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Reviews for The Fortress Within

By : idarakowsky
  • From mrsfluffy2188 on July 25, 2010
    love love LOVE this story. you pulled it off very well. the beginning was kinda slow and uninteresting but i'm glad i kept reading!! anyway i watched this movie called "powder blue" one of the main characters is a stripper. one of her strip scenes automatically made me think of "dark" hermione! the coincidence was just too much to not share. here is the youtube link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s4hLKWfcVSA. also the song she dances to... called werewolf by cat power.. look up the lyrics, wayyy too many similarities @.@
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  • From ExperimentalMe on December 06, 2009
    Great story, even after all these years. It was a bit hard to read with the paragraphs not breaking properly and the repeated first sentences. Still, it was compelling enough to deal with its shortcomings. I liked your dark Hermione. I liked that Severus stayed true to his character up to the very end. Bravo.
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  • From SnapenGrangerLuver2005 on June 17, 2008
    I loved this story!
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  • From LustBlood on April 27, 2007
    That was truly one of the best pieces of fiction I've read in a long time. Your story was amazing. You created a very strong, all-too-human and extremely courageous Hermoine, and it was a treat seeing her in this light. I cried so often, I lost count. It was a total roller-coaster. I wish you would come back and write more stories. I love your writing. Absolutely fantastic. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 19, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Athena on January 26, 2006
    WOW!!! This was a great story!!! I loved the ending!! Please keep on writting, you have a great talent!!! I don't think I enjoyed a dark story so much. I loved the way you balanced the darkness with happier moments in this story! I'm looking forward to your next story!
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  • From ANON - sbrande on November 28, 2005
    Just finished your story and let me tell you I was enchanted by it from the beginning to the end. If you don't mind I am copying and pasting it into a word document and making my own changes. Not to the story itself just fixing it up.
    Let me know if you want a copy.
    Cheers,
    Sonia
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  • From sbrande on November 27, 2005
    Ch. 6 - I am loving this story far, so original in it ideas.
    The only problem I have is with the mistakes and the format you have decided to put it in, it can be rather distracting.
    So I was wondering if you wanted to email me (kabrax@dodo.com.au) and I could fix it up for you? You know kind of like a beta, but not.
    If you are interested, please email me and let me know either way. I bet you can get heaps more reviews.
    Anyway I'm on to read more, I will leave another review when I am done.
    Cheers, Sonia
    p.s. WHY did you have to kill Remus off? WHYYYYYYYY??? LOL I really like him, Sirius and Severus!!!
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  • From ANON - sevfank on October 03, 2005
    great story!!! thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on August 18, 2005
    This story was bloody brilliant! No lie. I love stories like this. Ugh, it was soo good with the two personalities within her and...asdkfjalskfdj I just can't describe how much I love it. Hopefully, you can tell. I love how in the end, it was all about Snape and Severus. Ugh, so gorgeous. Thanks for this great story.
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  • From ANON - Lia on July 01, 2005
    I just sat down and read the entire thing! Totaly great! Heart wrenching and ..opposite of heart wrenching *my brain is numb from all the computer screaning*! LOVED IT! :D:D: Very well done!

    Lia
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  • From ANON - Car on June 12, 2005
    LOVE IT
    i was in the mood for a more dark fic, so i started reading this and the story changed perfectly in time with my mood so it ended nice and light. i love your writing style and it flowed really well. a job well done :).
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  • From Arabella on May 26, 2005
    Great story, Ida! Several times throughout, I found myself wiping tears from my eyes -- especially after Treasure was born. Truth be told, I was hoping that the baby was a girl. The thought of Severus running around trying to catch a toddler with long bouncy hair is priceless.

    Anyway, thanks for the great story - it's much appreciated.
    xo
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  • From ANON - angel on May 05, 2005
    ~sniff sniff~i loved your story ~sniff sniff~ i love how you you made sure that out of all the bad thing that happen to hermione and snape .at they came to gettheir inthe end. when my sis tole me about this story i had to read it .she did not tell me much about it .im happy she dont i spent the hole day reading this story and it is hard to said how this story moved me i cant wait to read what els you have made thank you for such a great story.

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anijade on April 02, 2005
    I enjoyed this other than the fact that Harry was forgiven. As a rape survior he didn't deserve it and really didn't show any remorse for mentally destroying his supposed best friend. Sad really. What he did doesn't deserve forgivness much less being invited to the wedding
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