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Reviews for Searching My Soul

By : snapesgirl1981
  • From ANON - Sydney L. D. on February 06, 2004
    Yay, likies much!! Very good, much goodness...love the thing aboutpe'pe's scent. That's a major thing to me, it makes the story a little more real, and all the more enjoyable. *sniff sniff* Yumm, I can imagine 'im now.... *drool* Anyway, good stuff, keep it up, yeah? ((This mun was defenitly a dogsomesome past life. ^.^; ))
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  • From ANON - Glaeken on February 06, 2004
    Snapesgirl

    I'm not a very helpful reviewer, but I really love this story so far. Basically, I was afraid you would
    stop writing it if you didn't get enough positive feedback, so here's my two cents: I'm not sure if
    it's just me, but I feel a surreal quality whenever Harry interacts with anyone else. I love it.
    My two favorite examples of this are when Snape smiles as Harry masterbates in his room to just
    the site of snape standing outside; and then the conversation with Dumbledore, while Snape simply
    stands and stares out the window. It seems to me that Harry is being used/distracted through his
    hormones and attraction to Snape, while things with the Order aren't quite rigI wiI will admit to being
    very paranoid, and if you aren't going in this direction at all, forgive my ramblings).
    Either way, it's a great idea putting snape and harry together in this way, and I really would like to
    see what happens next.
    Please feel free to tell me to stuff it or whatever, but since the address is brand-spanking new, it may
    take awhile to reply...
    glaeken
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  • From ANON - spazlady on February 05, 2004
    WOW. Can I please have some more??? I think I have fallen in love with this story. I must have more please. The plot is great, love what I see happening with Harry and Severus. ahhh, so sweet. I must have more. thank you for writing someg sog so beautifuly intertaning.
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  • From ANON - Hippy flower on February 04, 2004
    I LOVE IT. can you email me when you update?
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  • From ANON - xikum on February 04, 2004
    I am reading through this a second time, and I must ask something that I wondered the first time...Is Snape a vampire? Or is he using Legilimancy to invade Harry's dreams, or is it just because of their prior link? I am still trying to figure out if this is under his control or if it is just 'happeningo boo both of them?
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  • From on February 04, 2004
    My god, that was so good! I love the idea of Snape taking an active role, instead of it being Harry always makthe the approach, and Snape presenting the problems they will have to overcome, thus objecting, wanting to 'save' Harry from that. I really hope that in your fic he has...er...good intentions towards Harry, not just to hurm?--m?---But I'd love to see Severus use his greater experience to unabashadly plot and win Harry as a partner, taking control of the situation Slytherin, dark wizard style. Perhaps over the objections of others (Dumbledore?), but having won Harry, and him of age by the time it is known, there could be no effective way of prohibiting the relationship. I'd love that! Is that what you are going to do here? It always seemed to me that a true Slytherin, having ambition, would want a powerful wizard for a partner, and would also want to woo and win him, not break him, since he'd want him to be able to competantly support his plans or back him in a fight. Plus, a partner with spirit is not only so much more fun in bed, but also makes a more effective, useful lifemate. I think a Slytherin could be loving, while being devious and practical. And taking on a younger wizard, and training him, would also give him the more dominant position, being his mentor, being able to gradually influence, then lead him, albeit with love. Is this what is planned here? Mmm?
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on February 03, 2004
    I like this fic. I can't wait to see what happens now. Does Remus know that Harry is attracted to Snape?
    Is Dumbledore doing all of this on purpose? Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - MissCrystalix on January 31, 2004
    OH WOW! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on January 30, 2004
    i like it very much



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  • From trulymad on January 30, 2004
    I just stumbled across your story today. It's great so far. I really like this pairing; so interesting.
    You had said that you are German--I never would have guessed! Your writing is better than many people who's only language is English! Keep up the good work; I'm looking forward to more ;)
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  • From ANON - xikum on January 30, 2004
    I am loving ths story! Sev/Harry and Lucius/Harry are my favorite ships, I have read hundreds, and believe me, this is a very well written fic!! I like the mature way you hare having Harry deal with his new-found emotions, and how you are keeping Severus his usual self, but letting him be more of a person, away from his role of 'Death Eater Snape' that he has to portray at Hogwarts! This is shaping up very nicely! Please, do continue!!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on January 29, 2004
    PLEASE CONINTUE!!!!!!!!!! I AM FINDING THIS STORY VERY INTERESTINYes,Yes, I do think you have kept the characters in their original personalities. I must express that this is a truly magnificent start on a intriging story.


    Merrideth
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on January 28, 2004
    I was a little reluctant to start reading this because I don't often like HP/SS, but I think you're doing a good job of keeping them in character. If you need someone to beta, you can send stuff to me, but you'll have to give me at leastays ays to get edits back to you. Email me if you want help, ok?
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  • From lilyadar on January 28, 2004
    Hun, just read the first chapter. That was the most erotic sequence in a fan fic I have ever read. Though I am not huge on this pairing, I am just amazed at how well you scripted it. Good lord.... eeeeerrrrooootiicccc... now a Madonna song is coming to head. LOL!

    hugs, Lily.
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  • From ANON - Sepia on January 28, 2004
    This is great so far, I'm interested to see where this will go. Very intriguing.
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