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Reviews for The Rules of Engagement

By : GlindaTrisstt

From ANON - FlasFlashB on March 25, 2004
Oooh, a jealous Snape! RRRRRRRRowwwwwwl... Loved your frisky Lupin, glad he is feeling better. Just knew the first bit HAD to be a dream, but thanks for the lemony teaser. I believe the way you've written Severus is right-on, loved the way Hermione got a handle on him. Cuckold... ROFL! Great chapter hon, loojing forward to the weekend.
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From ANON - KateGuess on March 25, 2004
Once again, you are BLOODY BRILLIANT! This is the best story in the history of ss/hg history!
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From buttercup on March 25, 2004
Hey Glinda! I just read the whole thing in one shot and it's spectacular! I love the way you set up the story and worked with the characters. Loved Snape's little dream. That's why you were my original smut writing mentor; you're the best.

Don't be writing that I made you too depressed to write again. With the following you've got on this story, I'll have your fans coming after me! Of course I just spent all of my writing time reading your story, so my next chapter is going to be a day late. ;-)

This is where I go all fangirly on you: More!!!!!!!!

Great story!

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From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 25, 2004
Chapter 16... Another FANTASTIC chapter!!! I do hope that Hermione will make some of Severus' dreams come true soon;-)

I LOVE the conversation between Remus & Severus!!! For Severus being such a hard ass, Remus sure can get to him pretty easily!!!

I still feel badly for Rose!!! I do wish that Hermione could tell him that he is in danger!!! This situation got to point something out to Hermione, Severus is afraid he will lose her!!! I do think she showed him he had nothing tor inr in a very good way!!! I am looking forward to seeing how the weekend goes!!!

Til chapt7, D7, Deb >^..^
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From Kyizi on March 25, 2004
Oh, I adore this fic! I really love Severus' possessiveness, your characterisation of him seems really well thought out. Hermione, as well, is very much in character, and I love the gentle teasing she's becoming accustomed to with him. I really can't wait to read more of this fic. :)
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From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 25, 2004
Oh, to clarify the old-fashioned statement. I am only 24 - apparently just very old fashioned! My husband and I got married 5 months after we met, and we've been together 4 years now. Happy times!
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From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 25, 2004
Love this story! It just keeps getting better and better. Do most women really have sex on the 3rd date? I must be more old-fashioned than I thought! My husband and I dated 3-4 days a week for 5 weeks before I even considered having sex with him. After that, we had sex at least twice a day for a solid 3 months. :) I know, too much information! Great story. UPDATE SOON!!!
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From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 25, 2004
*Applause*! I particularly liked your giving Severus two delightful instances of
the old-style vernacular. Very amusing. Courtesan is such a beautiful word.
And: Brava! I haven't seen the word Cuckold used in the right context since
I last sang Le Nozze Di Figaro in English. What a charming and rich wordy
world we once used to live in. Thanks for keeping the faith, and for the points
(sniggers knowingly) Blessings! Kait x
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From ANON - ancientgirl on March 25, 2004
Well Rose needs to get over it and move on. She chose someone else for Christ sake. And Hermione needs to tell him to leave her alone and quite thinking he's protecting her from Severus, since she so obviously wants to be with him.

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From ANON - moony_reader on March 23, 2004
YES! YES! YES! I'm so happy that you are includi Nev Neville/Draco pairing in this story. I have always thought that that would be one of the sexiest pairings possible. I really hope that you continue to write this story. It's so good. And I like that Hermione isn't this innocent little virgin. She's strong and smart and is aware of her sexual needs. YAY!!
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From ANON - midnight tiger on March 22, 2004
oh wow oh wow! this is wonderful! i honestly didnt expect Nev to be the one draco was with, but mostly because im a Harry/Draco fan. but this is just so...perfect. it fits so well in this story. every time Hermione and Severus kiss my chest gets tight and i just LOVE this story! thanks for posting and PLEASE keep writing! :)

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From Kyizi on March 21, 2004
Neville?! Huh? Okay, will admit, my first reaction was, "No! Draco's shagging Harry!". Neville. Okay, that's different. *shrug* will get used to it, I guess! LoL!

Okay, now, onto the S/Hrm review bit...am absolutely loving it! I adore Severus' jealousy, it's so funny that Hermione doesn't quite get it. I think this is a great story, and I'm really glad you didn't have her suddenly forget about Rose. Made everything so much more real.

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From ANON - snapes daughter on March 20, 2004
I have to admit i liked chapter 15. I thought it very intersting when you had rose show up at the lecture, and then afterwards in the resturant. What was even better about the chapter was Neville is Dracos lover and all of this time i thought it was Harry. well keep up the great work
snapes daughter
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From ANON - Fury on March 19, 2004
More! more! we want more!

K, so I figured out who the mystery beau for our Draco was, but I must say everything leading up to it was fun... I am absolutely despondent that there aren't any more chapters up, please post more soon !

Hmm, loving the electric sparks between our favorite couple, it's leading to the right place without having them leap into the sack right away and it thouroughly satisfies the reader's need for steamy scenes!

Hope there's more soon,
Fury
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From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 19, 2004
Mornin' (for it is 3am here)

Glinda, I have been meaning to sit down and read this for a long time, but because
I've been so busy writing Puzzles I haven't had time. I'm very impressed with all
your twists and turns, and am still baffled as to what Ginny might be up to, UNLESS
it's because at 17, and she a pureblood witch, she is also subject to the Marriage
Law. I'd plump for this, if pushed, so if I'm right then if you wouldn't mind, the
points should go to Ravenclaw, because I got kicked out of Slytherin for being too
much of a smart-arse.

Right, where was I? Oh yes - I'm really enjoying The Rules Of Engagement, you do
write very descriptively, I could almosar Par Pansy shouting at Violet (in a South
London accent). Now, I'm not going to Brit-pick because although we don't use words
like "sidewalk" (that'd be 'pavement') in the UK, it's perfectly all right by me to read
the foreign-sounding words and work it out for myself. We do get American TV "shows"
in the UK, after all. My paternal grandpa always said, 'Never let the truth get in the way
of a good story.'

Besides, it's YOUR ruddy fiction, all right?

And the story is great reading! I'm very intrigued as to how long it will take before
Hermione finally convinces Severus she's not going to vanish in a puff of smoke if
he so much as touches her! A faint-hearted Severus...how refreshing! Loved the
House Elf family, especially the matriarchal Wubby who seems to be taking on Yoda-
like proportions in my poor addled brain! My particularly favourite scene is the touching
moment when Hermione ceases to become a girl trying on frocks and becomes a beautiful
woman, in Severus' eyes. Very moving indeed, and I loved how you split that scene so
that we could enjoy it from both points of view - Severus' and Hermione's.

Get to the point, Kait. Oh yes. Bloody marvellous tale you're weaving, and it's so refreshing
to read a GOOD Marriage Law story. There aren't many of them ab

Blessings, clear and bright, Kait (LovesThePotionBoy)

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