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Reviews for Lord of Shadows Arc, Book One: Prince of Darkness

By : soul2singer
  • From ANON - keri on September 07, 2004
    Wow! I just found this. Great story. Love the way you are growing the characters into a team rather than just one character taking over the story. Can't wait for more. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on September 06, 2004
    Hello there! I have now read up to chapter 13 and I just had to write and tell you what a wonderful job you are doing with this story. The chapter into Harry's mind was so visually creative and unique that it will stay in my memory for a long time including when I start reading Ms. Rowling's next book. I think you captured the mental instablilty that Harry is facing in Canon and incorporated into your story. I also liked the inclusion on the Angels and the research that you have done to make them as believable as they are. I look forward to your next chapters and best of luck on your future stories.
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  • From ANON - Drew on September 05, 2004
    Very good chapter. I kind of want to see if Draco parents turn there back on the dark lord.
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  • From ANON - frogslayr on September 05, 2004
    I was going to wait and finish all of the chapters you have up to review-
    but i couldnt' help myself-
    I so so so love this story- and your Harry is just what I've been looking for- not "dead inside" and hateful,
    but still our good, brave, hero, dealing with his darkness and guilt..
    and I love seeing him in love-
    you do it so well- the boys make me all warm and tingly, and it's not overdone.
    but best of all are the book excerpts-
    the voice is just amazing there-
    and that retrospective commentary hits you just right-
    the detail of the ritual, the politics in the school, the careful work on the secondary cast (and it works so well
    to focus on them equally, instead of only on the boys)
    must rush off to read more; this is wonderful wonderful-
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  • From ANON - PeachDancer82 on July 23, 2004
    Well, let me first say...WOW!!!! This is wonderful! Just so entrancing. I couldn't stop reading it. I hope you continue ,I can't wait to see what you have in store! ciao

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  • From ANON - theoddguy on July 21, 2004
    WoW!!Im loving this fic.I have read it twice now,and it gets better for me each time.;) I cant wait to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on July 21, 2004
    Well, I've never written a review for a story before, but something about this one just ired red me to get off my lazy ass and put into words how good I thought it was. I did notice, however, that it hasn't been updated for awhile. I hope it's not dead...
    If it is, I need to know where to send a memorial bouquet.
    That being said, the story is great. :)
    (And if you ever need an extra hand at proofreading, I'm an extremely bored English major. *shameless self-promotion in attempt to read more of the story*)
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  • From ANON - Becky on July 10, 2004
    First i would like to say sorry for reveiwing after every chapter but once i started reading i just could sto stop till i got to this point. There with that out of the way i can say that i have found your story intriuging, i have found myself confused more than once but that has not diminished my enjoyment one bit. I hope that the rest of your work will live up to this promising start and i eargely await your next chapter. Much love and encouragement Becky XXXXX
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  • From ANON - Ash on May 21, 2004
    Holy mother of God. This is an incredible fic that I can't WAIT for you to update. There are no words to say how much I have enjoyed reading this... and it's taken me a better part of the day. Kudos on a fabulous storyline, incredible "voices" for each character, and a consideration for what is "in character". I love it.
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  • From ANON - liljademoon on May 10, 2004
    Questions! Is that the end of book one or is there more coming? If it is the end, when's Two coming out?
    I absolutely loved the story, and the angels were hilarious. The interactions between the characters were realist. The whole Draco spying on Harry in the beginning was great, especially with Draco admitting that he knew absolutely nothing about Harry despite trying to make his life a living hell. I loved the fact that Harry was unato dto deal with pure joy and the ways Draco and Snape help him. Great story. Now write more!!!!!!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Triospleasure on May 06, 2004
    Good story Hell of a plotline.I got the gag. For those who didn't it from a movie. Oh well just become a Alan Rickman fan and you got it baby. I saw what you did with Pansy and it makes sence on one hand ,but on the other Ginny fought for them. In almost every story people write her like she owes Harry. If it wasn't for him she would have been dead. True but remember when she was a BIG Harry fan she was only 10 and 11 years old. Ginny matured I'm not a big fan of hers but even in a sence of fair play to exclude her from the coven and add a stranger after all of their history... Well I wouldn't think Harry or Draco were real friends. They couldn't be counted on,but they would expect to be able to count on Ginny. But hay its your story kiddo

    Do your thing.
    Trio
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  • From ANON - Maria on May 03, 2004
    Just wanted to say that your story is turning out to be a lot better and more involved then I originally thought. A lot of writers create grandoise names for their stories when in actuality the writing is mediocure at best. I just finished chapter nine, and while doing so I happened to be listening to "The Gravity of Love" by Enya, and I must say that the combination got me a little teary-eyed. If you haven't heard the song I recommend doing so I think it complements your story.
    P.S sorry if some of these words are misspelled. I'm horrible at spelling but eh, there are worse things...
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  • From ANON - amak206 on May 03, 2004
    First off I LOVE your story. I can't wait for an update.
    Next, please don't fall into what I call the "God Trap"
    What I mean by that is that some authors will write a good story, find there charecters in a situation where they get amazing abilities and with a wave of there hand can defeat any enemy. No drama, no doubt equals a boring story. It's much more fun to read about a real charecter in trouble than a happy charecter who is envincible. Out side of that warning great story hope to see it through completion. The twins are fun, i've all had a thing for the twins!! All in all a great story that may even end up riveling the oringinal itself. Oh well, guess we will just have to wait and see ^_^
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  • From ANON - Irony on May 02, 2004
    so i get home from work, (yes, i hno lno life, i work on saturday nights,) and after watching the news, i decide that my time shall be well-spent reading slash. i get onto adultfan and, hooray, Lord of Shadows, blah, Book One...sonanonandsoforth is updated. "YAY," i think. i read the new chapter, and might i interrupt my small story here to say excellent job as usual. you're chapters are long, but long in a satisfying way rather than a... long... way. after reading your stupendous new chapter, i decided to go see, out of curiosity, how many reviews you have. i think to myself, "well, i'm sure she has hundreds for this story," but i see the little number and exclaim (in my head, i'm not THAT crazy,) (and pardon my language) "fifty-fucking-four?!" mind you, it was 54 at the time i looked. which is why, you see, i decided to tell you what a fabulous job you're doing.

    hoping i was able to entertain you as much as you've entertained me,
    irony
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  • From ANON - Yami-hikari on May 01, 2004
    puuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrr... I love how you didn't end this story with the sex... it's just too good to waste. Can I ask one thing though? Please no Mpreg. I just think it's silly.
    I really like the bits at the beginning and end, they really make you think. Great story, and i can't wait for the next chapter!
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