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Reviews for Where Your Loyalties Lie

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  • From ANON - Lily Malfoy on August 03, 2003
    I rather enjoy this piece of work. I am eager to see the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Severian Tenebrae on July 29, 2003
    TaterChipGirl,
    Magnificent job!! I loved it! You have to write more!
    Keep up the good work!!
    Sincerely,
    Severian Tenebrae
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  • From ANON - Severo Snape on July 15, 2003
    Great Story!!! I could not stop reading it. I love the idea of Severus having to protect her, it is simply marvelous!!!!!! I really like the part when Severus
    "lowers his head into his hands and lets the tears flow freely, and thinks: "She loves me!"." But I think my favourite part was when he lowered Hermione from
    the stone wall and thinks: "My Geminus. My love. I'm sorry, so sorry for all this. But it has to be done. I can't let him take you. I won't."
    I positively love that, it is really magnificent, cool,.... Oh I don't know the word!! But you probably get my drift. I would like to know one thing though...well
    actually two. Anyway, One: What is a Geminus?? And Two: Who was the woman in the room with Dumbledore when Snape left? Just wanted to ask those
    two questions. To put it simply what I thought about this Fan Fiction,story, I LOVED IT!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Sincerely,
    Severo Snape



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  • From ANON - Eternal Queen on July 06, 2003
    beautiful story. there is so much potential for greatness. please continue quickly. and, if possible, let me know when the next chapter is up.
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  • From ANON - Zee on June 16, 2003
    Am loving this

    Please update - NOW!



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  • From ANON - Potions Mistress on June 12, 2003
    I discovered this story tonight, and i love it!! But you haven't updated recently!! Could you soon?!?!? For me? Please?!?! I love this!!
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on May 29, 2003
    Update! Update! Update!!!! before i die of withdrawl!! please! you are so amazingly talented!!! One of the best HG/SS fics i've read!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bree on May 28, 2003
    The story is brilliant! I really hope that you plan on posting more of the story soon. I cannot wait to read what happends!!
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 28, 2003
    GASP! He took the potion?! That was _not_ what he was suppose to do! Grr. I hope it doesn't work. Can't wait for the next update!

    Thanks
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Tater Chip Girl on May 20, 2003
    Hermione used the Lumos Cardia to shield Snape from Voldemort's attack, in the process diverting it to herself. The spell cannot remove the Dark Mark - it merely used the Mark as a link through which to strike at Voldemort, since he himself used it to affect Snape.
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on May 20, 2003
    Hi:

    I have been reading your fic. i find it lovely. Really well written, and with a perfect sense of timing, without rushin the charachters. Wich are, by the way, well build.

    Something I dont catch, Teh lumos cardia, meant that she take off the dark mark for him, or just heal him for the current pain?

    Regards, from Chile.
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on May 15, 2003
    I'm so glad that you've updated again, this is a wonderful story, great plot and beautifully written. I love your Snape, he is so believable. Thanks for the update, hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - Kreija on May 15, 2003
    Keep 'm comming!
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  • From ANON - Alanfan on May 15, 2003
    At last patience is rewarded, i am so pleased you are carring on with this story,i am interested to see how you develope it.
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  • From ANON - AlphaRyoko on May 14, 2003
    Oh my!

    I feel like Crabbe and Goyle at an all-you-can-eat buffet ...

    No, wait, like the Weasley twins trapped in the girls' dorm during a pillow fight ...

    Ah! This story is great! I can't get enough!!!

    Wonderful!
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