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Reviews for Lord of Shadows Arc, Book One: Prince of Darkness

By : soul2singer
  • From erospandora on March 25, 2008
    I have been reading your story for a while now (about to read chapter 16) and i thought before i got too far along i should comment on your story.
    First off let me say that I like that you thought of another way for Voldie to live forever.... no matter how icky it is. I am unsure of the acceptance of Harry however draco i can see of course cause well it's logical is it not ^^ but that aside I came to be fine with it because you are having an 'evil' Harry ... of sorts I understand that you are making him the price of darkness (not evil) and that he played with his knife and such things in the beginning chapters however that.... quirk seems to have vanished and aside from the looming darkness and the chill that follows harry when he is being stoic or is upset I was wondering if you were going to add anything further to it that continues to repeat. Yes i know you have done and completed a lot of this story (if not all of it yet) and that i'm just talking to maybe future fics (which i hope will come) but I think you should keep a flat line with them, though i'm also thinking at this time that maybe draco affects him in some way (mood wise just a duh) that has helped his darker side be more happy... 'Good in the darkness' and all that
    Um I like that you are making it like they are telling a story or someone is reading their lives / journals (w/e) that is a new thing that i very much enjoy and you write them well ^^ (luv-muffin LOL awesome)
    The Coven(s) and the grand coven are a very interesting thing and i would like to thank you for the great way you've done them -huggles you a lot-
    ALSO I love the fact you've made the purebloods pagan it is the first time i've actually read a story where this has happened and it makes a good deal of since to me and now that you've also shown the stones also made stonehenge i'm wondering if you might do something with that and the coven as it is rumored to be a druidic place of worship and such and I place it in one of my stories -blushes-
    I cannot wait to see what happens next.... though i do wonder if you will ever explain how Black knew harry and Draco would come to be together since he wrote his will before he died.

    anywho i think i'm going to go back to reading now ^^
    ~eros


    OH WAIT NO
    I LOVE YOUR DISCLAIMER ITS THE BEST ONE I'VE SEEN IN FOREVER
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  • From xhedwigx on July 16, 2007
    I think it's awesome and very well done
    omigod I sound liuke a teacher..lol
    Can't wait for the next part/book
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  • From ANON - Vibora on August 30, 2006
    aaaaahhh! i read the WHOLE story in two days while here at school. hope the next book comes out soon. this really good! ^_^
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  • From ANON - nigh on August 29, 2006
    it is a very lovely story.
    i would realy like to see this one finished
    i have seen alot of stories that i like just abandend
    it makes me sad to see good stories forgotten


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  • From ANON - Draeconin on July 26, 2006
    Something strange, here. Draco is the one who is capable of bearing children, but Harry is more of a bottom than Draco is? Possible, but not my favourite arrangement. I prefer a more dominant Harry.
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  • From ANON - Draeconin on July 26, 2006
    You've done some rather... odd blendings of beliefs, here. Sorry for my previous accusation. The meetings with the dead were rather touching.
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  • From ANON - Draeconin on July 26, 2006
    I was very sorry to see you bring Abrahamic beliefs into the story. To my mind, most of the wizarding world doesn't care one way or the other about religion, and most of the rest are pagan. Since Christianity persecuted 'witches' for hundreds of years, it doesn't make sense that they'd support those religions. However, I loved... er... the parrot. (Yes, I'm a coward. lol Okay, I'll say it; I loved Fellatio! *grin* )
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  • From ANON - acr on May 20, 2005
    Wow. Just...wow. Has to be one of THE best fanfictions I've read. I love your use of mythology and ritual. You have woven a beautiful, complex plot that draws me in. I am amazed. I hope you take your talents to professional, original fiction.
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  • From ANON - wyccegurl on May 18, 2005
    This has been a very interesting story so far. I have to admit that I didn't always catch the significance of someof what I assume are Christian references, I myself am Wiccan, but the story flowed nevertheless. I hope that the second part of the Arc has been started, I'm anxious to see what happens next. So please keep writng this. I'm off to check your profile to see if the next part has been written.

    Oh by the way, your date of 1989 is wrong, James Potter died, Oct 31, 1981. So unless he's writing from the grave, it's a bit off. Harry was born July 31, 1980 and graduated in 1998. Okay I'll stop being a Hermione now.
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  • From ANON - Ravenfrog on May 12, 2005
    This was amazing, I was utterly thrilled by each and every chapter of it. I hope that the second arc is available soon.
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  • From ANON - Darkmoona on April 09, 2005
    Well, if just finished the last chapter. It was good and interesting, eventhough I'm a bit sad it finished so early, I was hoping to see a bit more of Voldemort at the end, but I suppose we 'll see it next book, won't we? I really hope you start the new book soon becuse I'll be waiting the update!!!
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  • From ANON - Darkmoona on April 08, 2005
    I've just finished reading chapter 9, the one about the bonding ritual. Very beautiful, specially the moment of Sirius and Remus goodbye. So moving... I like the rithim of the story, you go neither to fast or to slow, just perfect, I thought this ritual would be much later in the story...I'm glad. Ok, I'm going back to reading now...
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  • From ANON - Darkmoona on April 08, 2005
    I'm reading our story and I haven't finished yet, so I'll tell you more later, but now I just had to gave you my congratulations for such a good chapter. I love your descripcion of Harry's mind, it was an incredibly good job!!!!! Very well done!!!! Really, original and well told. I'm very impressed!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst on March 04, 2005
    I have just founf the story am not used to reveiwing on adult ficsion. not a fan fiction.net person. i was wounder how I could hear about the second. book i like the story. the inclusion of the good there are a few mistaks or oddities. I tought james letter was at godric hollow. Pagans are not monothesets they have a set god god's and goddes.
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  • From ANON - Shina on March 04, 2005
    I just finished this story and WOW is all i really have to say. as i said in my other review(spelling and grammar only "complaint") the story is beautifully written and engaging. James' letter was Awesome and of course the mixing of pagan magic/ natural magic and Wizarding magic has been really awesome... also your 'hints' at Harry being the shadow lord are very well done and easy to spot for an outsider but well concealed for the characters within the tale. I can't wait for the sequel.
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