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Reviews for Searching My Soul

By : snapesgirl1981
  • From ANON - Abraxis on March 04, 2004
    This story just gets better and better. I also like the way you write Severus. He's very real - very strong and somewhat amoral by the usual standards but true to his oVeryVery sexy.
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  • From ANON - Secretive on March 02, 2004
    Hi!
    I just wanted to know that i really like your story and where its going. it is great. if you ever want a beta to fix up ur (very few) grammar errors just let me know. update soon- i can't wait to see what will happen.
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  • From ANON - Kethhry on March 01, 2004
    Sweet... dark... sensual...

    I can't wait for more. It's one of the best I've read.
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  • From ANON - Liadan Di on March 01, 2004
    Hi, have you given up on this story? If you have please contact must ust so I don't keepckincking it. I hope you do continue though, I love your style of writing.
    xxxDi
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  • From on February 15, 2004
    Nicely done! And thank you Very much for the peek into Sev's POV!!! It really helps keep my interest, at least, in the story, to see what the POV's are of the different main characters in the fic...seeing if it as a train wreck in the making (& I'm caught watching, while mumbling 'oh no!'), or watching as they dance around each other, determining their strategy and best approach (and I'm urging them on---Go For It! And, my what Fun watching the plotting reach completion) But, pardon the pun, Severus sure 'got off' awfully easy--- 1 blow job for a life debt? How about re-interpreting that, and surprising Harry with a complete set of lessons? I do like the idea of him seducing Harry slowly, though, so that by the time he is taking it up the arse/butt, he's thoroughly ensnared by Sev in all aspects, loving the sensual & sexual experience, but also having learned the Slytherin POV, not just the Gryffindor interpretations of life's lessons. And having grown to sympathise/understand/ally himself with them. I guess I also wanted to know Sev's 'intentions', so I know whether I want to continue reading. And it seems that you have answered that queation: Sev is finding that he is growing to care for Harry, quite a lot. This fic is quite well-written, and intrigueing, but I only want to keep reading if I know that there's a 'happy ending', 'cuz I hate having my heart broken at the end. --- I know I'm sappy, but I Hate the idea of Sev Completly Betraying and Using Harry, without it turning around into him loving Harry also. I'm OK with him playing with Harry at first, as long as he gets caught in his own trap, as well by, or preferably, well before the end---then I get to watch as the goal and strategy changes and the stakes become more intense. I like it when he finds that the little game he thought he was playing has turned into something quite a lot more for him, and he wants to keep it and make it moreso! So, along with that admission, I am enjoying this fic even moreso, as it seems to be turning in that direction. Please do warn me, tho', if you're going to turn it the mean, heartbreaking direction---I'll leave that for others to read. Sorry, I know thaose can be very worthwhile, excellent stories, too--just not my cuppa. And thanks also for your author notes--- They help allay any ocncerns. That wouldn't be necessary, except that so many of the excellent fics in this fandom turn into never-finished WOP's, and that is so frustrating. It is good to knjow that you are commited to finishing the fic, just busy with RL at times. Thanks, great fic! And eagerly awaitiong more!
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  • From ANON - cofaym on February 12, 2004
    yummy goodness in every bite!
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  • From ANON - Sky on February 12, 2004
    Another chapter hot enough to make me grin and swirm in my seat. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - blackblack_unicorn1687 on February 12, 2004
    This is my first time reading this story, and i absolutley love it!! i cant believe i missed it. and i like your idea of it going slow and i agree with you that it will mak thesensual parts juicy! please please update soon!
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  • From on February 11, 2004
    Given the way Severus was moving his hand on the bed, in circles, for so long, it is clear that he was thinking an aweful lot. Wonder what it was?
    Will he put it all down to being under the influence of the potions? And it is clear now that it is caring also, not just hormones on Harry's part. Question here--- It's after 5th year, right? So, Harry's had his 16th b-day? Of age in the UK, now, or is it before? Even so, he must realize that he would be Harry's first. Is that what's slowing Snape down? Goddess, I'd just leave to hear his POV---Are you going to let us?

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  • From on February 10, 2004
    hmm... i like this. Are you going to put this in Snapes point of view any time? Just because i wondered why he's affected with all this, and why he could see Harry getting off the other day at the window... you know what i mean? Oh well, just update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Lena on February 09, 2004
    I LOVE IT! Finally a snape that'll push harry away when he hesitates! UPDATE FAST!
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  • From ANON - cofaym on February 09, 2004
    damn! and I mean that in a good way :)
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on February 09, 2004
    I think that you are doing quite well but what is with all of the cliffies? Update soon so you can get rid of the last cliffie.
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  • From on February 07, 2004
    I dearly love this story and check it even before reading my other email, when I get home from work. I am so eager to see more of what you are developing between these two! I love how Harry is beginning to come to terms with his sexuality and how Severus is beginning to learn to hee him in a new light, not prior mis-placed prejudice and false beliefs. It is going to get even more interesting, now that you have brought Harry's friends to GP. I am eager for more lemon, too,n len lemon 'light'! I'm hoping to see that they will embrace the relationship, not spend too much time angsting over it.. Better to spend time developing just who they are, or can become to/with each other, instead. I'd love to see Sev's POV.
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  • From ANON - WitchbladeHell on February 06, 2004
    Very nice chapter! I'm loving this story a lot! I espeically liked the ending. I'm pretty sure I can guess as to what happenned, but I like how you clued in on how Snape's lack of remarks was not a good sign. Made me laugh. Update soon!!
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