and you said you can't write smut! Bullshit I say! But we can't -do this type of smut- on FFN for ATS.

    Snape and Harry, hmmm, Harry is a goner for sure...

    I am beginning to think you don't need a beta anymore (sniff), the first chapter is well written and you do have imagery there. I am so proud.







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  • From sacara on May 19, 2004
    This is really something and you have me begging here for more ... Keep it coming and update soon.

    Just one little thing, I like it how you're trying to keep them in character and I think you're doing a fine job with snarky Snape but wouldn't Harry be a little more self-confident even in a situation like you have in chapt. 15 - I mean in bed. He always was standing up to Snape. I think he would be just a tad more challenging and trying to cover up his ignorance of these special procedures..

    This is just what I think ... you've asked for our opinions, didn't you :)

    ta
    sacara
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  • From ANON - mei on May 16, 2004
    argh! i hope you do realise that ending it there was pure evilness!
    it has become hard to find good adult storys on the net these days...
    so please go on with it!
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  • From ANON - mladysnape on May 12, 2004
    Wow. Very nice work. Just got done reading chapter 14 and can't wait for the next post.
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  • From ANON - Rane on May 11, 2004
    You seem extremely fluent and I compliment you both on your writing and your story. Most people who speak English as their first language don't write this well, and the plot so far is definately intriguing. I look forward to reading the rest!
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