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Reviews for The Rules of Engagement

By : GlindaTrisstt
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 26, 2004
    Chapter 10... What a GREAT chapter, so much hningning!!! I LOVE the situation with Severus & Remus!!! The mother hen bit was PERFECT!!! I hope that Severus will be able to help him!!! I also like the bit at the table & the line from Ron, TOO FUNNY!!! I think you put in a nice amount of humor to balance out this chapter perfectly!!!

    Poor Rose, poor Draco!!! I feel so bad for Draco beput put in this position by his (_!_) of a father!!! I am glad that Hermione got him to understand that it was an accident & that she wanted him in her life!!!

    After what has happened I hope that Hermione's choice will be a bit easier to make!!! If she can't tell that Severus is her best choice now she isn't using that brain in her head!!! Lucius is Lucius & if he wants something he won't stop trying to get it any time soon!!!

    Can't wait for more!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<
    P.S., I think this is the 1st time that I have ever read about someone actually eating one of Albus' lemon drops;-)
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on February 25, 2004
    wow wonderful wonderful chappy........................ still wondering who she is going to pick.............................. and as all ways keep up with the excellent work
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  • From ANON - Carmen on February 25, 2004
    nice long ch. im dying to know wuts wrong w/lupin and who hermione is going to choose. im begging u to please update soon!
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  • From ANON - annon on February 25, 2004
    This story is going great and I love your writing style. Can't wait for Herm to make her choice (Sev of course) and the after effects :)
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  • From slygriff21 on February 25, 2004
    Who will she choose?! (As if I didn't already know) I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From arcessita on February 25, 2004
    Ooh, great twist! It makes perfect sense that Draco would be forced to hurt Rose, but I *really* didn't see it coming. I love the way you've portrayed Draco here. I was a little ambivalent about Rose getting hurt ar first (I like Hermione having another decent option, so she can choose Snape for interesting character reasons rather than plot ones.), but you changed my mind t awt away when you used it to develop Draco's character. Good work :)

    One detail you may want to fix--Remus *has* met another werewolf. In OotP, when Arthur is recovering at St Mungo's, the man in the bed next to him has just been bitten by a werewolf, and when Remus visits with Harry and the Weasleys, Harry notices him go to the other bed and "speak softly" to the new werewolf. It doesn't mean he knows anything at all about werewolf diseases, though, so your plot's still fine; it's just that one line that needs a change.

    Thanks for a great read!
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  • From ANON - Texas Peach on February 25, 2004
    This is a great story. I would have never thought to make Draco so adorable and yet not a threat. He is very yummy! I love snape above all and can't wait to see how he & hermione learn to be together. I can't wait.


    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on February 25, 2004
    I love this story! Please hurry with the next chapter!!

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - FriendlyQuark on February 25, 2004
    Sorry that I have been remiss in my reviews, but wow! thank you so much for all the wonderful chapters. Wubby is a peach, loved her to pieces and gosh, poor Draco, that boy is really between a rock and a hard place. Great writing, wonderful story, amazing characterizations. - Go baby go!
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on February 25, 2004
    I love this story. Eagerly waiting for more tes.tes.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 25, 2004
    Well, that was a surprise, poor Draco. I guess Hermione is reconsidering choosing Rose especially after this. Will Sev ever be at peace? Whats going ith ith Lupin? I know if you answered that would defeat the purpose of the story so please post soon.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - Sherrafina on February 25, 2004
    Not feeling well today, so I will keep it brief......I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!! Really great plot building chappie!! LOVED IT!
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  • From slygriff21 on February 24, 2004
    Awsome chr! Ir! I hope Severus and Hemione get together. I loved how you showed us a different side to him. Yours is the most original Marriage Law fic I have read so far! Keep up he awsome writing. Update again soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Kate McGuire on February 24, 2004
    This is my favorite Marriage Challenge Fic. I like your writting of Severus. I absolutely loved his confrontation with Lucius Malfoy. I feel sorry for Rose cause he is a great guy. I liked Hermioine's remark about it being a good thing that Severus didn't come dressed like that to class. I think Wubby is brilliant. I think you have come up with the most creative alternate explaination for the childhood scene that absolved his father of being an abusive parent but also explaining why he was taken out of Severus's life early.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on February 23, 2004
    Hee! I love Wubby! I really do. You created her character well. More soon please.
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