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Reviews for The Rules of Engagement

By : GlindaTrisstt
  • From ANON - Maria on September 23, 2004
    Hi! I started yesterday reading your story and could not stop until I had read the "last" chapter -which was around 4 o'clock this morning. But you actually did warn us, so I can hardly blame you for the bags under my eyes now, can I? Wanted to tell you, that you are really doing a very fine job here, with so much detailles that have not been written quite like that. (A hard thing to do with all this stories and writers.) So please update soon!
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  • From PinkTribeChick on September 16, 2004
    Wonderful chapter! I feel so, so bad for Tonks! Though I will admit - I could see her and Ron hooking up, after he got all defensive of her!
    Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
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  • From ANON - Mickey on September 16, 2004
    Hello! I read the entirety of The Rules of Engagement thus far last night, and reread the last few chapters this morning. Let me start by saying that I'm utterly taken with the story and cannot wait to read the rest. If you have some kind of email update list, please add me.

    A few constructive criticisms, coming from someone who's an uber-grammar geek and reads things with an editors' eye: there are a few common mistakes you have, which wouldn't be caught by a spell checker (which, it appears, you either use, or don't need): "could of been" should be "could have been"; "don't overdue it" should be "don't overdo it", watch out for using "you're" instead of "your" (ask yourself, "Does it mean 'you are', or is it the possessive 'your'?"), and don't use apostrophes in plurals.

    That said, the fact that you have those mistakes is largely overlookable because you don't display the concomitant tendency to mangle the mother tongue that usually goes hand-in-hand with those sorts of errors. Indeed, of all the (small handful of) authors I've read on this and other fanfic archives, you have by far and away the best command of the language and how to use it. Your writing is blessedly free of the patterns shown by those who do most of their reading online; when I say it looks remarkably book-like, I mean that as a high compliment.

    Your original characters are delightful to read and nicely three-dimensional. Your use of JKR's characters is believable, though you occasionally put words in Snape's mouth that don't quite sound believable to me. Then again, we've never seen Snape in love in JKR's work, so one is necessary to suspend one's disbelief a bit.

    Keep up the good work, and keep those chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - eve/rouke on September 14, 2004

    I have just read all 27 chapters in one night, its a wonderful sttory, PLEASE! update soon
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  • From ANON - midnight tiger on September 12, 2004
    wonderfully done chapter! i really loved the scene where he was about to say i love you but didnt...really emotional. i also really liked the bit between annya and tonks...wow.

    Thank you SO much for posting. i've been dying for more! thanks!
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  • From ANON - bxn110 on September 10, 2004
    Glinda rocks!!!

    I love your work!! Excellent! :-)
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  • From ANON - Tracy on September 10, 2004
    I love this story!!! Are you going to have Annya and Remus fall in love? That would be awesome! Please continue soon!!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on September 09, 2004
    I love it, as always!!!! hehe, I wonder if it's true that a wizard's seed is more than a Muggles... hehehe...
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  • From ANON - crissy on September 08, 2004
    this fic is so awesome, i love reading the updates. your so right on with your characterizations. maybe they're not exact. but they are exactly what i like them to be. severus is good and noble and antisocial, just a little tarnished. hermione is in control, strong, not a radical feminist, but a comfortable modern women, with a bit of teenage hormones thrown in to keep things interesting. love this fic. i can hardly wait for the wedding an for lucius to make his move. so great!
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on September 07, 2004
    Definitely an addictive story you have here. I just spent all day reading it. I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
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  • From ANON - robin on August 29, 2004
    Please write more I miss this fic
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  • From ANON - Horserider on August 25, 2004
    Oh, I'm so happy that Annya arrived! You were really beginning to scare me there, I was afraid we were going to lose poor Remus! And that was a very tasty lemon too, thank you! I don't know who was getting more frustrated for the lack of it, Snape, Hermione, or me! :D Can't wait for more of this one!
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  • From ANON - Horserider on August 25, 2004
    Very much enjoying their relationship with Lupin...I've always felt a bit bad that there seems to be such a distance between Snape and Lupin, because Remus seems to be a genuinely nice guy and he's one of my other fave characters. Very nicely done! ~HR
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  • From ANON - Horserider on August 25, 2004
    Sorry, I only now found the review box. I'm new to this site.

    I am very much loving how you have constructed this story, and thrilled to have *two* men up against Snape for Hermione's hand! Course I'm hoping Snape wins in the end, and I love watching the romance blooming between them. Very nice, and I liked the artwork you did for it too! ~HR
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  • From ANON - munch110 on August 24, 2004
    ahhh I love this story i have been reading it none stop since i found it a while ago i didnt see the last time you updated but i hope you continue writting this i love it so much! I cant wait till Hermione and Severus have thchilchild, I haven ten thinking for a long time what a/he might look like and what their name would be im going to draw it out when i get in my drawing mood lol. So anyway nice story and keep it up, o and i tried that address u had for the potterica group in yahoo i cant find it, it says its not there so email me back about it if u can thanx!
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