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Reviews for Searching My Soul

By : snapesgirl1981
  • From ANON - Angie/Les on May 01, 2004
    Oh yes please continue. I'm loving it. It is great and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 04, 2004
    Maybe a little update? Pleaseee...?
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  • From ANON - xikum on March 16, 2004
    Oops! Last 'he' in my last sentence was unclear---It seemed to me that you had Severus in a way warning Harry about how Sev'd have to act, at least in public, after school started. Did Harry catch that notiOr dOr did I misread? And. yes there may be a few typos, but don't worry about it; there are very few. If I could simply write so well, much less do so well at translating anything I wrote into another language, I would be ecstatic!! Please write more, soon!
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  • From ANON - xikum on March 16, 2004
    Lucky, Lucky Muse!!
    I'd love to know the tone of voice Harry used with that last exclamation in the last sentence! I like the In-character Snape, So early in the relationship, before he knows where it will go, he is only really showing his gentleness and the depth of his caring whild Harry is asleep, thought he does show caring, though a mix of stern and light, when he is speaking to him. Interesting also, How did Nev figure out that Harry's gay? And he knows about Snape?! Has he guessed about Harry & Sev? What does Dumblesore think----does he even guess? I would think not, for I would wonder just what he would think about all this, as well. Also very interestting that Nev has let Harry know that it is not uncommon in the wizarding world togay gay (or at least bi). Now, what will Harry do? Though I do think that he Really Likes Severus. It also seemed that he was warning Harry about the beginning of school...waiting to see how that works out.
    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2004
    love it
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  • From ANON - R.C on March 12, 2004
    i like how the story is goin. your quotations are commas. otherwise it's pretty good update update update!!!
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  • From ANON - WITCHWERE on March 10, 2004
    Oh I love this! I can't wait to see what happens next. I so adored Sev's comments to Harry about being sure of what he was asking for. Don't even get me started on the lemony goodness... suffice to say that I now require a cold shower...LOL. Fantastic job... update soon!
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  • From ANON - uris on March 09, 2004
    I made the comment before I found out that you're German. However, it's pretty easy to get the names and addresses spelt right.
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  • From ANON - uris on March 09, 2004
    Misspelling Privet Drive causes you to lose the respect of your readers. It helps to have all locations and names in canon spelled right. The only mistakes acceptable are the ones that are caused by the differences of the American and British version.
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  • From ANON - cofaym on March 08, 2004
    the latest chapter needs to be betad - mostly for errors in punctuation. Also, you may want to consider adding more "it's" and the like, instead of "it is," which can sound too formal. The plot is still good and I really do like this story. This chapter just didn't seem up to par with the previous ones. Probably burned out from thsts sts I'm sure!
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  • From ANON - silent angel on March 08, 2004
    this was so good i love ss/hp pairings
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  • From ANON - iccle mousie the potions ingredient on March 08, 2004
    ooh pleeeeeeeease can Snape & Harry get together? and someone nice for neville, he's a sweetie!
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  • From ANON - black_unicorn1687 on March 08, 2004
    hope u did good on your exams. great chapter. please please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - amethysangel on March 07, 2004
    Don't feel bad, I've actually gotten caught in the differences between American and British English. I never knew there was such a variation (other than accent).

    As far as cliffhangers are concerned, unless you've pre-planned them, any story will have natural breaks in the action. Not really the author's fault.

    So far I have enjoyed this story, and have no complaints.

    See you around... from New York State!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2004
    Tell you what I think? BRILLIANT! ^_^ MORE! XD Please! Or I'll die and haount you for eternity! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! XD
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