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Reviews for Lord of Shadows Arc, Book One: Prince of Darkness

By : soul2singer
  • From ANON - Miss Lesley on January 28, 2004
    Excellent, This Fic is great:) You actually made Draco a true Slytherin. No half baked plan. Covering his broom. Making a suit, the quick note. That is what a slytherin would do. Not the stupid plans JK Rowlings have them do that are sure to get foiled by the ever rash and reckly griffdorks... Draco thought ahead. Draco recognizing his limits and the plans others might be engaged in.

    Love Harry throwing the knief. the excerpts from the books are great forshadowing. The thought that everything is not black and white? maybe there is hope for Lucius afterall he seems to love his son. And power so Draco being with Harry should reel him in. Will Harry finally break away from dumbledork? hmm. please update soon
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  • From ANON - jeny on January 28, 2004
    This is brillant, more please.
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  • From ANON - Ox king on January 28, 2004
    How very nice. This is a very well writen and mature story so far. You have captured the the Harry Potter I know from fifth book. A lot of stories I read a lot of stories that go over the deep end on the dark, anguished soul that Harry is. This first chapter has the perfect harmony of angst and hope beyond hope. I hope that this doen't change. I"m getting very tired of angst party that people are so fond of writing. On another note like the garden snake touch. It shows that as aas accepted Parseltongue as a part of him self.
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  • From ANON - Kevin on January 27, 2004
    Christine,

    The beginning of your epic tale shows promise. You have selected an interesting and oril wal way to portray the famous couple's beginning. I look forward to reading more, especially the more juicy parts of the pairings and the love affirs associated with them. Do keep writing!

    Thank You,
    Kevin
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  • From ANON - sak on January 27, 2004
    This is an intriguing start to what you set up to be a long storyline. You start with a unique take on the beginning of a new relationship and I cannot wait to see how it develops and affects as much as this first chapter implies. I like the excerpts from the autobiographies interspersed in the text!
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  • From ANON - Fauxwen on January 27, 2004
    You have an interesting opening here; I am curious to read more, though I should point out there are a few spelling errors (i.e., should be "Parselto," ," not "Parcel Tongue").
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  • From ANON - layla on January 27, 2004
    I'm not much on reviews so make it short. I like what you've got so far I'm waiting pataintly for the next ch keep it going I know you will. to the point LOVE IT SO FAR
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